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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uzma_nayeem

yay yay yay yay yayyy...
they got the latter...
now asya will reunite...
i m soo sooo damn happy...
plzz plzz plzz plzz update soon...


i knw u r tooo happy 😉
will update tonight...
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going to update in a while...😛
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going to update in a while... 😳
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Salam...
Thank you sooo much for being here on "Adhoori Mohabbat" thread...
When i had started this story i was not sure bcox it was an emotional start but when u ppl showed ur love towards this story i was literally relaxed...
Actually its my favorite 1 among my work... i love this story...
My "thank you" is not justified with ur love and support so here is an update for u guys...
Enjoy...
Love Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Adhoori Mohabbat


Banner Credit goes to Immortal Love... 🤗


Part 18 A:

Ayesha was in hospital with Aman as he was not feeling well... she wanted to inform Khans and Arman but she decided not to disturb them at bight so she waited for the morning but the morning came with the shock of her life... Aman was not fine... doctors suggested an operation for Aman but that was risky too... but after that operation Aman can spend a normal life... like he too can play outside games... he can, run, jump and do everything like other children... but the risk was too high... Ayesha can't handle such situation alone...
Asad held the letter in his hands and took a deep breath and started reading that letter...
Ayesha,
I don't know how you will react after reading that letter but I have to do it... I know I m not there with you to support you but I really believe that your friend Arman will be always there for you... Life is too cruel beta... it didn't give us a second chance... but there are some lucky people who enjoy the second chance after paying a lot... Allah has blessed you with 2nd life beta... I m going to unfold your life's biggest truth beta... as you know I m a neurosurgeon... there was a patient admitted in our hospital and I operated her... she had an accident... but Allah has some other plans... she was expecting... the baby was safe and sound but that patient had to suffer from Amnesia... in simple words she lost her memory... when I met that patient she was unable to remember herself or her family... we were going to tell her the entire truth but suddenly I thought about the little life that was growing inside her... if we had told her that then she can loss her mental balance too or may be she can try to harm herself... I really felt bad for that baby... I wanted to save that baby... I lied to that patient that she is my daughter and her b.f left her after taking advantage of her...
I know I m bad... but it's true... my daughter Ayesha Khan died two years ago as her b.f left her with a child... she attempted suicide... my daughter was too immature to handle such situations... but now as I told my patient that she is my daughter and she had just a normal memory loss and she believed me... actually she is a gem by heart... that's why she agreed easily... I told her that there is nobody in our family... she just wanted to be alone... but I reasoned her to live for her baby... she started living as Ayesha Khan... I was scarred what if she remembered everything but after some more test it was clear that her memory can never be back... you are my patient beta... you are not my daughter but I always treated you as my own daughter... when Aman was born... I felt that my one lie gave a new life to you and your son... I know you are thinking that why I m saying this now... life... life is too cruel beta... I m feeling like I will die soon that's why I m writing a letter for you... I have transferred all my property at your name... and guess what you are reading this letter after my death with my will papers... I m sorry Ayesha... I don't know can I call you Ayesha or not but you are my daughter and nobody can snatch this right from me... I know you will take care of Aman but Ayesha remember one thing Aman needs a father too... I m not saying that go and marry someone but try to move on... Arman is like your brother... he will support you too... Ayesha I don't know how to say but please forgive me beta... I m sorry beta... I m giving you a new life... Ayesha Khan's life... be happy always...
Your baba...
Asad fell on his knees after reading the letter... tears were rolling down from her eyes... he was unable to react... he don't know if he should be happy as he found his Zoya or he should be sad as Ayesha was gone with... Aman... his son Aman... how can he be so dumb... he can't recognize his own blood... his own son...
Suna thaa guzra huwa wakt phir nahee aata
Suna thaa bichray huwe log phir nahee miltay
Suna thaa rait mein tau phool khil nahe saktay
Suna tuaa pyar faqat ek baar hi hota hai
Yeh morr kaisa meri zindagi mein aaya hai
Bichar gaya thaa jo shaks aaj laut aaya hai
Sunheray wakt ki saughaat le kar aaya hai
Kuraidnay se phir se zakhm rasnay lagay hain
Jo bujh gaye thay woh deyey phir se bharaknay lagay hain
Mere laboon per hain chispaan kaee sawaal is kay
Machalti raatoon ke hain rat-jaggay in aankhoon mein
Zara qareeb aao ke raat baaqi hai
Ke raakh mein koi shoula sulagh raha hai abhi ...
Asad: Aman... Aman is my son ammi... he is my son... he cried looking at Dilshad...
Arman: how's that possible... he said with curiosity...
Asad: she is my Zoya... Ayesha is Zoya only... she was there with me and... and I didn't recognize her... I m too bad ammi... I m too bad...
Dilshad: no Asad... its not the right time to cry and curse yourself... mjhy meri beti is ghar main wapis chahieye... sun rahy ho na tum???
Asad: ammi... he hugged his mother...
On the other hand, Ayesha was with Aman and telling him that he will be fine soon...
Aman: mama...
Ayesha: hmm... she said controlling her emotions...
Aman: app Mr. Khan ko bula sakty ho... mjhy unhy bye bolna tha...
Ayesha: don't talk like this shona... apko kuch nahi hoga...
Aman: app Mr. Khan ko kaho na yahan aany ko mjhy milna hai...
Ayesha: mama abhi khud ja kar Mr. Khan ko ly kar ayengi bacha... she said kissing his hands...
Aman: I love you mama...
Ayesha: mama loves you too shona...


