ESHAAS - SAAHIL SS UPDATED LAST PART on PAGE 25G / 3-12-2014 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi 😊 give us update plzzz we are missing sahil badly so kindly give us our sahil dose
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Just read all parts. Very interesting storyline. Sanam's anger and Aahil's guilt is very well portrayed. I like your fast paced storytelling. 👏
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PART - 5


BIGGEST truth of his life come in front of him like this. What he do. Enjoyed of knowing she is his daughter or dipped in sorrows because of her condition. She is dying every moment and his all money and power fails to gave new life to her, till now he was aware of his sin only but now only he will realize what is the pain of loosing who is close one to you.

The one never believe on god,today his every fibre were praying for sake of her life. All three only praying for good. Sanam suddenly noticed him and was amused seeing him praying for Saanya.

God answer their prayers and docs sucessded in saving little life. She was shifted to ICU,still under observation till she regain her concious back. All 3 encloced the doc and enquired about her.

'right now i cant say anything. We save her life,but she is so small. After getting her concious we will tell you clearly.' he told them clearly. 'after 14 hours she will revive and open her eyes. Doc do some test to know exact about her. They wait till reports come ad wont allowed anyone to visit inside. Sanam was dying to embrace her but not allowed to do so. They are fortunate as her reports are normal. 'though her reports are normal but remind one thing,do take care of her very well and make sure she will get what she desired for.' Doc cautioned,before allowing them to meet her.

Sanam stopped Aahil outside,not giving permession to see her. Aahil's heart bleeds. He too wants love her but stopped himself as he knew if he force then definately Sanam will hurt only,which he wont afford.


She went near her and kissed on her face numerous time. Her life is breathing again in her arms. Aahil viewing all from outside and felt happy. Suddenly Saanya asked something which shaked Sanam deep inside. 'mumma papa kya kabi nahi aayenge? Mujhe chot lagi hai,why he wont come?' her voice carried a gloominess and complaint both,of not getting her father with her.


'Saanya...' Sanam was thought of telling her that her father will never come but Rehan intrupts,before she broke her heart.

'kisne kaha ki princess k papa nahi aayenge. Princess apke papa yaha hi hai.' Rehan told her and Sanam was grewing angry on him.


'Saanya aap aram karo mumma abhi aati hai.' She made her laid back.


'nai mujhe papa se milna hai.' hearing about her father now she cant hold it for long. She want to see him.

'Saanya jidd nahi karte.' She said strongly and dragged Rehan out of the room. 'why you lied her?' she argued.


'Sanam kya jhoot bola hai maine? Aahil is her father and she needs him. Cant you see her craving? How can you behave so rude with her. Sanam she is small kid to understand everything.' Rehan too argued.


'he is her father? Really? Then where is he when she was born? When she first start walking, start talking. On her first birthday. On first day of her school?'


'Exactly my point Sanam. On all this ocassions she missed Aahil's warmth. I know what he done is not forgivable but pls Sanam his remorse is genuine. Tume use maaf nahi karna mat karo,par Sannam Saanya se uska haq to mat cheeno.'


'kis haq ki baat kar rae ho tum Rehan. Aahil is not trust worthy. What if he left her someday. Rehan main Saanya ko koi fake hopes nahi dena chahti.' Sanam was stick to her point.


Aahil overheared their argument. 'pls Sanam trust me. Give me one chance. I want to mend my mistake. Being a father have right on her. I too wanna love her cuddle her,play with her. Pls Sanam allow me to play my part in her life. Every child needs their mother most,but they need father to. Tume mujhe maaf nahi karna to koi baat nahi. Main puri zindagi tumhare nafrat k kam hone k intezar me guzar sakta hu. Par sanya ko mujhse alag mat karo. Sanam trust me main tumpe kabhi koi haq nahi jataunga,par jo gunah mujhse hua hai use sudharne ka ek muka deto. Atleast for Saanya sake.' Aahil pleads joining his hands infront of her. His eyes are wetn 'Sanam marry me please. I know you hate me and wont able to trust me and today i dont have anything to prove my self. But i promise if you give me chance i will prove myself a very good father. Please Sanam' Aahil pleads.


'Sanam pls jidd mat karo. Dont forgot doc instruct us granting her all wishes. Apne liye na sahi Saanya k liye hi sahi,is rishte ko naam de do. I know its a big decision for you and not easy. But i am sure you love Saanya more then any other thing so think wisely and made your choice. You want her happiness or your anger? Choice is yours Sanam.' Rehan intrupts and shake her all believes.

Sanam was in turmoil. What she do now. One side is Saanya's need and happiness and on other side her lifetime pain. Will she ever able to accept him. How she can face a man daily who she hates most. How can she alloed him to enter in her life as a husband? How will he manage when her culprit roam around her all the time? Kya karu kuchh samjh nahi aa raha.' all the questions banging her head and tormenting her dreadfully.
Edited by richadhami - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
such an emotional update yr...
but loved it...
sanam is over reacting now...
ahil deserve a chance...
thnx for pm and update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Agree with sanam not easy to forgive a rapist who use her.
But again a mother can adjust her self respect and pain for child.
Ahil don't deserve any chance but he is luky that he have child who want him.
Else what he did is not acceptable.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THNXXX 😊 and do show us how and when sanam accept him and how she fall for aahil, superb update brilliantly showed each and every emotion of sanam and aahil and what i say about rehan he is such a true friend of both and wise too
Edited by FATIMA78651 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you for pm ...Agree with sanam not easy to forgive ahil...amazing update I love it ...pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks for pm great part. continue soon update soon.love the way u described their feeling.
love chahat malhotra
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Ty dear :)

Originally posted by: TasriS

Amazing update... I really liked it.

Thanks for pm nd do update soon dear.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: falak333

sooo now ahil know about his daughter...

sanam is not going to forgive him at any cost...
sanaya is critical... that means something major is on the way and rehaan is such a honest frnd...
overall lovely update...
thans for pm...
cont. soon and do pm me..

thanx dear :)

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