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ChipChipiBhaalu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: Linsie

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happy moment turn sad...

big test for asya...

the evil won this round...

what tragic moment 😭 😭

Dis is d most painful part I have ever written. Asad n Zoya have defeated their enemies Tanveer, Imraan, Haseena, Chand, Akram but dis time their enemies r more stronger. I was inspired to write dat horrible scene 4m d serial Paanch but dat scene was much brutal than dis. Also, d heroine was not a karate expect so she cud even defend herself 4m 2 girls n 3 boys torturing her brutally. Here, its 7 against 1 but Zoya cud defend herself till some point but still she lost in d end. GaZiaRin played a smart game fooling Zoya by using Asad's cell.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: Linsie
it is tough one...to deep 👏 👏 you did well

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ChipChipiBhaalu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Update

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Posted: 10 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: MayurChan

A Very Good & Well Written part... 👏 Thank u😊

This new Zoya is different & interesting... 😊 She always gives lecture to Asad😆

And it is logical that you can't get comfortable with a stranger just after knowing him as you Husband...it will take time... 😳 I am not Gul to show Zoya all of a sudden blabbering n clinging to Asad like she did wid Sanam. But as I said in d note, I changed my mind a little on how to show Zoya. Earlier I planned dat Zoya will come to know a later cuz they had been ever intimate but I changed it by showing dat Zoya brings up d topic as she thinks they may have intimate many times. She is prepared to be pregnant at any time. Dis sounds more logical. She has accepted Asad as her husband cuz her heart says dat he is a nice guy. She respects him but she will take time to love him like earlier as she never believed in him but she will not hurt someone if he truly loves her. So, she too will fall for Asad again😳😊.

Continue soon.. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice update
Asad prank with Zoya & she threaten him. She was shocked to know that she was married & even more shocked when she got to know abt asad. Liked their talk. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

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Zoya lectured Asad so much😆

Zoya was always mature but some of her antics wen she was too loud n messy made her luk immature. She talked abt intimacy cuz she thinks dat they were physically intimate as everyone says dat they loved each other very much. She even thinks of getn pregnant at any time.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: SUCHARITA2014
Nice updt juhi plz updt soon ans pm me plz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: Surish
I think that Zoya will regain her memory soon

Zoya can't gain memory so soon but there will be nice moments between AsYa😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: nilusoni
awesome update
asad's flirting with zoya in market wow
omg zoya is fully insulting asad and total opposite now
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

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Asad wanted to see how Zoya will react😉

She reacted like any girl wud do but Asad got so much shocked😲

Zoya has turned like old Asad in some ways😆