||Unbreak Me||~A SaHil & SeHan FF~Ch1 on Page 8

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

This is some gorgeous stuff out here! <33

Loved and just LOVED the character sketches you have written there. This is so so relateable to the characters, feels like watching them! 😳

Amazing. Amazing and AMAZING! Already in love with this!

"She is loving the feeling of being Sanam Aahil Raza Ibrahim" :') Who wouldn't?! ;) 😆

And the alst para about love! That is so damn beautiful!! The last line regarding the "Unbreak me" part. Splendid! You are one brilliant writer! Can't wait how it turns out! :D

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

"It isn't about fixing a relationship, or fixing someone you love, it's all about breaking you to pieces, tearing you apart, so you can find the real you, and then someone special to Unbreak you."

I can't help but quote these lines! These are just so painstakingly beautiful! <3

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ARWA

@jojo1986

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Loved it update soon 👏👏

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
This is some gorgeous stuff out here! <33
Loved and just LOVED the character sketches you have written there. This is so so relateable to the characters, feels like watching them! 😳
Amazing. Amazing and AMAZING! Already in love with this!
"She is loving the feeling of being Sanam Aahil Raza Ibrahim" :') Who wouldn't?! ;) 😆

And the alst para about love! That is so damn beautiful!! The last line regarding the "Unbreak me" part. Splendid! You are one brilliant writer! Can't wait how it turns out! :D

Thanks for commenting!!😃😳 I am glad that you loved the prologue/CS. 😳

Thanks for appreciating my writing skills as well. Will update soon!!😃

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
"It isn't about fixing a relationship, or fixing someone you love, it's all about breaking you to pieces, tearing you apart, so you can find the real you, and then someone special to Unbreak you."

I can't help but quote these lines! These are just so painstakingly beautiful! <3

😳Thanks once again!!😳

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: jojo1986
Loved it update soon 👏👏

Thanks! Will update soon.😃

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Wow..It was beautiful start for both SaHil and SeHaan.❤️.Eagerly waiting for the next chapters.😃..PM me whenever you update..😳

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ..-DeViLiA-..
Wow..It was beautiful start for both SaHil and SeHaan.❤️.Eagerly waiting for the next chapters.😃..PM me whenever you update..😳

Thanks for commenting!! Glad that you liked the start of the fanfic. Will update soon!!

Thanks once again😃

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bindasss

@bindasss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Love, a word formed with four alphabets, so simple. Love, a word with complex and different meanings attached to it. Love is like an intangible force, that hits you so hard that it breaks your insides, your soul into millions of pieces. Falling in love isn't your choice, it just happens. What one needs is someone, someone so ordinary yet so special, to find the exact you out of the million pieces you got shattered to. It isn't about fixing a relationship, or fixing someone you love, it's all about breaking you to pieces, tearing you apart, so you can find the real you, and then someone special to Unbreak you.

^^this was seriously the best part! This part touched my heart! It is so beautifully written, I wanna cry! I cannot wait to read the actual story. If that was really good, I'm sure the story will be even better! Can't wait! Please update ASAP! Lol

Edited by bindasss - 10 years ago