New ASYA OS : Life's Second Chance - Page 8

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Mine n Sis

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Hey Choco,

I'll start by saying thank you for the dedication. I know we are in the no zone but still I will this time. It honestly means a lot lot more than I can let you know. Thank you sooo much Choco, am touched.

Coming to the Os. Well it was an absolute treat to read it. Mangalpur is a very dear theme to me and the way you've put it here made me relive all the memories of those beautiful old days. What made your work all the more special to me were the moments you created here between AsYa. Truly beautiful and heart touching.

The first paragraph itself was enough to catch my attention. That indescribable pull between the couple and the feelings that were always present but blur and dormant. This one incident cleared the mist from all of the emotions and made them realise what they've come to mean to each other.

It was so nice to see them working along without bickering in a comforting silence.

The way Asad's heart dipped when Zoe moved away from him to change and how he now accepted to himself that he wouldn't be able to survive without her.

It was so normal for Zoya to experience all those emotions. Choco, I really appreciate and love how you portrayed them. This was something that the serial missed. They had shown them go back to avoiding and fighting. I agree, some people won't open up so soon but they never showed a scene like this, where Zoe would relive the torment she had been through nor did they make her think what would have happened if Asad was late in reaching her. So I loved this part. It looked natural.

The way he kept her comfort and health at priority. How he consoled her, assured her of his presence, promised to protect her with his life was just soo heart touching.

Oh the confession. My, my. I am a goner. Seriously, Asad can kill anyone with his looks but his rarely expressed feelings beat everything and everyone. I could feel his hesitation and apprehension as he declared his feelings. But his words were so heart warming, the way he told her that he doesn't know the time or moment when she came to mean everything to him, even more than his own life and now he wanted her stay by his side forever. Aww I wanna go huggg him. I lovee him.

Zoya took her sweet time to respond to him, killing poor thing's hope and crushing his heart. Lol. But it was nice to hear her reciprocate his feelings and explain to him, how he was the only one in whose arms she felt whole and safe.

All in all it was an Aaa-mazing story. Loved it to bits.

Am looking forward to the fully faltu. Hope you complete that soon too.

Infinite love and tighttt wala hug.

Originally posted by: mona12345

Res 😃

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OMG ! Choco diii !! Another wonderful piece from you ! ⭐️

Kya likhte ho yaar!👏The simplicity and purity in writing, yeah that, it hits ! 😎

Top that, you wrote Mangalpur !!!!

Most favourite.

LOVE.

You wrote that what everyone wanted to watch but what was deprived of us !

And mindblowing it was. ❤️

Love how you manage to bring out just the correct emotions always. I'm sure just like how I do, the rest of the readers too feel them while reading. How you make it sound all so real ! ⭐️

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The sight of her moving away from him pained his heart. He didn't know why this was happening but surely understood that if anything happened to the woman in that room he would surely cease to exist.

"I don't want to die Asad, I don't want to die."

"We are home now Zoya, and I promise I will never let anything like that happen to you. I will not let anyone from that village near you ever."

"I can't get rid of these sensations. I feel suffocated as soon as I close my eyes Asad. It feels like I will die... I don't want to die Asad, I don't want to..."

" Don't say things like these Zoya, it kills me every time you say it. I will never let anything happen to you." nothing can harm you till I am with you, I won't let any harm come your way."

"I was so scared Asad, all the while that we had been running away, trying to save ourselves... I was so scared." She whispered.

"Me too Zoya, I didn't want anything to happen to you. I couldn't bear the thought of losing you..." He whispered back looking at her in the eye.

"What if they had been successful in capturing us? Or worse what if that groom was successful in getting married to me. I made Mariyam run away, what if they forcefully got me married to him?" She clutched his kurta in a tight grip as if she would be pulled away from him.

Asad wrapped his other arm around her waist pulling her flush against himself "I would never let that happen."

#twisted my heart strings.

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Awww.. How Asad took care of Zoya,

those hugs,

those kisses on the head, saying soothing words to calm her,

her sitting on his lap, ☺️

The snuggling,☺️

the second skin feeling ! ☺️

those tight hugs. ☺️

How his presence was all she needed to calm down.

LOVED IT ! I LOVE FLUFF ! SO MUCH OF IT ! 😳

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What if I had died?"

