AsYa OS - It Doesnt Have To Be Love! 14.9.

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@ChamakChallo91

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Nice OS!!

Thanks for the pm :)

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

It was wonderful OS
Both wanted to sacrifice as both thought that other deserve better than him/ her.
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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Thanks for PM.

It was so Sad but very Nice OS.😊

The whole part was so nicely explained.😊

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PRIYAKABHI.

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ishka virani

@LilApple

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

m big fan of urs but
right now scratching my head to understand what if means what...
its like rockstar hit movie I saw 5 times but ending ajj tak samjh nai aayi

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

I love you Ayaan! And Mia! And water gun!

(and Zaffar and Aria)

Fine. I love you too Asad! So much? So so much! For Carnation happens to be my favourite too. And God knows I can do with some driving lessons. And music bole toh...

Hee!

For putting life back to Zoya! And stirring her numb heart, causing an explosion; all that feelings! That plethora of emotions. You did good by doing bad! WHAT EVEN!

Some major life lessons there!!

Oh Darling Juliet.

This is a story that needs telling. And told you did- excellently. All that chords? Strummed! The way only you know how!

And I love Zoya for thinking who really betrayed whom... Mwah Jules. Masterstroke this one. This part got to me the most. And that she was glad that it was him and not her that cheated? Brilliant. Abso-@#&&$-lately brilliant.

Zoya is strong. So she's career-oriented. But she's thoughtful and fiercely loyal. And maybe just a lil demotivated and uninspired. But she's lucky too, because she picked right. She did right by Asad. And she's made Asad love her so much that he goes through an entire scheme just so she could feel again. Just so he could be alive again. Coz if he brought her back to life, she's the reason to his every breath. She's cared for him and loved him, she'd always been around.

Sometimes in life all it takes is some pushing to the right (and bright) direction.

And sometimes, you gotta do some necessary evil to achieve that ultimate happiness. Goodness, greatness.

I love you Jules. Thank you for this.

:')

Mwah!

p/s To echo Sagey; But it is love! What else could it be if not?

Edited by farz_parachute - 10 years ago

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wonderful os
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next work

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tashie

@tashie

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Beautifully written! There is reality in this. After some years a couple become so used to each other and also take each other for granted. They have to work at it to keep the romance alive.

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

I MEAN. I don't even KNOW KNOW who AsYa were or are. I don't even know what were they like. I haven't even watched one single episode thoroughly of them, and still I am commenting here.

Yes I read this. And you don't need to know who the characters are to feel what the writer has written and wants to convey. And, my friend, you have done exactly that.

It brought me close to tears, made me smile, made me fill with every kind of feeling they were feeling, IN SPITE of not knowing who they are, I guess I came to know who they actually are.

You. Jules. You brought me to feel for them. Thank you for this amazing writing. No wonder everyone loves you over here. You are love! I love you Jules. yes I do <3