ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143 - Page 61

Heyy Swapno... 😊
Thanx alot for the PM... 😛
Waise How are you BTW..? Any relief from your Stressful schedule..?😳
Update was Very Wonderfully Written... 👏 Beautiful ( They way you described the sceanic beauty.) 👏😳 and Brilliant & a special mention to the lines at the starting...they were perfect... ⭐️
SIX years.😲 six years of seperation...what is this new obsession of writers with this number and seperation..😆
While reading about Zoya and her life in the six years...you get a proud feeling...ki Yeah...she made a very wonderful , respectful and satisfied life for herself...It was very satisfying to know about her achievements in these six years.. 👏 but still she is alone at one...nobody to call a family...😕
Asad...his life was same before 6 years...and the same with more added seriousness...and present also.. the only change was that..he has developed some good bonds with his father's second family..Ayaan & Najma...also..that is good... 😊 but yet he is still A lone bearrier of his life..
Their meeting part was written very beautifully and fantastically 👏 for a change their was no falling in Arms...and I liked it.. 😉
Excellent part...Swapno.. ⭐️ Enjoyed reading it.. 😊
Continue soonish... 😃

sadia 😡
u left it at the exact place!!?
how could u do it with my poor heart???

now i'll be happy when you update the next part...

eagerly waiting for asya's convo!!!

btw...this update was superb! so much had happened in these 6 years...but both didn't forget each other...that's the best part

cont super soon

The update was so beautiful that I could smell the flowers.. :')

It's superb part loved it

WOW!!! SUCH A LOVELY CHAPTER. SO ASYA MEET AGAIN AFTER 6 YRS.LOVED IT. CONTINUE SOON.

Awesome + Interesting Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...😃

they met again..!!! exciting..!!!

resss

Six years 🥺 dats quite a veryyy long time yaar. U know, I find these year leaps too depressing
U described d flashback really well both Zoya n Asad's POV
So all these years both weren't in India
Good to see zo got such a success as well as good helping hands :)
But really u gave a cliffy end.. I m too excited to know, how will dey react 👏

Wow!