"Tell me Asad, what if I had not survived..." Drawing a deep breath in and letting it out in a whoosh he answered her question "I would have died too."

# violent twisting of my heart strings.

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I cannot imagine my life without you in it Zoya. You have come to mean so much to me. More than what I had wanted, ever... But now that you do, now that I know, and now that you know too, will you be with me always?"

Finllallyyy !!! 😃

Hahahahaha .. The mini heart attack she gave him while confessing her love.. Good girl ! 😆

"But you, you Asad have come to mean so much more to me now. I cannot explain how it felt to be in your arms as soon as I had opened my eyes, the sensations that coursed through my body as I had taken in your sent... Lungs full of it as soon as I was able to breath again. The feeling of your warm body against mine, your firm arms holding my trembling body safely against yourself. How your eyes had conveyed it all to me when we were still in mangalpur. I cannot explain what I felt then and what I feel now, laying next to you, in the safest place Allah could make for me. I don't want to be anywhere else Asad, I want to stay here with phoophi, with tamatar... With YOU, always."

She didn't know when she fell asleep but eventually she did, in the strong and safe arms of her love, her Asad.

❤️ [****]

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Kitna beautiful this OS was ! 4 times I've read abh tak..

Achaa.. so I was thinking.. if you could make this a TS or something ?! !! ?? !!!!!!

{I know how irritating it is when someone wants you to transform your OS into a TS}

But, trust me, it won't take away the essence of it. Make this a TS na.. Please pleaseee pleaseee pleaseee.. *makes cute Zoya pouty face and those twinkly eyes*

Like a LOT of nonsense romanceee in it !!!! pls pls pls...

😳😳

Please think about it !

mere liye .. apne readers ke liye ...

*batts eyelashes*

[****] --- I haven't written what I feel about that last bit because I'm hoping you continue this and that it's not the last part. 😛😉

Achaa now I'm going.. too much of my verbal diarrhoea.. :$😆

Bye ! Much love !

Tight hugs ! 🤗

P.S : Yeah , I have a PS too :P

So, I was bribed in to commenting this much. 🤢😆

Opps.Sorry.K.Bye. 😆

Originally posted by: p_s05

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

Its always so exciting to receive a PM from you. 😉 An OS! You should write more of them more often.

This really was a lovely read, Asad has always been a rock in her life.

"After arranging his chair next to her bed Asad sunk into it, propping his legs up onto her bed."

I knew this would never work, he had to be on that bed, meant that with all innocents! 🤣

Love that they were communicating, as part of the healing process.

"As soon as Zoya felt it she held onto his kurta tightly pulling him just a little closer and continued "But you, you Asad have come to mean so much more to me now. I cannot explain how it felt to be in your arms as soon as I had opened my eyes, the sensations that coursed through my body as I had taken in your sent... Lungs full of it as soon as I was able to breath again. The feeling of your warm body against mine, your firm arms holding my trembling body safely against yourself. How your eyes had conveyed it all to me when we were still in mangalpur. I cannot explain what I felt then and what I feel now, laying next to you, in the safest place Allah could make for me. I don't want to be anywhere else Asad, I want to stay here with phoophi, with tamatar... With YOU, always." Saying that she snuggled closer to him taking deep breaths of his sent, wanting to drown in it.

As she finished what she wanted to say, Asad felt her move closer to him and he in turn held her tight against himself. He rest his cheek against the top of her head inhaling the sweet smell of her shampoo, something he knew he was going to love more and more as they spent their life together. With a smile spreading on his face he rubbed his nose on her head taking in a deep breath. Softly kissing her crown he whispered to her "I love you Zoya". Zoya shot her head up immediately looking at him wide eyed "Say it again" she said more out of shock than happiness but she wanted to hear it again and again. Asad smiled at her, placing a finger under her chin he held her face in place "I love you" he whispered again looking deep in her eyes. Zoya smiled wide at him and without any hesitation said what he wanted to hear "I love you too Asad, I love you too". With goofy smiles adorning their faces, Zoya placed her head back on his arm and Asad rest his cheek on her head. She didn't know when she fell asleep but eventually she did, in the strong and safe arms of her love, her Asad."

This was the stellar moment! #Bliss!

Originally posted by: ashiii333

not just glad i cant explain yaar...

boht acha tha kassh aisa kuch show mein hota...

but good part is that u remind old days of Qh...

missing Kabhi... Asya...