Scroll down plzzz...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Part 18 B:

Ayan and other family members were crying too... Nuzhat was explaining everything to Arman... he was shocked to hear but after seeing AsYa pic he believed them...
Arman: appi Zoya hain... or app logo ne mjhy pehly kyun nahi btaya... arry mujh se to pocha hota... mjhy unki memory loss k bary main pata tha...
Asad: tumhy pata tha???
Arman: haan bhaijan... mjhy pata tha... Ayesha I mean Zoya appi k baba ki death k bad jab koi nahi aya tab unho ne btaya k unki memory loss ka problem hai to wo kisi ko nahi janti hain...
Ayan: eska matlab Mona ko pata hai k she is suffering from Amnesia...
Asma: obviously Ayan... jab unhy hosh aya hoga to pocha hoga na...
Asad: I have to go... mjhy Zoya ko ghar lana hai... Aman ko ghar lana hai... he stood up and wiped his tears...
Asma: bhaijan rukieye... app aisy nahi kar sakty...
Asad: she is my wife Asma... she needs me...
Ayan: agar Ayesha ko aisy btaya to ho sakta hai wo apna mental balance kho den... we have to be careful bhaijan...
Asad: okay... but now I have to go... Arman tum mere sath chalo she trusts you more than me...
Arman: haan bhaijan chalieye... main appi ko call kar deta hoon... pata nahi wo beach house hain ya phir ghar pe... he called her but she was not picking her cell phone...
Asad: Arman I m feeling there is some problem... tum landline pe call karo plzzz...
Arman called on landline and their servant informs him that Ayesha is not there...
Arman: appi ghar nahi aayi...
Asad: kyaa matlab wo ghar nahi aayi... wo apny ghar gayi hogi... she was angry at you so she must be at beach house...
Arman: haan par Aman... he was not fine... wo beach house nahi gayi hongi...
Asad: Ya Allah... I hope Aman is fine... kya zaroorat thi app logo ko usy shadi k liye force karny ki...
Dilshad: Asad jaha etna intezar kiya hai beta thora or sahi... Allah pe bharosa rakho... wo dono theek hongy...
Arman was calling his friends to search Ayesha as they can't be in Mumbai in few minutes... Haider was the quick one he booked 3 tickets for Mumbai... he thought that Arman must be there when they told Zoya about her family... Asad was feeling like something bad is going to happen and just then Asma received a call from hospital... after finishing the call, she told them she needed to be there in hospital and saying so she left... Arman got a call from his friend who informed him that Ayesha is not there in Mumbai... Haider again took a major step and called airport and asked about Ayesha and he got a shock in reply...
Haider: Asad... Ayesha I mean Zoya is not in Mumbai... in fact she didn't board the flight...
Asad: how's that possible Haider... wo Mumbai ja rahi thi or...
Haider: par Chutki Mumbai nahi gayi...
Asad: aisa kesy ho sakta hai Haider???
Haider: Asad she was at airport but she left from there... even her luggage is still at airport...
Asad: Ya Allah... I hope wo dono theek hain... or Zoya yahi Bhopal main hi hai... eska matlab humy usy yahi dhondna hai... Ayan Haider tum dono alag jaga dhomdy jao or main Arman k sath jata hoon...
Haider: haan mjhy lagta hai wo Dargah pe hogi... she was quite disturbed...
Asad: jesy hi Zoya ka pata chaly tum log foran mjhy inform karo gey... or haan... he stopped in his sentence as he felt her presence... he looked at the door but nobody was there...
Arman: bhaijan kya hua???
Asad: I felt like she is here...
Arman: how's that possible bhaijan... appi yaha kyun ayen gi...
Asad: wo hamesha se yahi thi Arman... mjhy hi pata nahi chala...
Arman: I understand but... he stopped as he found Asad starring at the door with teary eyes... he too looked at the door and found Ayesha there...
Asad was feeling her presence but when he looked back at the door she came there... he was seeing her after a night but his heart was feeling the same sensation after 5 long years...
Duniya Main Kitni Hain Nafratein...
Phir Bhi Dilon Main Hain Chahatein...
