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Posted: 11 years ago

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jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Res for. Part 4...

Unres

Farz!!

That was a brilliant update.

Loved the use of crazy. Those lines were so phenomenal.

Honestly, I was expecting this great an update from you. You are really a talented writer.

I actually had to read it twice to get a good grip of it and I simply loved it. Loved the flow.

You took the story to a different level. There are still many questions in my mind and I am curious how this is gonna unfold.

Wow, Sunehri!! Oh my my !! Tanveer is a master... Loved the twist.

My interest has piqued as I am having so many questions.

Great update babe.👏

Juliet darling...Its Home... Update soon. Soon soon soon.😃

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Anisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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unres'd pg 20 !

Freaking awesome Farz!

Woo hoo!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: sageflower7
res!
Unres !

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Farz !

This was freaking awesome man!

And you were worried about it??

Crazy was my day when you first entered it.
Crazy in love I was that day you put a ring on my finger.
Crazy it is that I'm the reason for your every smile.
Crazy I am every day without you.
Crazy I am everyday. Without you.
Crazy I'm sure you are too...without..me.

Genius!

But now I have a thousand questions in my head!

I'm guessing that was your intention all along!!

Wow! You have just made this story edgy and mysterious.

It reads like a freaking Albert Hitchcock mystery !!

Wow !
i loved it!

Last word is home...

So now... the ending words are:
Fcuk...
Something...
Crazy...
Home...