OS: His Sparkling Eyes (Note page 10)

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

It was really beautiful and I guess not all the story should finish happily.

The end was sso shocking that I read it 3 times to know if I understand well.

It was really brillant and really sad 👏

I guess it's better for Zoya to never know about his feelings 😭

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

I knew he was going to die. :-|

Anyway it had been ages to have had read your work and yayayayayaa you did and that was such a pleasure to find your pm in my inbox.

Hope u are feeling better after killing off ur male lead.

Sadistic satisfaction. . I get that.

:-|

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Oooh! Deep...

But wish she could have seen the sparkle :-(

Nice OS!!

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

fariii 🤗
i just about danced when i saw your pm and had a huge smile while reading it until the very end...why? why would you make me cry? 😭 itne dino baad likha aur asad ko... i can't even write it in comment 😭

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Mehreeeen

@SurbhikiPankhi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

That was beautiful! :') I love angst! ^.^ poor Asad tho! -sigh- I wonder what Zoya's reaction would be on finding out he died.

Lovely piece of work! <3

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wow something written by you after a long time.

Let me tell you that DI was n is one of my fav FF. I just had a great time reading it.

N about this loved every part of it except the end. Actually I don't like sad endings n then here it was asad dead. So not done.

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Indianbuddy

@Indianbuddy

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Nooo omggg continue this! Please this actually made my cheast ache with sadness! I loved this os so much! Please turn it into an SS or FF!!! Please this is such a fabulous start! Such a good writer! Please please continue

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bindasss

@bindasss

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Omg!! You're back!! I absolutely love your stories!! Please continue to write more stories! I've missed them so much!! Thanksss! (:

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Naa I am in no mood to kill you after reading this 😆

It was different from all the romantic works still it was wonderful

Can we have a continuation please ?? 😛

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

hey fari missed ur works so much i know u don't know me very well but i am a big fan of ur stories this os was so beautiful but why the hrll did you killed asad i can't imagine him dead i want you to continue this n give us a happy ending like the accident was zoya's nightmare plzz *puppy face* *fluttering eyelids *

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