ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Nice update

So Asad to leave soon

Shireen wants him to stay she consider him her son

But Asad can't accept her as his ammi

He still has anger towards his father

So he came and took care of his abbu family on his demise

So zoya is rashid pa now Asad

Aww rashid create the post to help zoya

So zoya was able to take Asad out his rut

She made him smile

Aww she burn him she was sad and crying

He is surprise to see her reaction to him and his pain

Wonder y does she have her but marks here

Continue soon

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sanarujub

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

Continue soon and do pm me

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JASLEEN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#423

Nice update dear.

Lived it too much

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sara..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#424

Chapter 2

I loved the Taylor swift lines..
He was going to turn into a murderer 😆
Lol Zoya and
N Asad fainted...
Good tamatar called
Like the sibling convo

Cute update 😳

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sara..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#425

Chapter 3

Lol her big fat mouth 😆
Zoya giving tips to Asad
Shireen Asad convo was good
I loved the ending part...Zoya taking care of Asad n Asad touched by her care 😳

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#426

Ammi wants an update :((

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#427

Sadia I m glad 2 b back😃

1st chapter was amazing

Asya were in there element

Zoya works as his PA but why they r at home not office

& she also plays unpaid servant cum cook who cooks & dines wid AAk...yeh kya chakr hai

Asad ki story padke I feel sad Dillu is 1 of my most loved character

actually all residents of KV r my fvrt in d show

so Zoya's messiness kept irritating Asad but I really liked that 1 scene when Asad appreciated her mentally when she cleaned d ktch after spoiling it b4

great job deary👏

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#428

part2

edit ok so I got 2 know why Zoya was doing household chores cuz made Maya was on leave😳

Asad got mad at Zoya 4 breaking his mug

& omg Zoya widout thinking kept blabbering

but Asad baby fainted cuz of cupcakes

thankgod he got saved due 2 Naj's call on time

this dailoge was so cute😆

What type of name this is? A tomato is calling Mr. Khan?

Naj teased her Bro but Zoya scolded her & later Asad also shut her mouth😆

d end scene was lovely again Asad got impressed wid dinner cooked by Zoya & after going 2 bedroom started complaining😆

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#429

part3 another fabulous updt

a sneak peak in Asad's past

I know its not got 2 keep regrets wid people who left us but Asad was also not wrong why Rashid never tried 2 mend his relation even if Asad refused he should have tried till d end but he gave up & lived life wid his new family even if he yerned 4 his eldest son's love but he didn't tried from his side that's his fault

Asad took responsibility of this family widout knowing or having any bond wid them was something which really makes 1 admire him

Zoya saw him crying 4 his father & wid his antics lifts his mood

I loved this whole last part

& in d end when she accidently burns Asad's hand & Asad is astonished seeing her care & feeling cared by any1 after years was really touching scenes

I loved this part d most cuz it got emotions

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago