SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: foreverhafsa
yay! they found zoya now can't wait to read what happens next and when zoya and Asad come face to face update soon and also update ARL please with cherry on top thanks haha 😊

Thank you so much

Will be updating all the stories today including ARL 😊

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: anopama
Love the update
Saima u always amaze me as a writer
In tpm I go crazy for tht asad and zoya and the way they fought for what they wanted and believe in
In arl I am so getting hooked on it now and feeling bad for asad and hoping zoya get her happiness
Now in tmi 2 is like wow loving this new story can't wait for AZ01&AZ04 to come together
Love the last line she is the girl tht rules the thing tht is keeping him alive his heart
Nice to see the family reunion Ayesha is too cute and dangerous
So they plan to eliminate commando bfore he does Payback is a bitch
Oh asad is over joy zoya is found
A fashion designer love the name of her company
Continue soon

Thank you so so much Anopama

Your feedback always leaves me smiling from ear to ear

Thank you for always supporting my work

Lots of love to you 😊

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: elenaksgian
awesome
cant wait to see asya meeting

Thank you 😊

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Superb update!!! Asad met Zack and Ayesha!!! They are trying to find Zoya!!! Commando is Alive and hunting them!! Only six are alive. 4 are these who are remaining 2?? Zoya a fashion designer!!! Waiting for Zoya' s side of story!!! hope no dark past except they were trained to kill and killed people!!

Hey

Hope u r well

Thank you for liking the update

No...no dark past

They trained as assassins and that's exactly what they did

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: sweetluck
OMG..This is so so so interesting...👏👏👏...
I loved it...😃

Superb...!!!

PLzz..Update soon...😳😳😆

Thanks for pm..😃

Thank you so much, am glad u liked it 😊

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome part dear👏😊

Asad met Zack n Ayesha😉

Whod hell is dis Commando? Pehle sabko sikhaaya aur ab maarna chaahta hai😡.

Loved d moments between Asad, Zack n Ayesha😃

Ayesha has finally found Zoya😊

I think ZAZA stands for Zoya-Asad-Zack-Ayesha😃

I hope Zoya is not selfless, mahaan n forgiving who vl forgive dat Commando😕

Update soon n PM me😃

PS: 1. Which actors sud we assume as Zack and Ayesha?

2. If Zoya is a fashion designer then why can't Asad know her as d name Zoya Farooqui n find 4m his source if its her? Has she changed her name to protect herself?

Thank you so much Juhi

Commandos story will unfold later

Yes ZAZA does stand for their names...it's how Ayesha recognised it was her

To answer your questions

1. I have no idea lol...I don't think of them as actors...such characters in my head

2. You will find out in next update

😊

Have sent you buddy request

So will definitely PM you for this one

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice update
Zack & Ayesha arrived & met asad. They informed asad abt zoya. Ayesha saw the company name & recognised it. ZAZA was nice. Waiting for their meeting & next plan soon. Thanks for pm

Thank you so much Asif

Hope u have been well

How did your nieces party go...bet she was spoilt with lots of presents...which she totally deserved lol

Best wishes 😊