ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143 - Page 59

Nice updates

awsm part.
luvd it
thnx for d pm
t.c

Just one word WOW. It was brilliant n soo fun with light talks, teasings n all
D read was quite different, I can't explain bt loved it too much
Well, I always like those stories a lot more where whole picturisation is centered js between Asad n Zoya.
Their banters were such a fun to read
Asad's past was sad bt m glad shireen love him n so as everyone else
Now, zo has a more miserable life, still her carefree nature.
Zo moved to Asad's house was d best part bt hey what m I reading, he left n dat too forever.. D letter was really heart breaking :(
Poor Zoya, what will she do. Js hope, him to come back or her to move to London ;)
Continue super duper soon pleaseee n yeah pm me as well. I'll send u a buddy request :)

Originally posted by: skavya

yes yes...I know u dear...

u will make them take a turn 😉

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

finally caught up with the last three updates

there's a gradual progress in asya's relationship...which i liked so much!

their pasts...sad yet make them connected in a melancholic relation

i was so happy reading it but u sent asad away!!??

tell me it's not yet another sad ending :-(

and do cont soon

Originally posted by: sasir

Nice
Loved it
Candle part was nice
They revealed their past to each other
But still I don't knew what is zoyas past
I thought she have a family
I think I missed something
Will re-read all parts
Asad left forever
Till now there is no progress in asya relation
I hope at least now they realize their feelings
Plz continue soon

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice updates

Just caught up with the last 2

So asya living together

She had to find her own accommodation but unable to asad help her

So they each learn ant the other pass

Asad was shocked learning Zoya was an orphan

She apologized for breaking his ammi mug

So asya comfortable takes care of each other but don't acknowledge anything where their feelings r concern

So asad leaves an emergency can't be for good

He will learn in this time of separation what he feels for Zoya I guess (my wish)

Zoya comes to share she will be moving as she got her own address

But she met emptiness he is gone forever

Or is he

Continue soon

Originally posted by: quirky_senorita

Loved the chapter...

Superb.

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm part.
luvd it
thnx for d pm
t.c

Originally posted by: pumpkin.honey

Just one word WOW. It was brilliant n soo fun with light talks, teasings n all
D read was quite different, I can't explain bt loved it too much
Well, I always like those stories a lot more where whole picturisation is centered js between Asad n Zoya.
Their banters were such a fun to read
Asad's past was sad bt m glad shireen love him n so as everyone else
Now, zo has a more miserable life, still her carefree nature.
Zo moved to Asad's house was d best part bt hey what m I reading, he left n dat too forever.. D letter was really heart breaking :(
Poor Zoya, what will she do. Js hope, him to come back or her to move to London ;)
Continue super duper soon pleaseee n yeah pm me as well. I'll send u a buddy request :)