SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Superb update!!!
Loved it!!
AsYa met!!
they are being traced!!!
Why us dat i m finding something fishy in Zoya's attitude!!!
Aapu kuch gabdad hai kya?

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jas91

@jas91

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
res for affu, yashu, gowtu, liyu, nidz, nino, jas, hina, amu, shona, aseelah api

Aloo🤗

Sam di its so thrilling story

Zoya's entry was awesome

Emotional reunion

they started planing but there spot is tracked

suchi bada scary sa story hai

I just wish they's wine in d end😃 as u told me in last comnt😳

Btw i also think Comando is not d one behind d hunt😉

& Suzy ka scene was so funny lovely girl😆

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Finally They All Meet...

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Can this be any more beautiful??
God! Can a mere kiss be so intense? The first one had my heart beat crazily.
That little scene of AsYa was lovely.
Wonderful!
oh! A mystery i find here.
May be, it's not commando. It makes sense. Why would he want to kill the angels he trained all his life?

Can't wait for more.
Update soonish!
Love.

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: yumna.imad
R for Chocoberry Di , Bano , Mishumpty dumpty (Ankie) , asyaarshilover, Niyu and Sunny😳

Thank you Yumna 🤗 for always Resing a spot for me.

Sis that was just mind blowing. I told you earlier too that this one is no less than a Hollywood movie and am sure my statement was proved right with the kind of feedback you got for this one. I just love it and can't wait for you to update it. Its very gripping.

Its so good to read how they still are together after so many years of separation. Oh what adrenaline rush to read about Zoya on a bike. Sis I love bikes, have had too many rises on it with my then boyfriend now husband 😆. Oh I can feel the rush as Asad must have felt seeing her zipping on it. Just loved it.

The inelegance that they have is the reason behind the threat to their lives. Am not scared as I know they will manage whatever comes their way. They are too smart for anyone.

Oh sis Asad Zoya moments were so well written. The pent up emotions of 15 years was just so palpable.

Loved this update too and can't wait for the next update.

Mwah sis you are the best ⭐️

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Superb.. 👏 👏
loved their meeting. .!
It was soo good..:)
They r soo awesome. .:)
Loved the update dii..:*
Thank u soo much..:)

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

What was that even!!

How amazingly sexy and sweet was their reunion. KISS AND ALL THAT!!

Love love loooveee!!!

Oh Zoya in all black and bike!??!!

GAHHH!!

SEXAYH!

Love!

What next!!

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Thanks for PM.

It was Very interesting Part.😊

Zoya met Asad(KSG) ,it was so nice.

Asad(KSG) and Zoya conversation and Love moments were so nice.😊

ASYA(KABHI) love confession was so nice.😊

The meeting part was so nice.😊

They wanted to separate and will meet in Delhi,it was so nice.😊

At the end of Part,ASYA(KABHI) kiss was so cute.😳

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry.

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Wonderfull n amazing...
luv it...
fabulous...
All of them are reunited...
asad n zoya told each ither about their feelings...
mindblowing...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...