Beautiful Chaos Thread ll - Pt 6 (a), Pg 74 - Page 16

Amazing love the flow of the story despite different writers! Cant wait to read the next part! Right now one cant get enuf of SaHil considering whats going on in the actual show lol plz update soon!!!

Amazing update!

Seher signed up for tanveer?! Gross

Had a doubt...

Rehaan had feelings for Sanam before?

Wondering when will they finally meet!

Beautifully written!!

Farz you an amazing writer..
Let me get back in the mood then I will nag your brains to became a full time writer as well..

Wonderful update Farz
Seher out & caught by rehan men on construction site. He heared tanveer talked on seher phone. The way he asked aahil questions was wonderful. He wanted his brother life settle thatswhy he was arguing with him. Aahil breakdown was beautifully written. He just want sanam to come & stop him as always. Sanam talked with Dilshad was more than necessary. She realised that where she supposed to be. She said to herself & aahil that she is coming. Coming to him, home, their home. Thanks for pm me for this awesome update.

Loooved it. You are an awesome writer. Thanks again for the message! :D

Originally posted by: sahil333

Hey Riddler, this is amazing in connection with part 3. 👏

But had to read the previous chapter again to freshen up 😆. And believe me Sage, it got me teary eyed again.

Now to storyteller Farz 😆. You don't always need selfies and hotness to tell a good story! You did it, so hats off to you for such a beautiful piece. Loved the fb's to give you more insight in their past.

You picked the song "All of me" 👍🏼. I'm giving you a kiss for this ❤️. I love this song man, so crazy about it. I once requested a video maker to make a video for SaHil with this song. Unfortunately no vm yet 😔 . But, you just made my day to include this in your story.

SaHil is hurting so much now 😭.

But I like the ending 😊

"Aahil, I'm coming home."

It gives you such a warm feeling inside. I'm very happy that they will be together soon, unlike in the serial right now. What a mess it is, sigh!

TQ Riddler for this and for your pm 😉

So Juliet will continue with the story and Sanam will be Home? Cool !!! That means HOTNESS OVERLOAD 😆

What now @BOLD RED!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 ****************************************************

Yeah yeah! Just put in your request, where and what you like to read.😉

But then don't hold your horses, I might change things.😛 Home becomes homeless!

Faru meri Jaan, Mein tujhpe Kurban, Mein tera tu meri jane sara Reygisthan.

The Banner is sexy! I want a better one. Yes I am being a child. Why is your banner the best till date. Wah! WAH! WAH! ( I am Aahil and I like crying!)

Faru you when crazy with crazy, you made us go crazy with your crazy. You did CRAZY so proud.

I told you before and I am telling you again, you are a very smart writer. Intelligent read is what I expected of your update and I you did justice to your title. " THE RIDDLER!"

Wow! Is all I have for you. I had so many questions, so many and I think I already finished asking you all of them in the last two days.

I still don't know, but that construction site and Sunehri being there is pissing me off. I know you can't sort me out and I now feel such a stupid idea this antakshari and mysterious passing of parcel was. WHO GAVE YOU GUYS THIS STUPID IDEA BY THE WAY?

Ok I feel pressured. So badly screwed I am.

But thank you Riddler for this layered story telling. It was simply sophisticated awesome.👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved the last lines...

Tears streamed down her face. Tonight she's letting them all out. Only tonight. Once tomorrow starts, it's a new dawn. A new hope. A new beginning. Their new beginning.

Aahil, I'm coming home.

Home.

( HOME is the best place on earth.) Thank you for giving me ...HOME!🤗 Juliet!

^^^ Finally Juliet feels the heat !!