New ASYA OS : Life's Second Chance - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okayy so I've read it. But I'm not leaving you with a comment until tomorrow. 😆
Will tell you what i felt about this tomorrow.

Night Choco di :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely os
The way Asad took care of Zoya is sooo heart touching
Loved the os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome :)
can u continue this i want to see dilshad's reaction on finding asad and zoya in zoya's room :) maybe u can make a TS or something?????
teasing session of dilshad and najma :) ... i know too much of imagination right ... ya but i would want to read something like that :)
but this OS get's a VERY BIG LIKE from me :)
Edited by ZoyaAsadKhan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Lovely lovely lovely os...ufff the after affects of mangalpur 😳

What I liked the most was...

Asad getting a chair and blushing when he said he can't sleep on the bed..

'I would have never let that happen',his answer to Zoya s quest abt forcefully being married..

And then Ofcourse the I love you...with goofy smile(not to forget)...just amazing 😊

Amazing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome OS choco ...
aww how much i love mangalpur track in QH ..best track
loved d way asad took care of her
confession is lovely ...
feeling nostalgic
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maine bola tha na app mast hai 😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Reserved!


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Unreserved!


Its always so exciting to receive a PM from you. 😉 An OS! You should write more of them more often.



This really was a lovely read, Asad has always been a rock in her life.


"After arranging his chair next to her bed Asad sunk into it, propping his legs up onto her bed."


I knew this would never work, he had to be on that bed, meant that with all innocents! 🤣


Love that they were communicating, as part of the healing process.


"As soon as Zoya felt it she held onto his kurta tightly pulling him just a little closer and continued "But you, you Asad have come to mean so much more to me now. I cannot explain how it felt to be in your arms as soon as I had opened my eyes, the sensations that coursed through my body as I had taken in your sent... Lungs full of it as soon as I was able to breath again. The feeling of your warm body against mine, your firm arms holding my trembling body safely against yourself. How your eyes had conveyed it all to me when we were still in mangalpur. I cannot explain what I felt then and what I feel now, laying next to you, in the safest place Allah could make for me. I don't want to be anywhere else Asad, I want to stay here with phoophi, with tamatar... With YOU, always." Saying that she snuggled closer to him taking deep breaths of his sent, wanting to drown in it.


As she finished what she wanted to say, Asad felt her move closer to him and he in turn held her tight against himself. He rest his cheek against the top of her head inhaling the sweet smell of her shampoo, something he knew he was going to love more and more as they spent their life together. With a smile spreading on his face he rubbed his nose on her head taking in a deep breath. Softly kissing her crown he whispered to her "I love you Zoya". Zoya shot her head up immediately looking at him wide eyed "Say it again" she said more out of shock than happiness but she wanted to hear it again and again. Asad smiled at her, placing a finger under her chin he held her face in place "I love you" he whispered again looking deep in her eyes. Zoya smiled wide at him and without any hesitation said what he wanted to hear "I love you too Asad, I love you too". With goofy smiles adorning their faces, Zoya placed her head back on his arm and Asad rest his cheek on her head. She didn't know when she fell asleep but eventually she did, in the strong and safe arms of her love, her Asad."


This was the stellar moment! #Bliss!
Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hiii.. 8-) Choco...well good that you wrote something after so many days...well about this update it was emotional , brilliant , i don't even have proper words to define how satisfied and happy iam after reading this update...iam definetly going to read it again and again...about this part, you know we are getting so many new and better scenarios with our favourite ASYA scenes...and this one is one of them...that scene where Both ASYA thought they still are Handcuffed was just great and unforgettable...and this O.S has given it a completely new and kind of more deserving end to that Mangalpur incident...Asad and Zoya were still under shock and Zoya had nightmares about it...but now she has Asad by her side who will support her , heal her and most importantly love her...but i really must mention that part where Asad made all efforts to keep a distance between Zoya and him during that sleeping thing because it was clearly what had happened even it was suppose to happen in show also...not that i don't like him if he would have straight away slept by her side...but what he tried was actually what Asad would had done in real or in the show...so logical and practical...and the end CONFESSION...woohoo...just very very beautifully written...Asad's confession about wanting Zoya by his side always then his dissappointment when Zoya said she doesn't know what to say...but then i think she was so overwhelmed to even form a proper confession but she managed well...just mindblowing dear...now i should request you to start something new soon...continue soon...and thanx for the P.M dear...Take care.

Edited by MayurChan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ah...those 'post mangalpur' days...I dont think anyone can get over that :-(
The emotions, their hearts, their tortures...all were so dense! Loved your OS!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unreserved page 1 😆

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