||Unbreak Me||~A SaHil & SeHan FF~Ch1 on Page 8

Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

35

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1

He stared at her as she smiled, smiled so innocently that he wished, wished that he could just capture this innocence, forever. Her smile, her antics, her twinkling eyes, her never ending care, in short all of her. How can a person whose everything has innocence dripping out, can marry for money! That is a thing, he found hard to believe. For the first time, in the past 26 years, he, Aahil Raza Ibrahim, actually wanted not to believe what his Ammi had said. He wanted to believe that Sanam, his wife, the woman who he loves so much that it unhinges his soul, had not married him for money.

Sanam closed her eyes, leaning back against the wall of the washroom. She couldn't decipher what was happening to her, what was she feeling. Aahil, whom she used to call Jallad, the merciless being alive, was actually becoming so special for her. A marriage of contract, whose life is just 3 months long, was turning out to be the most important part of her life. She was starting to feel for her husband, temporary husband. It felt like a dream. A dream so beautiful, where she and Aahil got their happily ever after, together. If that was a dream, Sanam didn't wanted to wake up from her sleep then. She was loving the feel of being, Sanam Aahil Raza Ibrahim.

Same face, same features, physically they were carbon copies. Similar yet so different. Rehan still couldn't believe that he had actually met a girl who looked exactly like Sanam. Sanam, his unrequited love, his brother's wife. Sunheri, the look alike of Sanam, was so much like her but yet so different. He was feeling things, he hadn't felt with anyone, even with Sanam. Sunheri was giving him those moments, those moments of utter joy and happiness that he had missed throughout his life. Her baking a cake for him, taking care of his wounds and actually planning a surprise birthday party for him, unbelievable. Yes! For him, Sunheri was this unbelievable, incredible girl, who touched his heart and awakened something deep.

This can't be happening, can it be? She wasn't that type of girl who was allowed to fall in love, get married, have lots and lots of babies and enjoy a happily ever after. Nope, she wasn't bestowed by such gifts! And with a guy like Rehan, that was impossible. Sunheri smiled, as she saw Rehan taking out the cake from the oven. Just few days with this incredibly cute, adorably sweet and charmingly shy man, had her flutter and do flip flops like crazy. She was relieved that she didn't suffered a heart stroke. She was here to con him, but it felt that the tables had turned and she, the golden girl had fallen prey to a man's looks, heart and soul. She found it unbelievable that a guy like Rehan exists. A guy, who values human beings and human emotions more than anything. And she couldn't deny that she had started feeling for him. His happiness, his sorrows mattered to her!

Love, a word formed with four alphabets, so simple. Love, a word with complex and different meanings attached to it. Love is like an intangible force, that hits you so hard that it breaks your insides, your soul into millions of pieces. Falling in love isn't your choice, it just happens. What one needs is someone, someone so ordinary yet so special, to find the exact you out of the million pieces you got shattered to. It isn't about fixing a relationship, or fixing someone you love, it's all about breaking you to pieces, tearing you apart, so you can find the real you, and then someone special to Unbreak you.

Edited by dmegha - 11 years ago

53

Reply

Quote

Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

35

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#2

PM Procedure

Buddy me, that's "dmegha" to receive PM's of this FanFic! You want the PM's than buddy me!

Index

Prologue/CS ~ Page 1

Chapter One ~ Page 8

Edited by dmegha - 11 years ago

7

Reply

Quote

Az07

@Az07

Sparkler

31

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#3

Love, a word formed with four alphabets, so simple. Love, a word with complex and different meanings attached to it. Love is like an intangible force, that hits you so hard that it breaks your insides, your soul into millions of pieces. Falling in love isn't your choice, it just happens. What one needs is someone, someone so ordinary yet so special, to find the exact you out of the million pieces you got shattered to. It isn't about fixing a relationship, or fixing someone you love, it's all about breaking you to pieces, tearing you apart, so you can find the real you, and then someone special to Unbreak you.

You have no idea how beautifully you have explained about love in these lines.

It was an amazing start. All the four people pov was well written & explained.

Seher part were she said she is not the type of girl who is allowed to fall in love & marry then have many many babies! Many babies! Really seher😉 Bechara Rehan 😳

Continue soon! Once more well written!

Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago

6

Reply

Quote

Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

35

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#4

Originally posted by: Az07
Love, a word formed with four alphabets, so simple. Love, a word with complex and different meanings attached to it. Love is like an intangible force, that hits you so hard that it breaks your insides, your soul into millions of pieces. Falling in love isn't your choice, it just happens. What one needs is someone, someone so ordinary yet so special, to find the exact you out of the million pieces you got shattered to. It isn't about fixing a relationship, or fixing someone you love, it's all about breaking you to pieces, tearing you apart, so you can find the real you, and then someone special to Unbreak you.

You have no idea how beautifully you have explained about love in these lines.
It was an amazing start. All the four people pov was well written & explained.
Seher part were she said she is not the type of girl who is allowed to fall in love & marry then have many many babies! Many babies! Really seher😉 Bechara Rehan 😳

Continue soon! Once more well written!

Thank you so much!!😃 I am glad that you liked it all. And yeah there will be many cutesy Sehan and Sahil babies involved in future😆 Will update soon.😃

3

Reply

Quote

Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

Trailblazer

41

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#5

Thank you for starting a new FF

The feelings SaHil and SeHan were so perfectly described.

Love, a word formed with four alphabets, so simple. Love, a word with complex and different meanings attached to it. Love is like an intangible force, that hits you so hard that it breaks your insides, your soul into millions of pieces. Falling in love isn't your choice, it just happens. What one needs is someone, someone so ordinary yet so special, to find the exact you out of the million pieces you got shattered to. It isn't about fixing a relationship, or fixing someone you love, it's all about breaking you to pieces, tearing you apart, so you can find the real you, and then someone special to Unbreak you.

So true so beautiful.

2

Reply

Quote

Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

35

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#6

Originally posted by: Chahanya
Thank you for starting a new FF
The feelings SaHil and SeHan were so perfectly described.
Love, a word formed with four alphabets, so simple. Love, a word with complex and different meanings attached to it. Love is like an intangible force, that hits you so hard that it breaks your insides, your soul into millions of pieces. Falling in love isn't your choice, it just happens. What one needs is someone, someone so ordinary yet so special, to find the exact you out of the million pieces you got shattered to. It isn't about fixing a relationship, or fixing someone you love, it's all about breaking you to pieces, tearing you apart, so you can find the real you, and then someone special to Unbreak you.
So true so beautiful.

Thanks for commenting! Glad that you liked it!😃

1

Reply

Quote

mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

18

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#7

This is so beautifully written. :))

I love the way you have described each character abd their current feelings <3

I'm really stunned by the way you have written the last part - a definition of what love is.. "Love is like an intangible force, that hits you so hard that it breaks your insides, your soul into millions of pieces. Falling in love isn't your choice, it just happens." <3

I'm really looking forward to read this! You're so damn talented ^__^

2

Reply

Quote

Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

35

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#8

Originally posted by: mahwash22
This is so beautifully written. :))

I love the way you have described each character abd their current feelings <3

I'm really stunned by the way you have written the last part - a definition of what love is.. "Love is like an intangible force, that hits you so hard that it breaks your insides, your soul into millions of pieces. Falling in love isn't your choice, it just happens." <3

I'm really looking forward to read this! You're so damn talented ^__^

Aawwiiee..thank you so much! I am glad that you liked the prologue cum CS😳

At that last part, that came just like that😳, even I am stunned that I wrote this😆

Thank you for appreciating the story as well as my writing skills. Will update soon😃😳

1

Reply

Quote

_Lavender_

@_Lavender_

Rocker

26

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#9

Beautiful..Loved reading it<33

Can't wait to read more...

Love is like an intangible force, that hits you so hard that it breaks your insides, your soul into millions of pieces. Falling in love isn't your choice, it just happens.

^This is beautiful😳

1

Reply

Quote

Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

35

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: -Hurya-
Beautiful..Loved reading it<33
Can't wait to read more...

Love is like an intangible force, that hits you so hard that it breaks your insides, your soul into millions of pieces. Falling in love isn't your choice, it just happens.

^This is beautiful😳

Thanks for commenting! Glad that you liked it.😃😳

Will update soon.😃

Reply

Quote

||Unbreak Me||~A SaHil & SeHan FF~Ch1 on Page 8

Related Topics

Explore Topics