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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

I cudnt believe that it's you.. 😉
its gud to hav u back..:*
Os was soo good..!!
I loved how it was written. .:)
Thank you for writing again..!! :)

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S.B.

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Posted: 10 years ago

nooo...he died ????
Loved it..but plzzz cant you continue it

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Preeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

That didn't happen! 😵

Good to see you back!🤗

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

WHY DID YOU END IT LIKE THAT?????

YOU HAVE TO GIVE US ANOTHER PART. THEY HAVE TO BE TOGETHER.

Butba well written os. As much as Asad in your story would have been shocked to see the truck, all your readers were too. It was just shocking how a minute they were talking and the next this happened.

Please please please do give UA another part.

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-silentbang-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice os... Zoya's explanation 😆... But end

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Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

Yes yes yes I so want to kill u right now...
Like right now...

Y did asad die :'( :'( :'(
Plz continue it n make them reunite...
Its a request... Plz...

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SR

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Posted: 10 years ago

JUST HOW CAN YOU DO THIS YAAR... 😭 😲

THIS IS TOTALLY UNFAIR... 😭

I WANT ANOTHER PART... PLZ...

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shreya

@1788shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

I want another part too with happy ending. Plzz it's a request.

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 10 years ago

What a surprise dear?!

Its great to have you back here😛

ok about the os:

Loved reading every tiny bite of it❤️

specially

1: I don't have an Abbu. I only have a father. 💔

2: if I give that up people would start pitying me . That's my shield. You don't know how wounded I am beneath it.💔

3: zoya💔 farooqi 😭 would💔 never😭 find out💔 that😭 his eyes 💔sparkled 😭only💔while😭 looking 💔at her😭

I don't know what to say:

How can you right so perfectly and wonderfully?

Or so ...

You know I just want to scream and cry for all those who goes through this situation in reality.

Amazingly written yaar.

just splendid job.

A heart touching os.

Please now write another os on asya an happy and romantic wala.

Eagerly waiting

BTW I am still waiting for epilogue of your asya ff DI.

hope to get too.

waiting

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Kiruthika

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Posted: 10 years ago

I wish i could kill u..

It was going so amazing and then all of a sudden u killed asad.. I m so angry wit u..

But it was so unique nd great story so i forgive u..

P.S : didn't forget completely.. Still remember u..

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