Duniya Main Kitni Hain Nafratein...
Phir Bhi Dilon Main Hain Chahatein...
Mar Bhi Jayein Pyaar Waale...
Mit Bhi Jayein Yaar Waale...
Zinda Rehti Hain Unki Mohabbatein...
Zinda Rehti Hain Unki Mohabbatein...
Ayesha came inside the house and moved towards Asad... she didn't bother to look at other family members and she was jut looking at Asad with pleading eyes...
Asad was going with the flow of emotions... Allah had separated them years back... his findings came to an end a month back and his all hopes were crashed... but Allah had something planned foe them as they were living in the same house... he was with her... with his Zoya... but she didn't remember him... and he cursed himself for not recognizing her... he just wanted to hug her and cried his heart out and nothing more...
Ayesha wanted Asad to be with his son at that moment and she can do anything to take him to the hospital... she came to Asad and he was about to hug her when she fell on her knees... Asad was shocked at her behavior but her next move stabbed his heart... She joined her hands together in front of him... he was rooted at his spot...
Ayesha: Aman needs you...
Asad got another shock of his life when she spoke about Aman... it means he is not fine... his sixth sense was right... he didn't react so Arman came to him and placed hand on his shoulder and nodded him... he composed himself and reached on her level...
Asad: what happened to Aman???
Ayesha: he... he is in hospital... he wanted to be with you... I know I m selfish but my son needs you... she cried...
Asad: Zo... Ayesha stop crying... I m coming... Aman will be fine... he wiped her tears...
Ayesha: thank you... I know it's very small word but all I can say a thank you to you... we should go now... Asma is waiting for us...
Asad: Asma???
Ayesha: yeah she was called for Aman only... or wo Aman k pass hai tab hi to main yaha aayi hon... lets go...
Asad: hmm we should leave... and Aman will be fine in fact he have to be fine... Allah can't do this to me...
Ayesha: sorry???
Asad: leave it... Ayan...
Ayan: ji bhaijan app jaiye... we will be there in a while...
Asad and Ayesha reached at hospital and rushed to Aman's room... Asad looked him... tears made their way... come on... he had met his friend months back but he was seeing his son for the first time that too in critical condition... he made his way towards his bed where he was asleep... he creased his hair and on his slight touch Aman opened his eyes...
Aman: Mr. Khan...
Asad: I m not talking to you...
Aman: kyun???
Asad: you promised me that you will never leave me... haan phir ab kya hua... he cried...
Aman: I have to go Mr. Khan...
Asad: don't say like this... plzzz...
Aman: achaa listen... mjhy app se kuch kehna tha...
Asad: hum aram se bat karengy Aman... app rest karo...
Aman: mjhy na apki wife ko dekhna hai...
Asad: Zoya ko???
Aman: haan jab main un se milonga to unhy btaonga k app un se boht pyaar karty ho...
Asad was unable to react... his son was talking about his death so easily... he kissed on all over his face...
Kya Be Basi Hai Yeh...
Kya Majbooriyan...
Hum Pass Hain...
Phir Bhi Kitni Hain Dooriyan...
Jism Tu Jaan Main...
Teri Pehchan Main...
Mil Ke Bhi Na Milen...
Yeh Hai Kesa Bharam...
Yeh Hain Tere Karam...
Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham...
Na Juda Hongey Hum...
Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham...
Ayesha was watching them from the window... she was unaware of their talk but she was sure that Asad loves her son... he too can't see him in pain... she rushed inside the room an sat on bed as Asad was sitting on the stool near Aman's bed...
Ayesha: so much talking haan...
Aman: mama apko pata hai yah ape koi hain jo roty huway bilkul achy nahi lagty... he pointed at Asad...
Asad: I m not crying... he lied...
Aman/Ayesha: liar...
Asad: now you are in mama's team right???
Aman: Mr. Khan app bhool rahy ho we are Khan so we are in same team na...
Asad: yeah now we are in same team... forever...
