Asya ff: Its You Forever! updated P.4|pg.40

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Posted: 11 years ago
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salut!!! comment cava?? ⭐️

hello everyone , how are u? surprised seeing me here? even I am finding myself is surprised!!😆
but the day is so special that I cant stop myself being here!! 😳
a few minutes ago I started realizing that why the day is so lucky and so happy for me, and I realized I have completed an YEAR on IF, which was certainly one of the best decisions of my life!!
so as I m so happy today here is a treat [ may b punishment 😆] for you all, I am here with a new concept!! 😳
after so much of thinking which story to start first , I decided to this one to go with, although not totally decided what to write , but I know the concept and will start with it!! ⭐️
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Scene 1:
The sun is ready to see off the day and the sky is ready with few tinkling's but seems like the mini stars down are in no mood to leave the ground. Four children busy in their own world running here and there and a small angel staring them with her twinkling eyes.
A cute 6 year old boy trying to break the chain of three other, one his brother, one his cutie pie and one his best friend.
And here he separates his cutie pie but seems like he is failing in breaking this bond of 2 other fellow. They are entwined in such a way that seems no one can ever break it, not even the fate... is it so??
scene 2 :
A 14 year old girl throwing pebbles in the water waiting for someone, tears rolling down her cheeks. A tap on her shoulder made her face him. She immediately got up and hugged him. Both cried for what seems like ages...
breaking the hug, the only words came out from both of their mouth were ,
" will be waiting"
tearing the picture of them, her handed to him and his handed to her, turned away , looking at each other till their fingertips get apart.
Scene 3 :
The same girl now turned up a beautiful lady running here and there playing with her fellow besties. unaware where she was running, she collided with some one , unknown... getting lost in each others orbs...
but are they known, or some strangers? are they made for each other or the destiny is something else stored for these two birds...
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who are the friends , who is the couple, what is the story about?
stay tuned to get your answers !! 😛
here was the so called prolouge!!
how was it??
worth to continue or not? 😕
do give me your reviews!!😳
this will be different from other story ⭐️
the title , i havent decided yet, do give me your suggestions!! 😃
also here there will be 2 3 character sketch as it starts from childhood, so do read them as last time in the other one of mine, people got confused , bcoz of not getting clear with the concept!😆
will continue these stories after my exams, i.e., after september!! 😃
love,
doll
Edited by riddhi1206 - 10 years ago

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KaBhiKiBasanti thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index...

Prolouge : Above
Edited by riddhi1206 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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resdie 😃
unres 😳

yay m first

so our doll is here with a new story 😃 superb.. 👏
firstly congo mongo for completing one year 🤗

ohkay nw Prologue

it's interesting
looks like both were childhood friends
and get separated at the age of fourteen 😭

oh..they r grown up now..and will consider each other as stranger
will love to read more anf soon..no need of disappearing

lol title 😕 how about And they met again?? 😕

acha cont soon
Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i am waiting baby!!!

i hope it's on asya only

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey riddhi...
Congo dear 🥳
We are glad too to have frnd like u...
Awesome prologue. .
Really interesting. ..
Hope its on asya...
Plzz continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome + Intresting Concept...👏

Just Love It...😊

Update Next Part Soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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happy anniversary Basanti...
lovely prologue...
waiting fr the story to unfold...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice prologue
Waiting for an update for getting an answers which u wrote in end. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

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