|AsYa FF: Clueless| [Thread 2/3 - Chapter 15 to 29] (Complete) - Page 13

Hey beautiful person!

Okay, so I drive home earlier than usual this evening, slump onto the living room couch with a pile of bags at my feet [because I received an email notification on my way home] waiting for the rest of the occupants to stride in and hoping I don't have to explain why I'm smiling to my iPad, ignoring civilization and a pinging cell phone... Aww! this update had me smiling and blushing for the most part of it, your AsYa's just damn adorable - Period!

I live on the obsessive and little crazy side of life and cannot help but pay attention to finer details that make this read freaking fabulous just like Zoya Farooqui.

"...the weight of his arm on my stomach felt wonderfully comforting."

"...stray over the little space in his right one."

Of course this leaves very little to the readers' imagination where the male specimen in question is concerned but the thought process of adding these elements are commendable where the authors concerned.

"Asad stepped out of the bathroom, in grey sweatpants and a black t-shirt causing my eyes to widen, because damnnn, he looked hot. The shirt stretched across his chest and arms but was loose around his stomach and I don't know why but it was just so sexy."

*gushing* You deliver him as if he were smouldering dark chocolate, full stop! This character has seriously had me question my feministic ideologies for a reallyyy reallyyy longgg time.

They were grocery shopping and shall be cooking together. *sighhh*

Imran truly is a pathetic human, the vile trash he spewed leaves no room for redemption where this character is concerned and his partner happens to be Tanveer, why oh why, are we so unfortunate? The demons of the past never seem to settle. *LOL*