SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED - Page 17

Originally posted by: pumpkin.honey

Wow.. Js no words to describe how good it is
The 3 of dem met.. Family reunion
Commando is alive n wanna kill dem.. Bt Y, what harm dey r to him now
N oopsiee my zoya is finally in d picture, shez traced n is a fashion designer.. Can't wait fr d moment when dey all will meet, specially asya
After so so sooo long
Plz do bring her in a person soon

Originally posted by: jas91

Oh man Sam di what an updt👏

Its just nail biting till d end😉

Right mix of suspense & thrill👏👏

how do u manage 2 make me love ur works😊

So Zack Ayesha came back cuz they found clue of Zoya😊

Comando is alive & is killing all i m dead scared 4 this family

Ayesha had found Zoya & they r happy 4 reunion😃

I m gonna read this story holding my breadth😆

wish they hunt Comando instead & kill him 😡

This time i m attached all 4 of them & will feel sad if anybody will die.

I pray 4 there safety lolz look Sam di stories main bhi kitni crazyily involve ho jati hun main😆

btw forgot 2 mention loved his scene wid Suzy😛

Originally posted by: p_s05

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

"There was no measuring of how fast my heart beat, I found myself struggling to breathe Zack and Ayesha were coming, and they knew where Zoya was. After 15 years my family were going to come back together again."

The reunion of his family - Wonderful, that scene was soo palpable. I forgot to state this after the first chapter but its more appropriate now, another Zack, who is similar to "The Perfect Misfit's" one, this characters' really charming!

'Zack...if Zoya had been living here in this very city...why has she never come to me?'

Zoe has been in the same city, I guess she doesn't remember the past, thus the "mark of innocents" shall be rediscovered.

"...for Zack his sister was finally found for me, well it was the girl that dominated the one thing that kept me alive, my heart."

This is so exhilarating!

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Wow awesome part

Well this story is really making me excited in every part

Excited for zoya's entry

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next part

Continue soon

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Wow Saima i am so excited to read further

Its so thrilling dear

I love it so so much

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Aww...that was lovely!

Okay so the commando's alive. And he's finding and killing them. Ahh! It's impressive that the 4 out of 6 are from the same group.

Zoya , a fashion designer. ZAZA..aww...as in Zoya-Asad-Zack-Ayesha! I'm fangirling over their bonding!

Zack-Zoya
Ayesha-Asad
(Bro-sis) bond and the criss'cross, their love interest. Awww!

Beautiful.
I'm in love with this!

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

It was awesome don't feel bad...

But I actually like it a bit more than the previous TMI 😛

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM.

It was Very Interesting part.

Zack and Ayesha found Zoya,it was very Interesting.😊

The feelings of Asad(KSG) for knowing about Zoya was so nicely explained.😊

Commando was alive and killings one by one,it was sacred.

Zoya was Fashion designer,it was very nice.

Waiting for Zoya's Entrance and her story.😊

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry.

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

Wonderfull n fabulous...
luv it...
they found her...
Its very interesting...
beautifully written...