Asya ff: Its You Forever! updated P.4|pg.40 - Page 23

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song : Pattaka Guddi[ female version] from the movie Highway...
[ please search it by name, I cant find a proper link for the audio to hear]
Haan..
Mitthe paan di gillori
Lattha suit da Lahori
Fatte maar di phillauri
she walked towards the water slowly. Playing with the waters with her fingers, she took some water in her palms and splashed it on her face. She shook her head at the cool freezing water. She smiled widely and looked back when she was called. The moment she looked back she was met with a huge splash of water and then it continued in series. All of them didn't realized when they all were under the waterfall, bathing and enjoying the natural water. After a good few minutes they went and changed into dry clothes


Jugni mel mel ke
Kood phaand ke
Chakk chakaudde jaave

. Zoya came out wearing a white shirt , black jeans and a colourful scarf, her hairs were wet so they were open. While all others were dressed completely as they felt cold. They all started teasing each other and and then chased each other. They all tripped and fell down on the grass down and tickled each other to no end. Suddenly najma pointed towards the huge rocks and they all ran to the spot.

Maula tera maali
O Hariyaali jungle waali
Tu de har gaali pe taali
Uski kadam kadam rakhwaali

The girls started walking on the rocks trying to balance and spread their hands on both the sides while Ayaan and Rehan clicked their pictures, and the pictures semmed so natural that they were worth capturing. The girls did it and was about to complete the path when suddenly humera disbalanced and Ayaan caught her while Rehaan clicked the moment. . They all jumped down and kept their legs in the water flowing and stood between the rocks lifting their jeans up. Later they were called for river corssing and they made their way towards it.

Ainve lok laaj ki soch soch ke
Kyun hai aafat daali
Tu le naam Rab ka, naam Sai ka
Ali Ali Ali Ali
Naam Rab ka, naam Sai ka
Ali Ali Ali Ali
they all sat stood in a que and chance by chance were made to do river crossing. Najma was very scared so they all decided to go in 3 ways. Zoya and Rehan went together with Najma in between one , while Humera and Ayaan came later. As they were crossing, all the three posed together and Ayaan clicked their pictures. They all finally crossed the river path and were too happy to confess. They all enjoyed so much that Ayaan, Zoya and Rehaan again went after pleading their teacher, while Najma purposely clicked a solo picture of Zoya for her bhaijaan and later all the pictures.


Sharf Khuda ka, Zarf Khuda ka
Ali Ali Ali Ali..
Sharf Khuda ka, Zarf Khuda ka
Ali Ali Ali Ali..
Ali ho.. Ali ho..
Chali o.. re chali chali, chali o..

they all decided to return back as it was getting late. They all sat in the bus and because it was not much crowded they removed their heads from the window and started patting the bus singing songs. As they stopped for dinner, they excitedly sat on the grassy ground in the dhaba and ordered all the desi and oily things to eat. Later when they ate Zoya, Najma and Ayaan sang and danced around the fire set up in between and later the whole class joined in. After good dances and enjoyment, they all retired to their staying venue and dozed off.

Ali Ali teri gali
Woh to chali..
Ali Ali..
Teri gali chali o..

they got up and changed into track suit, and made their way out for hill climbing. They were asked to do exercises and warm up so that they are ready to climb the hill with the help of rope. They all were asked to run which they did less and enjoyed more, hitting each other playfully or making fun when they do exercise. After a lot of exercise they were finally made ready to climb the hill.

Instrumental Music...

Finally they were ready to climb the hill. They challenged that who will climb the first. They all started to climb as per the guidance, and co incidentally they all reached to the top together and shouted together, holding hands and laughed like anything. They all made a que and danced together in a line, jumping and making faces. Later they gave different different poses, like the famous RK poses, sometimes making fun of others, don and all.



O jugni o.. patakha Guddi o
Nashe mein udi jaaye re haaye re
Sajje khabbe dhabbe killi o

Later they all were asked to change so that they can go to visit small sights of farm and trekking. They all were given the routes and said that they can go and visit these places. These 5 first went to the small farms. They all walked into the smalls of sugarcane and asked the farmers about it and met the people there.


Patakha Guddi O
Nashe mein udi jaaye re haaye re
Sajje khabbe dhabbe killi o

After hearing about it, when others were roaming, she nudged Rehan and they both saw small children playing stepo, so they raced towards it, in which Rehan won. They both later joined the kids and played with them when others saw them and went towards them and started playing steppo with them.

Maula tera maali
O Hariyaali jungle waali
Tu de har gaali pe taali
Uski kadam kadam rakhwaali

Steppo was just the start, they all later played cricket, taking wickets and runs and played other games with marbles even. They taught the village children proper English and had a gala time with them. They all saw tractor and ran towards it and were shocked to see Zoya already sitting on its bonet and poking her tounges. They all opened their mouth in shock and ran to her and took their places on it.


