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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

That was beautiful but so so...incomplete :-( As all the others who are suggesting, it would be great to see this in an OS or TS...

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Continue karona...

I simply loved it <3

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isha123asya

@isha123asya

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

thanks for the pm .

I liked the drable a lot .

please continue it ...

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

saima has asad died in this?

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Little Api I am sending you PM's...pakka promise I don't know why you are not receiving them

Is you inbox full by any chance.

Continue this 😆

I wouldn't know where to take from here I am already finding it hard to continue with ARL and I started TMI II

I was just bored so wrote this

My brain is malfunctioning

Lol

i know badi api tht u r pming mecso don't be upset...

no it isn't full, it's just 12% full😳

haha, if this is the case n i would ask u continue it or other stories, i will ask u to continue your other stories soon then llz...

lolx😆

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Lovely drabble sis. Aww Zoya repenting 😭.

Like everyone else I too want a continuation but I know you already have so much to do. You concentrate on all that and if you get time then please do write more here 😳

Loved it Sis and love you bahut saara 🤗

MWAH

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Salaam Aapi...well i am quiet confused about what to say about it...as you said it was random with no start and end so i guess...it explains my situation...but as far as writing is concerned it was very good..continue soon...