AsYa OS - It Doesnt Have To Be Love! 14.9.

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Hey Julie it a brilliant piece of work dear

And too realistic too

It evokes all types of feelings in me

I dont know how to express it

Thanks for the pm dear

You are a great writer dear

Pls Update Wallbanger soon

Thanks for pm

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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Speechless!..

The world Awesome won't justify with ur work. ..

Brilliantly executed. ...

I want more.. ..please keep writting.. .

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

hai juliet,

it is the reality...!!!!!!!!!!!!!

in the chaos of life and responsibility .. the love fades away...

when u have a kid.. that holds them together... atleast...

unless one of them takes the step to rectify it...

nice to see our asad become the responsible one,...

what a shock treatment for zoya...

he is the liar.. when he says he will give her away... the possessive khan.. speaks that...

nice to see the whole group has conspired along with asad...!!!!!!

awesome OS... and loved reading u write on ASYA,... after a gap:

though i like reading saahil... but with asya... i connect... specially the butterflies...

loved it...

how about one more os. with zoya wanted to be pregnant...?????? with some hot stuff...

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Anu

@tacker_karan

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Wohhh...finally an asya os from u...

Ws waitng fr it...

Dis ws something very unusual...I mean to explain such confused feelings where love exists but u accept it isn't dere n need not b dere...

So asad faked it just to let zoya free out of dat loveless marriage whoch ws actually full of love...

Dis piece amazed me really...gud one...

Write more on asya...

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Juliet darling u r back😲😃

what a story dear👏

this time it has emotional touch😊

Asya married at young age & were in love❤️

then they started falling apart😲

Zoya felt there love is vanished

When i read Asad cheated i was like what😲😡

but when in d end i read it was fake news meri jaan main jaan ayi😃😆

Zoya didn't felt anything b4 or when she left his home

but when he said of leaving her & give 2 some1 she realized what he means 2 her😉

It was beautiful Jules👏

I loved it😃

Love u sweets🤗

PS- I m waiting 4 30 sep.😆

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Beautifully written!

Deep, intricate, passionate!

A wonderful OS!

Wonder why Asad lied to her? Just to once again make their married life active?

The start was gloomy and depressing!

But fantastic work by you!

Hats off to you!

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Juliet
This OS is amazing
It is so close to reality
Loved it
U write so beautiful

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Hi Juliet

Wow. This was just beautiful. So profound. Its true once you have been married 10 years or more, things can get to a rut, if you don't stop it from happening. This was such a beautiful rendition to that complicated scenario which is a long term relationship!

I could visualize each scene. It was superb!

Mandy

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Wow!! Evoked a lot of emotions...love fading after just 10 years?? Not good :-(

Love, like all relations need nurturing at every step and your story just showed how it could just fade into oblivion if not cared and fed! I am glad Asad tried to revoke it but if he had it in him to do this, he could have stopped it reaching this stage, right? Just wondering...

But, whatever it is, you write so well!! You are truly gifted!!

Love Asya and their stories...Not much of a Sahil fan as they haven't gotten into my blood like Asya but I read everything you write so pm for both would be nice but def Asya...Thanks for the pm!