AsYa OS - It Doesnt Have To Be Love! 14.9.

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Muskaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Awesome os dear
Thanks for pm :)

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scarletmalik

@scarletmalik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

it was wonderful

very beautifully written

thnx 4r pm

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MsGrumpyShumpy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

You know im a very picky reader i dont like all the stuff and hence i dont comment! This is the most meaningful OS ive read after forum went batshit crazy and umm dead! Seriously it was full of emotions and so different than ur normal fluff! It was great and it brought out such a beautiful msg. Im gonna be honest i hated it wen asad said he cheated on her i just feel theres no reason or excuse good enough to justify an affair and although no where in this u ever tried to justify it but from the world around me that ive seen even the word affair leaves a bitter taste in my mouth. Anyway im glad he didnt cheat. The story was nexr to perfect. Couples nowadays lack patience marriage has become a means to meet their needs and when those needs are not met they opt for a way out what they dont understand is that it dsnt have to be fluff and love and happiness all the time it just has to be you and your partner! Great os! Plz do continue writing such stuff

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potternerd

@potternerd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Wow that was some intense writing !!!

Loved it to the core

They met when they were 18 and 23..kissed on first date and made love !!!!

Sounds like perfect story only it wasn't !!! Or was it ???

You wrote it so so so beautifully

I think Asad didn't stop loving her...otherwise he wouldn't have pulled the infidelity stunt !!

He wanted to give her a way out !!!

Loved how he came to pick her up...Chauffeur for life !!

What hit Zoya was the thought of Asad giving her away to another man

Made her realise it doesn't have to be love

It has to be THEM !!!

❤️❤️❤️

The last lines got us all thinking and pondering !!

I'm still processing 😊

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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

This is such a lovely OS !

You have written it sooo beautifully :D

Just loved reading it :)

Keep writing more romance. You have a nice flair of it :)

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

i'm speechless after reading this! I have mixed feelings...i actually cried when Asad said he would give away zoya to some one else!!!😭

its an amazing piece of writing!!!👏

bt why did he lie to her?! how did zoya forgive him?!😕

please its a request...do continue if possible!😳

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rajee

@--coolbaby--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it..
First half was sad but cute..
Apt title..
Thanks for the pm

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

one word...

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

After reading this, what I feel for you is most definitely love.. That was awesome really.. Taking a person for granted often leads to this... Both Asad and Zoya stopped putting their everything into their relationship and it eventually died.. We forget that we can fall more in love with a person everyday only if we put in the effort.. And you portrayed it beautifully.. :)
And the revelation.. Asad's sacrifice for Zoya was proof enough of his undying love for her...
And the ending was so good.. I am a sucker for happy endings.. Love you for giving the story one...
Loved every word of it.. :)