Ayesha: Aman... abhi apko injection dia jaye ga... us k bad app so jao gey phir na apko alag room mein ly jayen gy... mama vaha nahi hongi par...
Aman: I know mama... or agar...
Ayesha: just stop all this and listen to me... operation k bad mera beta bilkul theek ho jaye ga... like other normal children...
Aman: mama main abhi bhi normal hoon... Mr. Khan kya main alien hoon???
Asad: no Mr. Khan you are handsome than me... now be a good boy or mama jo bta rahi hain achy se suno... main doctors se bat kar k ata hoon... he kissed his forehead and turned but Aman held his hand...
Asad: now what???
Aman: app meri mama ka khayal rakho gey???
Asad: hum dono apki mama ka khayal rakhen gey... I promise... he left the room as he was sure Aye... no his Zoya will surely question him... that's why he left them alone...
Asad came and found his family there and he asked Asma about Aman's health and she told him that its risky but necessary... he was sure that Aman will be fine... Allah can't be so cruel... Asma told them Ayesha wanted to delay operation for some hours as she wanted to be with Aman... so operation was going to place after 3 hours... all were tensed and praying to Allah for Aman's safety when Ayesha came outside the room...
Ayesha: Asma... go and operate him...
Asma: lekin app ne kaha tha...
Ayesha: jo main chahti hoon lazmi to nahi wesa ho... just go and start your work... she stated blankly...
Arman was there and he signaled Asad not to interrupt and he came to her...
Arman: appi kya hua???
Ayesha: har kisi ko apni marzi karni aati hai... meri to life hi nahi hai... she cried...
Arman: aapi app yaha aram se bethain or btayen kya hua... he made her sit on the chairs available in the corridor...
Ayesha: I m not answerable to you... she stood up and about to go when Arman stopped her again...
Arman: appi???
Ayesha: Aman ne kuch kaha kya???
Ayesha: I have to go...
Arman: kahan ja rahi hain app... Aman ka operation...
Ayesha: he doesn't need me Arman... he doesn't need me... she cried...
Arman hugged her and calmed her down... he made her sit again and asked him the reason...
Asad was observing her moves... he wanted to erase her pain and be there with her but he stopped himself for her safety only...
Ayesha: he wanted me to... to fulfill his last wish Arman... she hiccupped...
Asad and other members got another shock by hearing this... Asad was feeling her pain... being a parent he can understand her pain...
Arman: Aman will be fine aapi... he pressed her hands to assure her...
Ayesha: I know but Aman...
Arman: kya kaha Aman ne???
Ayesha: I failed Arman... I failed... I m not a good mother...
Arman: aapi you are the best mother... app btao bat kya hai...
Ayesha: no I m not good Arman... I m unable to fulfill his wish...
Arman: appi just stop all this and tell me the reason...
Ayeshs: he wanted to meet his father...
Precap: Mood nahi hai...


Sooo that's it...
hope u like it...
ignore my mistakes plzzz...
Anopama i tried to use more English and typed the letter in English only... hope u like it...
leave ur replies and likes...
next update till 60+ likes and 30+ replies...
with love Ashii...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 4 aarzo, jas, amu aroo, nilu, niya, abi, sasir, h.e.n.a, anopama, mayur, asif
sorry if i forgot some 1 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
unres

sorry 4 d late comnt
updt was aweome
Asad got 2 know d truth
halaki it was bad 2 read her letter
Aman ki baten sunke i got sad poor fellow
usse jaldi theek kar do
Aman ne Zoe ye manga i thought Asad se shadi ko bolega
ok mayb woh wish Asad ke liye hai😆
thanx 4 pm & res😊
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow gr8 part
Finally eveyone knows ayesha is zoya
I hope aman become fine soon
Omg aman wanted to meet his father
Excited for next part
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
Thanx for res

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