SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: rajsmi
The adrenaline rush in this story is passing on to me too :-) Feel the thrill and fright! Hope they are all safe...

Lol

Good to hear

Hope I can keep it going 😉

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
loved the update...
the way Asad n zoya met was so sweet...
ayaan n humaira r dead...
and asads instinct says its nt commando... btw whoz L in 'HAL'...
plz continue soon

Good question

Haven't thought of the L yet...actually haven't thought ahead at all 😆

Thank u for liking it 😊

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: sweetluck
Interesting...

Asya meet was Awesome as well as Zoya's entry... 👏

if not commando who is their another enemy..??

plz write Long updates from next tym... 😳 😉 😆

Thank u

I can only try...write as much as I can fit in with my crazy life...lol

Enemy??...hmmm will have to wait and see

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Salaam Saima Aapi...sincerely i don't know why but after and the way Zoya indirecly indicated Asad to sit behind her on bike...that gesture and after that...left me in awe...and i can't process anything else after that...just in love with them already...atleast here there is no long lost love thing...loved this update...i know they will face big problems ahead but we and they are prepared for it...continue soon.

Aaah thank you so much Little Bhai (hope I can call you that)

No long lost love or any drama as such...a fast paced story with a little love and a little action

Lol

😊

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: sasir
awesome
emotional
loved it
plz update soon

Thank you so much Sasir

Am glad u liked it 😊

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Superb update!!!
Loved it!!
AsYa met!!
they are being traced!!!
Why us dat i m finding something fishy in Zoya's attitude!!!
Aapu kuch gabdad hai kya?

Thank you so

Hope you are well

Wow

You seemed to be the only me who picked up on that lol

All will become apparent

But

I have to write it first 😆

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: jas91

Aloo🤗

Sam di its so thrilling story
Zoya's entry was awesome
Emotional reunion
they started planing but there spot is tracked
suchi bada scary sa story hai
I just wish they's wine in d end😃 as u told me in last comnt😳
Btw i also think Comando is not d one behind d hunt😉
& Suzy ka scene was so funny lovely girl😆

Thank u so much Jas

Am glad u liked it, especially Zoya's entry

So u agree with Asad

Let's see if he is right or not 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Finally They All Meet...

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...😃

Thank u so much for liking it 😊

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27
Can this be any more beautiful??
God! Can a mere kiss be so intense? The first one had my heart beat crazily.
That little scene of AsYa was lovely.
Wonderful!
oh! A mystery i find here.
May be, it's not commando. It makes sense. Why would he want to kill the angels he trained all his life?

Can't wait for more.
Update soonish!
Love.

Aaaw

Thank u so much Anee

Am so glad you liked it

Lol...just a little one...maybe Asad is right 😉