AsYa OS - It Doesnt Have To Be Love! 14.9.

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Mahika Rathod

@Mahika24

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Wow! This is so heartbreaking but so beautiful! I love your writing style!

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Amandeep

@aman1605

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

It's amazing dear

Tnx 4 pm😃

Keep writing

Love Aman❤️

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Aliza9300

@Aliza9300

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

I am literally standing and clapping right now
How amazing are you I mean this was an eye opener
With all the love fluff we read or think of everyday we tend to forget or overlook the reality!
This is just so true and even if the married life starts amazing and all roses and stuff that doesn't mean the thorns won't get in the way
I love love love love this so much
I'm actually in awe of you and this piece of writing right now
I think my favourite part was how they both felt that loss in their realationship, not only zoya and how Asad tried to mend things rather then leaving them aside and carry on with life because that would've just lessened the scope of betterment in their life even more
Though you did highlight the reality and it was harsh but still everything was too too beautiful
Amazing job!❤️ 😊

Aliza❤️

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Hey Juliet.how are you ?? Sorry am not much in the forums these daysnd I have missed a lot.. this sounds to be a very interesting one.. Will catch up with this by weekend.. sorry for the. delay but lots of love..

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

*sigh*

*Sigh*

*a long SIGH*

I am speechless...!!!!!

It is so beautifully written that I read it 3 times already...

Its sooo beautiful...👏

And yesss... I believe you are true to your name here______"perfectionist ".

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

I wish there was an option of multiple likes by a single user for everytime I read.
One is not enough.
Just dropped in to say this is Beyond Beautiful !!

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Juliet.. Am so very sorry for the late comment.. I literally have tears in my eyes reading this.. Beautiful and Marvelous.. I really am not able to find words to express how much I loved this ...

I am touched.. you are so very right.. We tend to forget things.. and take things for granted.. in life.. many a times.. good eye opener..

Asad lied to Zoya .. oh my that was a relevation.. 😊 The approach he used to bring out the past in their life or something much better was risky but wonderful..

Wonderful OS Juliet.. Keep writing.. and PLZZZ keep sending me PMs or your works..

Apologies for missing out few of them.. Will find time to read them today.. 😊 and yes to comment .. 😊