ESHAAS - SAAHIL SS UPDATED LAST PART on PAGE 25G / 3-12-2014

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HI GUYS.


I AM NEW HERE. JUST START WATCHING THIS SHOW FROM PAST FEW WEEKS. SO NO IDEA ABOUT THE PAST STORY BUT I LIKES THE PAIR OF AAHIL AND SANAM. SO THOUGHT OF WRITING A SMALL STORY ON THEM.


PLS ITS A REQ IF I HAD WROTE SOMETHING WRONG THEN FORGIVE ME FOR THAT.
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INDEX




Part 1 : Scroll Down



P2 - P4

PART 2



P 3 - P 6


PART 3



P 4 - P9

PART 4



P 5 - P 11

PART 5


PART 6 - PAGE 15

PART 6


P 7 - P 17

PART 7




P 8 - P 19

PART 8


P 9 - P 22

PART 9
P10 - P23

PART 10
LAST PART - PAGE 25


LAST PART
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Part - 1


She is scared to death. Money is her need today. Though even in her worst condition she smile and couraged to lead her life happiy but today she loose all her hope. Her eyes widened and face paniced. Her badi ammi was laying on death bed and hospital aint ready to operate without the amount required. No one is ready to help her. She have her badi ammi on the name of a family,how can she loose her. She plaeds to all for mercy but they flinched her off. Its 8 pm and raining too hard. She cant able to think where she go and to whom for help. Suddenly a familiar figure come across her. Aahil Ibrahim,her class mate. Overhead guy,highly rude and full of attitude. He is the trustee of this hospital and came here to gave check.


She never share good vibes with him. Infact she insults him several time due to his attitude towards poor and helpless. Once he make mock of her self respect and in return she slapped him. That was he last day they saw each other. After almost two years she never thought she can meet him again. Wardboy suggest her to ask for help from him. If he get ready her badi ammi will get spl treatment.

She was highly self respected girl but today situation not alllowing her to show dignity. She moves inside his cabin. He was too in shock and his all hatred towards her freshnup in his mind. Before he shout she joint her hands and ask for help. She is pleading which proof very soothing and healing the pain he get from her slap. It was his turn and he wants to grab it.

Aahil:what happened miss Sanam? Tum to badi badi bate karti thi na ab kya hua?'


Aahil enjoying her helplessness. The drug he just intake few moments before was boosting his ego at no end.


Sanam:i am sorry for everything but pls dont punish my badi ammi. Agr tum docs se kahoge to wo treatment shuru kar denge.

Aahil:but main aisa kyu karunga? I mean what is my profit in this?

Sanam while crying:tum badle me jo bologe wo main karungi.

Sanam is ready to do anything to safe her life. Her badi ammi which is not only her gurdian after parents but her source of life.

Aahil:soch lo?
Aahil cautioned her but she shook her head. Aahil smiled wickedly and told his condition. Sanam turned angry and glared him.

Aahil:i wont force you. Decision is your. This or forget about treatment.


Sanam was in turmoil. What to do. If she agreed she loose her diginity but if she wont she loose her life. She dont have a enough time to think much so she agreed on his term. Aahil called the dean and asked for the surgery. On his single command all came to an action and start her treatment. Aahil's drugs making him intoxic. He clenched her wrist and dragging her out. She objects but he put his finger on her lips and shut her mouth.


Aahil:shhh...beggers are not choosers. I granted your wish and now its your turn.


Sanam:par badi ammi.

Aahil:unka treatment shuru ho gaya hai jisme kafi time lagega,till them finish our work.


Next she was in his car which he droved towards his farmhouse, Far away from the city. He took her to his master bedroom full lavished. He threw her on his bed and hovered over her. She felt disgust but wont have any choice.


For next two hours he misused her and she bear all the pain for her badi ammi. He was rough as he is pouring his anger while using her. Sanam was like a dead body. Neither she respond nor she complaints. After getting tired he slipped from her and went to sleep soon. Sanam was crying silently. She come out of bed and start covering her naked body.

Her whole body is aching sply her feminine parts,still she couraged and managed to reach hospital. Where she found her badi ammi left the world forever. Sanam broked completely. For whom she sacrifised herself,left her alone in this cruel world. Due to delay in treatment they failed to save her. Sanam falls on floor and lost her concious. Wardboy sprinkled water on her face. She regain her concious but not senses. She turned stoned and hugged the body of her badi ammi. Whole night she stayed like this.


Now its time to buried her. She only had one gold chain which she sell to her landlord for money and do the ritual of burrying her badi ammi. She turn mute. Her life is over. Nothing left. Rest whole day she sat near the palce her badi ammi burried. In night rain again started and Sanam start walking. She walked blindly no idea where she was heading. Suddenly she hit with a car and falls down on road. Her head injured and she lost her concious. One man in black suit come out of the car. He turend her and glance her face.


He quickly carried her and made her laid in his car. He commands the driver who run the car at full pace. He reached to his hotel and gave first aid to her. Soon his driver brough doc who checked her. He assured him that she was alright. It was just a minor injury.

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It was a very pleasent morning of London. Day start with a new energy. Sanam lost everything still today she have a reason to smile.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great concept continue soon waiting
love chahat malhotra
pm me when ever u update. try to continue soon
Edited by chahatmalhotra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That's a wonderful concept ...loved it...continue soonish ..and is the story moving in flashback period... in present is Sanam in London..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just superb
wow u wrote on Sahil gr8
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dark aahil, nice...
For a girl it's very difficult to love someone who put her through trauma of losing her dignity. Let's see how Aahil manages that.
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Originally posted by: zynia890

That's a wonderful concept ...loved it...continue soonish ..and is the story moving in flashback period... in present is Sanam in London..

dear start is in present but in the end time will leap... I will clear in next up :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dark ahil ouu hard to see him like this
Great job
Poor sanam

Thanks
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Originally posted by: richadhami

dear start is in present but in the end time will leap... I will clear in next up :)

OK continue soon...

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