Ainve lok-laaj ki soch soch ke
Kyun hai aafat daali
Tu le naam Rab ka, naam Sai ka
Ali Ali Ali Ali
Naam Rab ka, naam Sai ka
Ali Ali Ali Ali
while they all sat on the tractor, Zoya got down and went to have some sugarcane pieces, she started eating hers and distributed the other to all of them. She saw a truck and moved towards it. They all set in it quietly viewing the beautiful sceneries that were passing by. They sang songs and talked in between but were quite tired and sat down on the dried gass and just took in the view.

Instrumental Music

They all reached their residence venue and changed into night suits and went down to have dinner laughing on the jokes passed by several students and had their dinner in pure pleasure. Later they all went to take jackets and shawls and sat around the bonfire. They all talked, sang, danced, joked and shared their experiences. They shared even a emotional moment when they realized that tomorrow is their last day.. But they were very happy and decided to not ruin the moment and enjoy. The whole batch played dumsharas and antakshari.


Maine to tere tere utte chhadiyaan doriyan
Maine to tere tere utte chhadiyaan doriyan

She saw Ayaan lost somewhere, she shook him while he just shook his head in denial and got up and went to his room. Zoya followed him there. As he entered she saw him extremely upset and then she saw him crying silentily. She got worried and went towards him, when asked he immediately hugged her. She was shocked, she turned her gaze towards the door to see Najma there, even she was upset. She called her and Najma went and placed her head in Zoya's lap.

Zoya : kya hua?

Ayaan : I wished Zoya, kash bhaijaan bhi humare sath hote ha, kash 3 saal pehle ye sab hua hi nahi hota, to aj hume yu chup chup kar nahi milna padta! Kal sham tak hum sab vapas chalejaenge!! Hum to tab bhi bat karte h par tumne to aj tak unki tasveer bhi nahi dekhi!! Ye ksei khwaish h kit um inhe tabhi dekhogi jab vo yaha aenge??

Zoya : mera man h ayaan!! M unhe tabhi dekhungi jab vo yaha aenge!! Kal hum jaenge phir hum apna plan execute karenge!! Aur bas!! Phir no more waiting!! H na? now you both get up and chalo niche chalte hai, sab wait kar rahe hai!! And kal hum jab dua karne jaenge tab ye dua karna ki sab theek hojae, okay?

Maine to tere tere utte chhadiyaan doriyan
Maine to tere tere utte chhadiyaan doriyan

They both nodded and were about to go out when they saw Humera and Rehaan seeing them, and next moment Humera came and hugged her while Ayaan and Najma also hugged her. They all smiled and then looked towards Rehan who was smiling they narrowed their eyes and Rehan scratched the back of his head and hugged them.

Rehaan : hum sab cricket ki team nahi lag rahe hai!!

They all went and joined others and later retired to their rooms and woke up next day packed their luggage and girls wore Anarkali's. Zoya wore Yellow anarkali with pink borders, which was till the ground, while Najma wore Blue and White knee length anarkali and Humera wore cream and pink anarkali. They all went to the mosque first.

Tu to pak Rab ka banka baccha, raj-dulara tu hi
Pak rab ka baanka bachcha, uska pyara tu hi
Maalik ne jo chinta di to, door karega wohi

They all went and sat down on the either sides, girls on the girls side and boys on the boys side. Together they raised their hands and bow their heads down and asked for everyone's good and later what they all wanted. They went and tied the strings and roamed in the mosque taking in its beauty and feeling finally at peace. They all came out and wished that everthings gets fine.


Naam Ali ka leke tu to.. naach le gali gali
Le naam Ali Ali..
Naach le gali gali, le naam Ali Ali..
Naach le gali gali, le naam Ali Ali..
they all later went to an orphanage and helped in serving the children and played with them. The children recited poems and songs, some even danced while the students were shocked and awestruck of these children. Later they give them some gifts and donated whatever they can to the orphanage.


Ali oo.. Ali oo.. Ali oo o..

Tu le naam Rab ka, naam Sai ka
Ali Ali Ali Ali
Naam Rab ka, naam Sai ka
Ali Ali Ali Ali

Ooo .. ooo

They all were aksed to walk around the city and visit wherever they want but reach the destination by the fixed time, so they can start to home. They went to the shop were they gave the regional dresses. They all ore those dresses and clicked various photographs. they also went to shopping. They bought various things as a memory of visiting the place, and with each others help they chosed the things, while the boys teased girls for shopping, the girls were no less to ease them on every single thing. They clicked many pictures from the views. They roamed in the whole city, meeting various people.

Jugni rukh peepal da hoi
Jis nu pooje taa har koi
Jisdi phasal kise na boyi
Ghar vi rakh sake na koi

They came to know that there was a toy train which gave a full visit of the city and decided to go with that. While Najma, Humera and Rehaan boarded the train Ayaan and Zoya started running when the train started. Zoya reached first and Ayaan the next. They all laughed.

Zoya : train ya bus pakadne m mera koi muqabla nhai hai!! To forget it!!

