OS: His Sparkling Eyes (Note page 10)

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

yes i seriously do want to kill you!!!!🤢

OMG!! after such a beautiful story u killed asad at the end!!!! why????!😭

NOt fair!

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Fari, you know I always loved you, but after reading this, I need to reconsider...

How could you kill Asad???

You do know that you can continue this where Zoya will take care of Asad and nurse his wounds etc...

And are the many other epilogues still being written?

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BurstingBubble

@BurstingBubble

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Res
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Unres

I was soo happy in the beginning

But the ending 🥺

Anyways, it's an amazing OS

Loved it a lott 😳

Loved Asad's Bad-boy character..

And Zoe's excuses... Lol 😆

"If I give that up, people would start pitying me. That is my shield. You don't know how wounded I am beneath it." 💔

"Bye Asad."

"Bye Zoya." The final GoodBye 🥺

The darkness enveloped him completely and the life left his eyes which were sparkling moments ago.

Zoya Farooqi would never find out that his eyes sparkled only while looking at her...😭 *weeps*...But I loved these lines.

Pls could we have a second part for this *pouts*

PS - I read Destinies Intertwined and loved it a lot.

Edited by BurstingBubble - 10 years ago

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Aaahhh!!!!!!

You made me cry!

I don't like that so not giving a comment!

Ha! Revenge!

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

It was So good to see You,Again.😊

Thanks for PM.😊

It was So Lovely and Wonderful OS.😊

ASYA(KABHI) conversation was so nice.😊

Always Keep smile.😊

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Heyyy...Fari...well i don't think that we can forget you...anytime...because...your way of presenting ASYA is very distinctive and great...best example DESTINIES INTERTWINED...hands down one of the most cherised Work on ASYA...on this forum...and coming to this O.S...well both Asad and Zoya were clearly smitten by each other...their convo at the bustand...was great and well written...just when an Already lost Asad started to believe in life and the first step was to it was quit smoking but then life didn't supported him anymore...quite reality and sad though but a well written update...