OS: His Sparkling Eyes (Note page 10) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
no
what u have done
plzz dont do this
plz dont let asad die
plzzz
plzzz
plzzz continue it
pretty please
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
AMAZING OS...👏👏



EVERY SCENE IS MIND-BLOWING...👍🏼👍🏼

ENDING IS NOT GUD...😭😭

PLZ PLZ ONE MORE PART AND MAKE ASYA TOGETHER...⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
That was beautiful...
He deserved a chance for love..

Thanks for updating
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
what the asad died 😲
awesome os
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Just like how you've written something after a long time, I've read something after a long time. And I am so glad I read this OS. It was a soothing piece of work, I just felt at peace while reading this whole thing and most importantly I felt connected to this girl. She's so like me. I too have maths class first in the morning and I am never on time for that class. Most of the times I just don't attend it cuz one can't understand what the teacher is trying to explain after missing a bunch of lessons. Right? 😆
I wonder what I'll do in my exams.
I loved the last sentence. Thanks for writing. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
welcome back<3
loved ur post <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Am i seeing this clearly...i mean...ur pm out of nowhere...and am like...where were you al this time... after reading this...am like...pulling my hairs in frustration...why do you do this...ma poor Asad...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
I really loved the story. The way zoya
and asad were. It is a heartfelt story.
Felt bad fr asad . Poor boy he is.
The concept was really awesome. Though
the end was hmm not so good kind of
sad. Still Preety awesome os
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
What the hell!!!!😲
U posted a story after so long
And you go out and kill asad
NO FREAKING WAY😡
This better have a part 2 .😕
But still m so happy to see u write again 😃
Read ur work after so long
And absolutely loved it 👍🏼
U have no idea how much I miss destines intertwined😭
And u too😳
Plz write it's epilogue soon
Also Update it's hard to let you go
Fari
Welcome back
Missed you
Love,
Marcoe🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
The last line was by far the best.
"Zoya Farooqui would never know that his eyes sparkled only while looking at her."

Asad died... But, the impact of the story lies in his death. Without it, it would have been different. Amazing story.

I don't want to kill you. I want to applaud you for killing Asad... It is difficult to kill a hero but you did. Wow!

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