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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Lovely update dear
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

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intheworld

@intheworld

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Hi anji i love this update & i think i fell in love for your asad. Plz update soon &plz plz plz pm me

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StonerGirL

@StonerGirL

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

UPPPDAAATTTEEE 😆 SOON-ISH 😛

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

fabulous...

mindblowing...

luv it...

zoya is being tease by nikhat n najma together with dilshad...

asad n zoya are so cute...

luv all the cute momets between them...

beautifully written...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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canoodle

@canoodle

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Well hello again!

Chapter 16 amazed me like every other one, it's so cute, I don't understand how you do it. I smile so much while I read your stuff that people think I am deranged. And your writing flows so well, what exactly are you doing in university Anjali? You can be the next J.K Rowling!

I absolutely adore Zoya's subconscious, it reminds me of Lizzie McGuire and the cartoon, that's how I imagine it.

The Ahmed-Khans are adorable, I love how you manage to add really cute interactions with them in almost every chapter.

The grocery store part was so cute, I could so imagine it in my head and it made me grin until Imran, he seems like a total douche, and Tanveer is with him 8_-_8They deserve each other.

"Stop being a smartass."

"I can't help it." I laughed.

"No food for you mister!" She said trying to push me but I had other plans. She let out a little squeal of surprise as I pulled her into the space between the cart and my body, placing my arms on the handle of the cart on either side of her. She was so adorable with her wide eyes as she looked at my face and then my arms, almost as if she was wondering how she got where she was.

"I am going to have to hold you hostage here or I won't make it out of this store alive."

"Maybe you shouldn't be so mean." She said, sounding a little breathless making me smile.

"I tease you because you wrinkle your nose really cutely and then you get this adorable look on your face because you aren't really mad and I love it." I said placing a kiss on her nose. I watched as a smile took over her face before she masked it.

I loved this bantering! I am still learning how to use IF so I am not sure if this is going to post correctly and stuff because I keep getting error messages. 8_-_8

But I am really looking forward to your next update, and now I can even bother you in person, watch me find you around campus and nag you about it. That sounds kind of creepy, but I have a feeling you'll laugh.

-Meera

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ZoyaAsadKhan

@ZoyaAsadKhan

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

awesome update
loved it :)

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StonerGirL

@StonerGirL

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

UPPPDAAATTTEEE!!!!!!!!! 😛

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Amazing babe!

Seriously you need to start writing books and having them published!

You are just plain good!

Fabulous!

Glad to see Zoya being independant and headstrong!

Oh!

And all the cheesy fluff was just too good!

I'm still drooling!

Now get back with an update real soon!

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#149

i cant stop reading chapter 16

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Aishwarya

@pumpkin.honey

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Hey where have u gone dear.. Y aren't u updating.. U r 1 speedy writer so plz stick to dat title of urs only.. So update a bigg chapter n make me super duper happy.. Waiting so madly n badly