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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ayat20

1 more thing u show that asad is back n no 1 knowsomeone about it n zoya faints n everyone. Comes to knows about it n also asad comes to know it n gets angry so zoya did not tell him... Either u can take a leap or this... Depends on u just m suggestions...


actually i m planning same thing but cant reveal so soon...
i really consider ur suggestion...
thnxxx dear 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ABI-

umm..., Ashii nice Update
But honestly I still feel whatever might be the reason Zoya shouldn't have hide her pragnency news from Asad.

3month leap is okay


i know abi zoya ne acha nahi kiya but it was my actual story na...
3 mnths leap is done...
thnxxx dear 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Awesome. ..

Loving it aashi.. .

Leap 3 months is more then enough. .
Ho sake to Kum Kar Dena.. .not more then dat.. .

Nice update


thnxxx dear 😛
3 mnth leap is okay sabko yehi sahi lag raha...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyaaa2910

Nice

3 months leaps is okk


thnxx dear 😛
3 mnths paka...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sara7iris

thank you for pm ...brilliant and nice update I love it ...
3 months is enough ... but after that Asad returned to zoya he will not be happy because she hides that she was pregnant...I can't wait to read more ,pls update soon


thnxxx dear 😛
update is on the way...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Asad went to Australia alone as zoya didn't want to disturb him. I felt that zoya should tell asad abt her pregnancy. Hiding for anything is never good. 3 months leap is ok. Continue soon plz. Curious to know everyone reaction especially asad. Thanks for pm


thnxx dear 😛
i know zoya should tell him but that was actual story point...
3 mnths done...
update is on the way...
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting upsate aashie..
i liked it a ton
ek suggestion dun, coz u had asked i thimk u should a long leap like 5-6 months or more than that, it may bring a flow in there emotions as u had said tht it's a sad stroy so..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Asad was a ittle too much wen he said dat she can wear short clothes only in front of him. Come on, wat vl happen if she wears them outside? I hate so much possessiveness.

I hate Asad for leaving Zoya for 10 days. He sud hv called her in KV. He cant always force his decision on her. He even told RaDil dat he n Zoya sud suffer due to their fathers.


I hate Zoya for being so selfless. Wat d hell she thinks of herself? Dat she is so mahaan. No Zoya, u r not mahaan but dumb. She thinks dat she has responsibility of everyone in d home but she can't avoid Asad for all dis. Wat if she was a working woman which can easily be wid such a high education? She sud tell Asad abt her pregnancy? Why d hell she is thinking dat she sud not disturb him on his work? Is she really a modern woman or some bloody gavar aurat? Zoya needs some brain. I hate being selfless n mahaan which is very irritating.


juhi... here all are fans of the AAK the rude arrogant and aggressive person...
so i can never imagine that he allowing zoya wearing shorts and all but she can wear out in front of him... there is no problem yaar...
i knw asad left him for 10 days but he was fighting with his inner thoughts and he apologized later...
zoya is selfless we all knew that but here she was behaving typical wives and all... i knw u dnt like her but this was my actual story point... she should not hide her pregnancy but she done that nothing can happen...
hope u got my point... and i knw u love asya so dnt feel bad...
i m sorry if i hurt ur feelings...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


Hello...Ashii...commenting here for the first time...i really liked the plot of the story...its not like heartbreaking seperation track but as you said mutual seperation...a very good update...P.M me if possible for next update..


welcome dear and thnxxx 😛
i will surely pm u...
hope u like future story...
stay tuned...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

lovely update..
asya r so lovely..
sry im in a hurry...n sry fr chota comment
3 months leap is ok..hope everything goes well


thnxxx dear 😛
dnt mind chota hai par acha hai...😉
3 mnth done...

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