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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

This was soo beautiful...

I'm not going to ask you to continue as its best the way you left it...

But I will say that maybe I future when you out of holiday mode you could write something longer on the same lines where Zoya is after Asad's forgiveness for misjudging him...

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Aww...dee! It was a lovely drabble. They way you started and ended! Its' definately not the start and end of their story, but the way you wrote. Beautiful!

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Sis,

This was beautiful. It was emotional seeing Zoe repenting her rash actions and piercing parting words to her beloved. Though they were said and done in a tense atmosphere, it doesnt lessen the hurt of hurting and not trusting your love.

I also wish you could continue this and show how Zoe achieved her second chance but know that you have too much on ur plate for now... maybe later.

Love ya Sis!

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Just one word...

Beautiful!!

So beautiful

Lovely description of turmoil...

Just loved it

Perfect drabble

One of d best drabble I Have ever read...

Too good

Awesome

Amazing

Splendid

Spectacular peice of work..

Hey plz cnt na ...plz ...pretty plz..plz

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

simply awesome Sam di

great job as usual 👏👏

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Thanks for PM.

It was Very Interesting and Wonderful SS.😊

The feelings of ASYA(KABHI) so Nicely explained.😊

Please Continue soon,I am waiting here.

___________________________________

(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry.

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

👏... Give her a second chance Aapu 😛

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Amazing...
Luv it...
thx fr the pm...

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Nice one
Beautifully written
Thanks for pm

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

i know badi api tht u r pming mecso don't be upset...
no it isn't full, it's just 12% full😳

haha, if this is the case n i would ask u continue it or other stories, i will ask u to continue your other stories soon then llz...

lolx😆

So,does it mean my High-5 gone waste?(pout)
Aroo I think I've given U a right name😡
do check page:2