SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
yes yes bohat ache ❤️
woohowoh woohon
zara se ... Love ths

ZARA SA song Dono movies ka best tha..

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#802

Read this part Now Aapi..
Sorry jabse spamming karr rahe hai...but update abhi padha maine...
The Update was good and well written...and i don't think it was the Worst...it was just stucked for soo long...and a new concept at that so no worries U did really well and also justified its ending...
I liked this part..
Continue soon with Other Updates Aapii..

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#803

Awesome update
They decided to live together & fight against evils. Asad proposed Zoya in front of their family & she agreed. They took blessing from commando. It was wonderful story sister. Thanks for pm

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#804

Saima it was a nice story. . Very different to your usual writings but i still a wonderful read.

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
Res for CBP, bhai's , gowtu, aseelah api, sum, sukhi, binnu, srash, trish, anopama, shama and all bhai's

Hey Sis,

The 8th chapter was amazinggg. Im soo glad they finished that vile man Tariq n his men. They deserved a torturous death for putting so many innocent lives in danger n for killing the people who were once their own.

I dont think Asad could have lived with seeing Zie get hurt. He gave her a chance to beat the crap iut of dat guy n take the revenge for all the wrongs he made her do but he took the bullet for her. Thats just natural instinct, to protect her.

I really liked it. Finally the bad lost to good.

Loveee

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: MayurChan
RES for Choco , Nims , Tehs & All Of Us..who form this BACCHA PARTY gang..jiske GanG members ki list kisi ke paas nhi...hahaahha

Thankx for res Mayur :)

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Hey Sis,

Another beautiful journey with you comes to an end and it was worth the time it took for its completion. Even with it being a different plot and ur first attempt at writing from 1st pov, it was extremely good. You had me on the edge, biting my nails n then crying for Asya. In this last one, you made me feel sooo happy for them. At last they got their due share of joys n love.

You showed how much they meant to the other by how easily Asad's confusion n hesitation washed away when Zoe proclaimed her love n the desire to be with him. The proposal scene was soo sweet.

I dont think it was bad at all. It was very well penned down. I loved it n this whole story.

Thank you for sharing it with us. Looking forward to more of your beautiful work.

Love lots Sis..

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#807

Beautiful update Aapu... Everything is well that ends well..

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#808

amazing story & amazing end

Loved it dear

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
Res for CBP, bhai's , gowtu, aseelah api, sum, sukhi, binnu, srash, trish, anopama, shama and all bhai's

Thanks Affu for the Res.

Sis an amazing end to an equally amazing story. Such a thriller this one was. No one could guess what was going on in Zoya's mind. The intensity of their love, the faith that they had in each other, though it did waiver a little was a treat to read.

Sis. You are an absolutely amazing writer and I love your style.

My super star ⭐️⭐️

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#810

This is finally complete, Saima do you remember a certain fiction that still is up in the air, or am I mistaken. All I remember is the intense hate, that was soo captivating.

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