SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED - Page 63

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Siss,

U did not just stop there. Im goin to cry. Why did u leave it hanging there? Seriously, now im goin to keep thinkn of scenarios that can take place after this scene, though im sure my ideas wudnt b as creative or innovative as yours.

Siss, honestly this chapter was beyyondd amazing. It had me on exge the entire time i was reading it. The thrill, the suspense, action, gosh everything had me captivated.

Last time also i commented on how much i admire Zoe n here she made my opinion of her dat much stronger. She really is one strong, fiercely loving and loyal of her loved ones. I hope she stays out of danger.

The way she left clues n keys for her family to reach her n put herself on risk in trying to save them was amazing. Her letter was so heart warming. Im hlad Assd now knows she isnt against them. I know he feels bad for even doubting her but then the circumstances were made to b like that, so..

Zoe can hold the attention of a whole room full of males plus order them around too. I love her guts. The way she used to choose the partner for the weapon deals was cool. But what happened in the end? I hope its the media n services Ayesha called n dey r successful in freeing Commado n AsYa from here.

Waiting eagerly to know wat happens next.

Sis, u know na how i run away from suspense n cliffys but i had to read this one, cudnt help it plus choco promoted it really well, making me anxious to read.

Love you lots Siss.
Edited by Rarepearl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res for bacha party and suearmaniac and all bhais
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Posted: 9 years ago
res 😃
Very very interesting chapter, and as I felt she was innocent 😃. This is Zoya afterall, but hat off to you, to put a doubt inside of readers about her, it's for sure a talent of the writer.
And my prediction was good (for a change) she gave him a key where she revealed everything to them. The confession in the letter was so heart warming and I can understand Asad's feeling to feel guilty for doubting about her, it just means that she played perfectly her role.
I love the way they exchanged just my reading lips, it used to be one of my favorite game, to read on the lips, that was really brillant.
zoya was loyal from the beginning but she was under pressure by this Tariq, I must say that part was beautifully written and really intriguing. I was and still scared for her safety. She was aware that she was going to be killed but at least, she will protect them till she was still breathing.
That why I feel that the bullet in the end, was from Zoya's gun I think she is the one who shoot to protect Asad. She can't die, the story needs her still and she will be the one who will save commando and the others. this is what i want to happen but I guess I will have to wait 😃
Nice story, nice update and can't wait to read the next.
Edited by radadolcevida - 9 years ago
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Very nice
Update so tariq is the person who behind all this
Update ASAP
Loads of love 😊
Edited by azsumay - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👏
So commando is alive n tariq has him 😲
Zoya's letter is simply awesome
N lastly the twist is 😲
Continue soon 😊
Edited by shailu123 - 9 years ago
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so zoya is not bad as we thought her to be..
she has her own difficulties..
nd asad and others were smart to get her clues fast.
awesome update. .
this is so interesting and gripping..
but who was shot at the end..??
I couldn't make that out..
Edited by cutie15 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
They reached station & read the letter which Zoya left for them. Asad wanted to reach there & protect Zoya & commando. He was relieved to see Zoya fine. She recognised him by his lip reading. He won the bid but Tariq got to know abt trap. He killed three & fire towards asad. Curious to know what happened next. Hope he & Zoya will be ok. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its awsm api..total thrilling...
Finaly the suspense revealed.haira is alive & tariq is behind all this.
Love zoya's attitude & the way she gv clues 2 thm-fantastic..
Omg!tariq gonna shoot asad!hp nothng lk tht hapen.
Lv the updt.thnks 4 pm.waiting 4 nxt part nw
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It was an awesome part...

It's getting more and more interesting and intriguing now...
Thriller, mystery going up with each chapter.

I know u will not let anything happen to Asad...
But still the cliffs end😡

N now I know there will be a long break...
Edited by sweet_tehs - 9 years ago

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