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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey it was awesome update but a short one yaaar n ahil is really angry this time he also shout at imaam 🥱 hope they will be together soon n precap is littel confusing 😕 continue soon n pm me to this account not to my old one 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: siyasharma94

amazing part..
sanam caring nature towards imman..
Hope sahil will togethr soon..
waitng for anther update


Thank you for the read and for reviewing. It means a lot that you're enjoying the story. Keep reading and showing your support. <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Ohhh love how you give us little glimpses from the past. We know what happened but you give the little details which is nice cus it closes everything up together

Ahil feel sad for him. Poor guy has everything but still missing his begun and he's so broken :(

I'm so glad that seher burst. It feels like Sanam is all "only we went through pain. No one understands" common woman people go through pain you gotta move on!

So well written. Loving the way this is heading
Thanks tons


Aww, I'm glad I got you intrigued. Yeah we all feel sad for Aahil, but things are slowly going in the right direction.. You'll see <3

I really wanted to portrait how Seher felt through it all and make Sanam realize that it was not only her who got through the pain. That she is not alone.

Thank you so much, darling! Your reviews are Gold. <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sara7iris

thank you for the pm ...awesome and very sad update...I really love it ...we have cute relation between sanam and imman like mother and her daughter
poor ahil he was so broken like when he discovered the truth ...very sad part ...
I can't wait to read more from you ...pls update soon


Thank you, sweetie ! <3 So happy to know you loved it. So touched to know that people are enjoying the bond Sanam and Imaan has. <3 Will update soon, so do keep the reviews coming <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Res 😉


Unres!

Omg another awesome update I am so glad this came pretty quick! I am always waiting for these updates!! 😆😆

And I'm always waiting for your awesome feedback! 😆 My eyes are always glued on the story whenever I update 😆 (Btw - I'm totally drooling over your dp right now! Like whaaat... ☺️)


She bit her lip. "I like it when you have light stubble on. It suits you well. You look..."
"Handsome? Hot? Edgy??" Aahil smirked.
Sanam smiled cupping his face into her hands. "Like a true Nawab."
...
I guess some things never change. Perhaps they shouldn't.'

My favorite part! This made me laugh, knowing how much we love his stubble 😆 and I also teared cuz of the fact that for Aahil, this is a memory, the past. The separation in your story is even more painful with whats going on in the show. 😭 But yes our Nawab needs thats stubble to look extra sexy, classy and like Sanam said, a true Nawab! Reminded me of many of our discussions ☺️ Now about his hair on the show... If only Sanam was around to do something about that too 😆

Of course!! I could not just let that stubble go! *Gasp* 😆 Aww, I know the separation track is hard to read, but trust me - things are slowly going to to a direction you all will enjoy. *Eenk* I cannot wait to post it.

A special mention to the bond between Imaan and Aahil! I have said it before too but in the scene of her nightmare, it was even more beautiful! ❤️ You did such an awesome job writing the father daughter bond! 👏 If only we got to see such mature yet exciting stories on screen! Its so heartwarming! 😳

You have no idea how much it means to me to read this! I'm going to get teary! *snif snif* I was really emotional when I was writing the nightmare scene. I wanted them to share something, which also made Aahil think about his daughter.. <3

"You wanted power and money, right? Well I'll show you just how powerful this Nawab can be. You haven't manipulated the son! But the Nawab of Bhopal. And I'll see how anyone walks away from it."

This made me shiver! Although Aahil's reaction on the show made sense and I am glad he remained a loyal and good son till the end, his fury is also understandable! I can expect him to go crazy, lose control and become engraged upon finding out about the deception that basically took a hold over his entire life! Brilliantly described ⭐️

This is the kind of reaction I was aiming for - You got it all right ! Hell yeah 😆 But I understand the kidn of reaction we got from Aahil on the show. I thought it was right. He would always stay loyal to his mother despite what she might have done. But I was missing the fury and anger in him. So glad that you enjoyed this. 😳

He couldn't control the burning anger, sadness or devotion and without thinking he reached out and smashed the mirror with one fierce punch which caused a huge sound in the house.

Aahil ignored the pain in his hand that was now bleeding heavily. He kept punching and throwing everything around - Ignoring the red liquor floating on his injured hand.

