New ASYA OS : Life's Second Chance

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: sweety003
Superb OS!!

Thank you 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: mona12345

hahaha..

So much MORE love for you ! ❤️

Mwah ❤️

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: jas91
I m speechless👏👏
No doubt Manglpur sabka fvrt Track hai😃😃
& this was something we all wanted 2 see in show but Gul😡
Asad taking care of a vulnerable & frightened Zoya
& Zoya sharing all her feelings & fears wid Asad
D beautiful confession & Zoya's confusion 2 confession mindblowing👏⭐️⭐️
I just Loved it❤️
Superb Job Choco 👏👏
Good 2 see u back 😃
This will b my fvrt amonst ur work😉

PS- I know mera comnt chota hai but powerful hai😉😆

Aww thank you Jas. Appreciate all the appreciation. Am glad you loved this one too 😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
wonderfull n amazing...
luv it...
beautifully written...
fabulous...
mindblowing...
Asad taking care of zoya n zoya tells asad about her fears...
thx fr the pm...

Thank you so much Jaz. Glad you loved it ❤️

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: kaussar

Loved it Choco... Loved how you penned about Zoya's fear and disturbed mind after the incident... anyone who had gone through such a horror will definitely have those fears and in original QH that aftermath was not shown...so really loved reading that part.😃

Thank you for reading Kausar, am glad you liked it 😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: cale
Nice os
Mangalpur ... How badly I miss those days
Confession was beautiful
Love and miss asya so much

Hey Cale, hope you are well. Yes mangalpur, how badly I miss asya too 😭

Am happy you enjoyed reading this 😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: -Sushma-
It was awesome!

- Sushma

Thank you Sushma 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: najma123
This is amazing... Very touching.

Thank you 😊

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BurstingBubble

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Amazing OS! How I wish this happened in the show as well I don't want to be anywhere else Asad, I want to stay here with phoophi, with tamatar... With YOU, always."

Lovely lines😳

"I love you Zoya". Zoya shot her head up immediately looking at him wide eyed "Say it again" she said more out of shock than happiness but she wanted to hear it again and again. Asad smiled at her, placing a finger under her chin he held her face in place "I love you" he whispered again looking deep in her eyes. Zoya smiled wide at him and without any hesitation said what he wanted to hear "I love you too Asad, I love you too". With goofy smiles adorning their faces, Zoya placed her head back on his arm and Asad rest his cheek on her head. She didn't know when she fell asleep but eventually she did, in the strong and safe arms of her love, her Asad.

A simple yet a beautiful confession😳

Beautifully written

Loved it❤️