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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
Luv d title by the way

mene diya h to accha hi hoga. 😆😆

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Amulya

@Amulya9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

oh my goodness.. my favorite writers ek saath..
I'm so happy... phir toh this SS vl b a blast..
shrashti missed ur stories n Aditi update ur another FF too...
OK prologue is interesting...
zoya's emotions r beautifully penned .
OMG yaha subah subah asad asks Zoe fr coffee.. hez not EC...that's good.. I love EC asad though
I'm glad finally he saw her...
don't make me hate Ayan... buddies
continue soon

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

well mission accomplished then!!😉
it was to confuse u all...so that u get hooked
aur waise bhi khali pet kuch samaj nahi aata😆

wah kya talent hai tum dono ka👏👏

correct pet bhar gaya aur dimag chalne laga😆😆

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: -Aditi.

tujhe ayega bhi nahi samjh me 😆

mere talent pe shaq karing😡😡

neeche dekh mera awesome guess😎

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

chalo let me decode in a line🤓

D desired man Zoe is talking about is Asad cuz Naj & Ammi is there but no other Khan's so it can never b Ayaan😆

Asya r married i mean family ki najar main nakli wedding like nakli sagaai cuz Jab Asad subah utha nxt day he said curtains Zoe hataati hai aur usse coffee mangta hai haq se aur phir uske cloths closet main check karta hai😊

agar married na hon toh bhi dono pyaar karte hain but r 2 much egoistic 2 say it...old habit😆

there is some "that day" which was kal ki date 15 Dec.😆 i guess Zoe ko us din KV chodke jana tha jo ki Asya ke beech mutually decide hua tha😉

After knowing about my betrayal & d relationship of selfishness... Zoe aisa kyun soching ye suspense hai😕😆

Rabart wala dialogue bas mystery banane ke liye tha Asya r 2gather🤣

I have 2 win her back made my hopes rise

& Asad finally found her which means lot of anger, passion, love etc.😆

ab batao kuch sahi hai mera guess😳😎

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

& Congratulations both of u 4 new story me happy 😃

Shrahti u might not know me well but i read ur all awesome stories "Milke bhi hum na mile ke time main kam comnt karti thi but last ff UWS main maine jamke comnts kiye the😆

Aur Adu tu nayi story ke chakkar main purani mat bhul jana I want regular Updts of Strings😈

but Shrash isse bach ke rehna badi abusive hai😆 aur jab bhi isse suggestion deti hun about her ff Strings toh isse puri detail chahiye hoti yeh kyun aur kaise hua. I'll pray u'll survive her torture🤣

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

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+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Amulya9
oh my goodness.. my favorite writers ek saath..
I'm so happy... phir toh this SS vl b a blast..
shrashti missed ur stories n Aditi update ur another FF too...
OK prologue is interesting...
zoya's emotions r beautifully penned .
OMG yaha subah subah asad asks Zoe fr coffee.. hez not EC...that's good.. I love EC asad though
I'm glad finally he saw her...
don't make me hate Ayan... buddies
continue soon

hahhha itni tareef bhi mat kar ke hajam na ho😆😆

nazar na laga thu thu

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

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+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: jas91
& Congratulations both of u 4 new story me happy 😃

Shrahti u might not know me well but i read ur all awesome stories "Milke bhi hum na mile ke time main kam comnt karti thi but last ff UWS main maine jamke comnts kiye the😆

Aur Adu tu nayi story ke chakkar main purani mat bhul jana I want regular Updts of Strings😈

but Shrash isse bach ke rehna badi abusive hai😆 aur jab bhi isse suggestion deti hun about her ff Strings toh isse puri detail chahiye hoti yeh kyun aur kaise hua. I'll pray u'll survive her torture🤣

Sali meri izzat ki maiyat nikalegi congo bolne ke baad 😡🤣