While everyone laughed and took the seats. The girls squeeled on every little thing they saw, specially Najma and pointed them too. Zoya, Rehan and Ayaan only shook their heads and join them too. A later while Zoya spotted Rohan, and at the same moment even he saw her. He quickly retreated his gaze down. She gestured him to join them, while he just denied hesitantily. She got up and went to him. She took his hands and made him join them. Rohan was shocked to receive such a warm welcome.

Rastaa naap rahi marjaani
Patthi baarish da hai paani
Jab nazdeek jahaan de aani
Jugni maili si ho jaani

They got down of the train and made their way towards the destination. In between the spotted a horse cart and ran to catch it. The all took a ride in it. The girls posed as If they were princess, indivisually and the boys became the horse cart driver one by one and clicked the pictures turn by turn. They all reached the bus stand and shared the last happy moments. All the students had tears in their eyes. They all knew these 4 days were the best days of their life. They all cheered and hugged each other. They made their way towards the bus and Zoya just remained out, she gave a sheepish smile to everyone, while everyone shook their heads including the teachers.

Tu le naam Rab da Ali Ali
Jhall Khaleran challi (means pagalpanti karne chali)
Naam rab da Ali Ali
Har darawaza Ali (x2)

And the bus started. Everyone started counting and she started running, and exactly at the count of 10 she caught hold of the pillar and jumped in while everyone hooted. They continued playing and stopped in between when it was time for dinner. They all took their own sweet time to eat and return. Again they did all the madness they can. Tired they all slept. When ZOya mde sure that everyone slept she moved towards the door of the bus. Taking hold of one pillar and stood by the gate.

Sai Re.. Sai Re..

Maine to tere tere utte chadiyaan doriyan (x6)

She stood by the door letting the tears roll. She was upset would be an understatement. She was happy that they were together for these four days after 3 long years. She would cherish this memory forever. She smiled, letting the cool breeze caress her face.she missed Asad, she caressed the bracelet given by him. It was hard for her, to convince others as she herself wasn't at peace. She felt a tap on her shoulder, she saw Rehan gesturing her to come inside. She moved in and walked towards the seat and laughed when saw Ayaan sleeping with his mouth opened wide, while humera and Najma slept to the opposite sides, so that Zoya can sleep in between. Rehan took seat next to Ayaan while Zoya sat in between Najma and Humera. Seeing everyone sleep and themselves getting no sleep, they chatted and saw pictures they clicked...later dozed off

oo.. oo... oo..



they all woke to find themselves back in their city. They smiles, unloaded the luggage and got down hugging each other last time. They bid their farewells and gestured to meet the next dat and execute the plan.

so, how was it?
everything has changed, lets see what is stored in for them!
please tell that
was it good, bad, worth reading or not, please do leave your reviews and hit like!!
hope you have enjoyed reading the song sequence as it what took the most time. I heard the song many times and again heard it before and after writing every scene. hope you liked it!!
ignore the mistakes please!!
Edited by riddhi1206 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
unres

i m 1st
well lovely update...
all met except asya 😕
hope they met soon...
thnxxx fo pm...
do pm me for nxt prt...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 4 my buddies luv u all 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres
Riddi,to be honest I don't know from where to start.
Okay lets start from the begining:
well just before chapter-3 start U've said there won't be Asad(though he was on phone-call scene); at that very moment I've been wondering: How will be the Update that to without Asad?
and when I read the whole update,I just love it.❤️

talking about the Update
it was AMAZING,some what funny&somewhere emotional
Najma-Ayaan&toopari Zoya(its was funny)
poor Rohan🤣 🤣 🤣

Najma capture solo pic of Zoya for her Asad bhaijaan(cho Cute little Tamatar)

But for me the best part was: Zoya crying missing Asad&caressing the bracelet given by him.

and Riddi do Rehaan have feelings for Zoya
Anyways,
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superbbb
loved it to core
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow its wonderful loved it
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome.. hope to c asya's scene
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
loved it
eagerly waiting for asya encounter
plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy...Riddhi a.k.a Doll..
Well thanx for the P.M dearr..
It was a very good and a worth reading filler update...
So many emotions...were going around but Zoya , Ayaan ,Humeira , Najma & Rehaan also...enjoyed it to the fullest...
Zoya has somewhat has become a elderly sibling to all of them eventhough they are almost of same age...but how she was consoling everyone in that Ayaan's crying part...was very good...and then she brokedown also while missing Asad...
But here she is brave , quirky and smart also...and her entry scene in this update reminded me of JAB WE MET...
Song was also a good choice...
Dilshaad packing stuff for the other 2 is also so endearing and thoughtfull of her...
Iam very happy with this update...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Dilshad knew that all 4 were meeting thatswhy she always packed 2 extra items for them. They spent their time together with fun. Zoya gave good lesson to rohan. Asad told Ayaan not to pressurise Zoya. He heared her voice. They planned to solve the issues between elders. Waiting for asad meeting with all. Rehan was a good friend. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

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