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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#801

Heyyy...Anjali.. 😃
Thanx for the P.M...
Well it was a fantabulous and mindblowing update... 👏 👏 ⭐️
Sooo...the proposal at the cliff in the jungle was a well planned and beautifully written part...i did liked the words in the song..⭐️
Then the family all teasing and giving awww...moments to ASYA... 😆
Loved the update...
Continue soon..

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#802

Yippee he proposed her... It was a beautiful confession... Loved it so much

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#803

Wow. Wow. Wow. Proposal, mind blowing sex, Nikhat's mehendi!!!!!

Brilliant update!

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#804

Wow..!!
This was great..!
There r so good together..
nd so much cuter..
Loved the update..:)

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DraPpleShipOP

@minakrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#805

OKAY! Going to comment.. long one!

Gimme a moment... 😆

Next page>>>

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DraPpleShipOP

@minakrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#806

Haaye.. This chapter was so dreamy! Loved the entire update to bits! ❤️

The date under the starry sky in the meadows... ❤️ Love. ❤️ Asad singing for Zoya.. 😳 And that song you chose was perfect! ⭐️ THE OFFICIAL PROPOSAL HAS BEEN MADE! 🥳 ❤️ AH, the family is so so so happy for the couple! 😃 I'm happy too! 😳

"Plus, we don't want a huge wedding, just a small one." She smiled looking at me.

"With the Taj Mahal as the backdrop." I said smiling at her, and her smile widened even more, if that was possible.

And that's so happening! This man, i love. ❤️

EEEKKKSS.. Nikhat's wedding preps in full flow.. 😃 Asad is getting on Zain so bad! 🤣

That morning scene was so so hawt. ☺️ Mr. Lawyer is gonna be late to work everyday if this continues. 🤣

Asad and Zoya decorating the house for the function eh? 😳

"I asked you two to decorate the house, not to decorate Zoya's neck." Phuphi said handing Asad another box of flowers and I swear I probably looked worse than Tamatar did with how hot my face felt. Asad sheepishly nodded as his mother who walked away with a smile on her face.

I SWEAR I BURST OUT LAUGHING! 🤣

And this story is coming to an end soon... But I want to read something new soon! 😃

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#807

wow tis is amazing n fabulous...

luv it...

wonderfull...

asad propose n zoya accept...

asad n zoya are so cute...

nikhat n rehaan are so sweet...

zain is so adroable...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#808

Love the update

Wow wow wow

Knew Asad was gonna propose

So beautifully done love the song

Omg phupi is so happy she is crying

Can't believe they all sat till 5 in the morning to see them come backlog nikhat is a bridelzilla

Rehan could have been dead meat haha throwing darts to make choices

Asad is too cute just sitting having fun off the boys

So just a small wedding with the taj in the backdrop

Oh zoya u made the man had to pay fine staying in bed with u

So bad

Can't beleive his is coming to an end I will cry

So sad 😭

Continue soon

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

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Posted: 10 years ago

#809

Loved the update!!! it was beautifully written. AHH he proposed to her! Love the song btw one of favorites! NOO this story cant be ending?!? Thanks for the PM and please continue to write more stories on AsYa I just love your stories😊

PS: I just came back from somewhere and the song was playing on the radio and the first thing that came to my mind was Asad singing and his proposal haha

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#810

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

Chapter 28:

"...It would mean that I am home a lot more, I don't want our kids to feel like I am not around, you know?"

""Yes, our four kids."

"Three, we agreed on three."

"You said you'd give birth a maximum of three times, we can have twins." He said."

Asad taking Zoe to that scenic landscape and sharing his changing career intentions and all that talk of babies, like seriously what's this guy made off?... I loved the fact he doesn't indulge in cliche romance, the distinctiveness makes this all the more enthralling for both Zoe and the readers'.

Chapter 29:

"Why the f**k are you so perfect for me?"

Aww! "Thinking out loud" is now their song, and he sung/played it to/for her. You write him soo fluffy and idealistic yet passionate and sexy, like how do you accomplish this feat, ah the imagination of ardent romantics'. ❤️

And he proposed!

That was the perfect culmination to their short escape for life. The unstoppable tears and smiles were so beautifully depicted and natural.

""Are you Zoya?" I asked looking at them and they both shook their head, a confused look on their faces. "Then no." There was only one woman I would sing that song for."

How does this guy accomplish perfection?...I think I have raised this question many times, since you began this fiction!...You write him perfectly perfect!

"Sexy Time" is always charming!

"I asked you two to decorate the house, not to decorate Zoya's neck."

This women! I Love Her!

Edited by p_s05 - 10 years ago