SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#641

chap 6...

so zoya s playing double game...n tat kiss she conyed something to asad during tat bt wat????

n she coded somethng to ayesha...its getting sooo intresting chap by chap...

brillintly wrtien aapi...

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#642

finally chap 7

first of al...ur sooo brillint writer aapi seriously...wat a griiping part it was...

zoya inserted a key into his mouth during tat kiss,,,,i m blown wit this revelation👏👏

so there commando,haider,humera al r alive...

tariq🤬he s beyond disgusting...

asad successfully made his way into meeting n won tooo great...loved asyas little signs...

nd last part wat was tat😲setup how tariq came to knw abt tat???

and tat tariq trigger did it hit asad😲

continue very soon aapi

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#643

Awesome update...
Happy to know that Zoya is innocent
Do continue soon..
😊

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Ours

Thanks Nims 🤗

Sis this update... I was so hooked onto it Sis. Why did you leave it at a cliffy 😲😲

I know AAK ko kuch nahi hua hoga, you already know we all love happy endings so you wouldn't kill them. But who pulled the trigger n kisko lagi goli 😲. Did Zoya finally kill tariq??

Loved how you got all that lip reading thing here and then the reason why she'd kissed him the way she had was so clear. Loved this while update Sis, it was so well planned and so well written. Brilliant work Sis absolutely mind blowing 👏👏

Love you my super star⭐️⭐️

🤗

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#645

Interesting and Intriguing..Well Written...👏

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#646

Love it

It was amazing

So all the misunderstanding clear

Oh no hope asad will be safe

Thanks for pm

update soon

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#647

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊

Zoya saved all of them,it was so Nice.😊

Zoya Letter Part was so Nice.😊

All the Misunderstandings towards Zoya were clear,I Likes it.😊

Asad(KSG) came to save Zoya,it was so Interesting.😊

I hope nothing will happen to Asad(KSG).

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

__________________________________

(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#648

Nice update

So all is cleared abt zoya

She couldn't be bad

Aww Asad feels guilty

She has always love him

So now the fight is on the free her and commando

Continue soon

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#649

OMG! Did he hear the pulling of his trigger or Zoya's on the shooter :-( I hope its the latter!

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#650

Sam di u r pro in writing suspense joner too now😉😃

Kafi time Zoe ke actions ne sabko confuse kiya😆

but thank good she was proved innocent 4 Asad's sake

what a super smart plan I must say a key exchanged in a kiss in front of all & no1 doubted😆

She had everything planned but end main those gadbad ho gayi but I guess it would b Zoe in d end who shot Taquir 😆😉

Zoe's letter was very emotional😭 wanted 2 hug her & Asad too felt guilty

Loved d 2nd half when Asad went in black bzaar that was very well written wid so much detail & suspense I could literally felt transported in that scene😛

Brilliant work Sam di👏👏

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