"Why? I can't live with this pain anymore. I can't!" Tears flowed down from his brown eyes which he couldn't hide anymore.

Aahil's pain 🥺 The way you have wrote it! Omg it was powerful! I could see it happen before me! Its heartbreaking to see him like that 😭😭 The last bit was just so powerful! The imagery, the words, the pain! Aahil as a broken man touched me so much! His pain can be felt by each and every reader and that is why you should be so proud of your work! You make us feel the emotions so strongly! 👏 I reread that part because it was so strong! Gorgeous piece of writing my love 🤗❤️

*Blushing And Turning Into Crimson Red*
Oh, Esha... You're really making me teary. I really don't need all this much praise. It's all because of readers like you who makes me write this way. So a huge thank you to you, darling! <3 You are the sole cause of this much perfection. So give yourself equally love. 🤗

Now the teaser is quite teasing 😉 Especially the first and last line! So excited for the next part, esp Aahil wanting his Begum back! My poor baby suffers each time! 😭 I feel like wrapping my arms around our sexy yet adorable Nawab! But only Sanam reserves that right 😉😆 Lovely update! Probably one of my most favorites, but then they all are, lets just say the entire story is one of my favorites 😉 Hope u do update by this weekend! Waiting impatiently 😉

I know right! I so want to wrap my arms around him and give him the hug he needs. If only... You're right, it's only Sanam who has the right over her Nawab.

And yes, I will be updating tomorrow, but I'm sure you're going to be eager to read. 😉

Once again, Love - thank you for such heartwarming words which I will never ever forget in my entire life. They are imprinted into my soul, because I know how much it means for you guys to read something on SaHil. <3 Much love to you back, my beautiful darling! <3 Love you loads!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sahil333

Awesome chapter Mahu! 👍🏼

I love the relationships and convo's between the siblings...father and daughter...uncle and niece...
Caring Aahil and his love for his daughter is so endearing...
The love everybody has for little Imaan...she has truly captured every ones heart...loved it
Aahil's FB is so painful to read...
Love "the thing" between Sanam and Imaan...these 2 already love each other 😊
Aahil and Sanam...still a long way to go ...sigh! 😔
When Aahil snapped at Imaan I was a little 😲...poor innocent baby...how could he...he better make it up to her, but knowing Aahil he will do it for sure..
And what a thriller teaser for the next update...
Aahil seems mad at Rehaan?
What's going on there! 😲
I just can't wait for the next part...
Thx for the pm 😉


Awww, I so want to hug you right now.. 🤗 Thank you so much for being so supportive and showing how much you enjoy reading this story.

I'm really happy to know that you enjoyed the different conversations. <3 I sure loved writing these parts.

The teaser is all suspense and drama.. 😉 All these questions will be answers tomorrow. I'm really excited to post it. Once again, thanks for reading and reviewing <3

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

wonderful part loved it

imaan is so sweet
saahil both are again in their memories of past
sehaan trying for saahil to patch up
ahil past and feelings are emotional
i hope saahil clear their problems soon
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
sorry for late commenting


Thank you, sweetie! <3 The previous update was a very sad one where I really wanted to show what Aahil has been through. Sanam has met with tears and choices as well in those five years..

I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter. <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: darkice7_12

Great chapter. I loved how Seher/Rehan reminded their siblings they are not the only ones suffering. And how great was it that Sanam made an effort for Imaan? Update soon. Can't wait to read the next chapter.


So happy to know that you enjoyed it! SeHaan are trying with all their might to make their siblings realize their long lost love for each other. Hopefully, things might look a bit brighter then they have before <3 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

Hey it was awesome update but a short one yaaar n ahil is really angry this time he also shout at imaam 🥱 hope they will be together soon n precap is littel confusing 😕 continue soon n pm me to this account not to my old one 😃


Thank you, sweetie! I promise that the next update is very long one. 😉 Aahil has been through a lot, both emotionally and physically - and at some point it got out of hand and the sudden outburst went out on Imaan. He's going through a very delicate time in his life.

Anyways, I do hope you'll peep in tomorrow to read the next chapter 😳
Edited by mahwash22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you for the awesome response for the previous chapter ! You are all so lovely. It really means a lot! <3

I will be updating tomorrow - so do stay tuned! <3

All I can say is, that it's a long chapter and full of suspense, drama and a lot of 😲 moments in future..

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