Asya ff: Its You Forever! updated P.4|pg.40 - Page 22

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Wonderfull n amazing...
wonder wat is rashid hiding...
Asad n zoya gave each other lovely gifts...
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Very nice update.
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Originally posted by: anopama

First I must say sorry for being late and not commenting

But I like to wait for a couple of chapters to get the feel of the story
I loving it so far the title the banner from teri childhood
So the khan and farooqui r friends until a MU
So the kids r friends some seem more
They r inseparable hopefully it stay that way
So asad at 16 was forced to go abroad and study after standing up to his abbu
Anwar and rashid MU I don't know what
But hope it don't harm the wives and the kids
So love ayaan and humi fighting from young
Glad tht anzee came and see Asad before he left and love the gift so he keeps in touch
Love how they give asya their alone time ayaan knows other 2 r clueless
Love asya gifts they exchange and the tears
So she came to the airport to see him off at 14 alone
Love the hug and the whisper together will be waiting for you
Can't wait for more hope they r still together as adults
Continue soon

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yes and no...u will knw wat I mean...once the truth reveals
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very sure ... rashid is hiding something...
serious... just for the sake of
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice & emotional update
Rashid decided that asad will go abroad for further studies. All met each other with tears in their eyes. They wished good luck to asad & their blessings. Curious to know the reason behind rashid behaviour. He did this for anwer safety. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

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hmm everyone is
but there is nothing exciting , it was just needed for the story, to be honest!!
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hello everyone!!
I am here with the next update and to be honest I really enjoyed writing this part, though Asad isn't in this part but I really loved to write this part, and you will also love this part but for that you will have to read song sequence and listen and imagine side by side. it took me 8 hours continuously to type just for you people and I hope that deserve some comments and likes. thank u everyone who commented on the last update and welcome all the new readers!!
hope you like it and enjoy reading as I did in writing. this is super long, round about 5100+ words...I am really excited for the response for this one!!
this one dedicated to pwenCezz_Symrum, hope she gets well soon and also to aarzoo50 as its her birthday!! everyone please wish both of them
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Chapter 3
new entry...
Rehaan Qureshi : Shehzad Sheikh 😊
[ I am sorry, I love Sehaan, seher and Rehaan and cant stop myself to include them in this story, he is actually cute and seher also is very cute]
Rehaan is a new friend of Ayaan, Zoya, Humera and Najma, who joined them an year back. He is a shy but a fun to be around person. He really adores the friendship of these four and finds himself lucky to be a part of them. He is really very concerned for these four, while all of them really finds them fortunate to make him part of their group. more will be known as you will read on.
3 years later...
The sun rose, marking a new morning, a new day and a new chapter. The birds chirped, marking their own presence and giving this chapter a peaceful and pretty start. But somewhere the household wasn't as peaceful as they made. The household was filled with chaos, there an elderly lady ran here and there, checking all the last minute preparations. She was none other than Dilshad Ahmed Khan, the same Dilshad, the mother of the same three siblings, Asad, Ayaan and Najma and the wife of very same Rashid Ahmed Khan , just not the phupi, best friend and bhabhi of the Farooqui's. she came stood in the front of the small photo frame adorning the side table of her bed. She gently picked it up and caressed it lovingly, she closed her eyes and let the lone tear stoll down her cheeks, gently wiping the tear and she pecked the picture.

" bhai !!bhai!! , we have to leave today itself, so please would you make it quick!! "

There came the angry, annoyed yet excited voice of the youngest, cutest and sweetest of all, Najma Ahmed Khan, she was the same only thing changed was she was now grown up not much just by a few years. She smiled and then quickly strolled down and checked all the things.

Dilshad : najma!! Ye ayaan kaha reh gaya? Tumlogo ko late hojaega!

Najma : kya karu ammi...apke lad sahib to ready hone m ladkiyo se zyada times lagate hai!! Huh!!

And there she felt a slap on her head. She winced and rubbed the spot and angrily turned towards her brother, Ayaan Ahmed Khan, the same fun loving , flambouyant boy now just grown up by 3 years.

Najma : agaye!! Varna mujhe to laga tha ki apka koi ane ka plan hi nahi tha!!

Ayaan : ye trip mei chahke bhi nahi miss karunga!! Akhir itne time bad...

He was about to continue when najma held his hand under the table as a gesture to stop. He shook his head and nodded, straighting himself.

Ayaan : kese miss kar sakta hu, najane koi humsafar mmiljaye vahi!!

While najma and dilshad rolled their eyes and slapped their forehead. Dilshad excused herself to see if all the snacks are kept properly while they just stood and smiled at each other.

Ayaan : aj finally!! 3 saal bad hum sab ek sath honge, vo bhi pure 4 dino ke liye!! I and really excited, while najma nodded but warned that it shouldn't reveal in front of anyone otherwise they wont be able to be together again.

Dilshad : Usma!! Sab kuch do do extra rakha h na??

Dilshad questioned her maid who just nodded. Usma was confused so she came near her and hesitantily asked that why does she always keep two extra things with Ayaan and Najma. Dilshad smiled and replied.

Dilshad : kyunki Najma aur Ayaan ke alawa , aur do bache hai mere!! Jinse ab mei nahi milsakti par mujhe pata hai ki aj bhi Ayaan aur Najma undono se milte hai!! Aur iss trip pe bhi ye charo sath hi ja rahe hai!! Isliye mei humesha 4 cheeze rakhti hu!! Samjhi?? Lekin ye kisiko batana mat!!

She came out only to be greeted by a heart warming sight. There her children were talking to their elder borther who was guiding them to take care of themselves and to send all of their pictures and photographs to him, while Ayaan continuously teased that he wants their or ahem...Zoya's pictures, receving oly scolding from him. Hiding behind the pillar she listened this and sent a silent prayer to god , that they all be happy and safe always. She later gave them hints of their arrival, and they closed the topic and ended the call aswell. They all went towards the door as they were getting late. Bidding their farewell they made their way towards the bus stand.

" kaha tha mene late hojaoge!! Ab jaldi karo tum dono, ye ladkiyan bhi na!! kya karu m inka! Ab jaldi karo!! "

There came the voice of a concerned mother scolding her both the daughters, she was none other than the famous over concerned mother, Zeenat Farooqui and the wife of Anwar farooqui. She kept on ranting while her husband kept on consoling her and defending his daughters. Both the daughters hurried and dashed towards the car. Anwar excused himself and quickly made the car ready. In no time they sped off towards the bus stand.

Ayaan : kaha reh gaye ye dono? Sab agaye , bus nikalne wali hai lekin ye don late ke late hi rahenge!! Zarror Zoya ne hi late kia hoga!!

Najma : are Zoya baji hi kyu, hosakta hai Humera baji ne kiya ho!!

Ayaan : humera esa nahi karegi. Mujhe pata h! ye Zoya ka hi kam h, uski rag rag se vakif hu!!

As they were fighting, there came a girl inside breathing heavily and waved at them. While Ayaan and Najma shook their head at her. She was pretty, petite and simply cute . she was none other than, Humera Farroqui, who hasn't changed much and predicted also not to change much. She smiled and took her place next to Najma who imddeiately hugged her.

A few seconds later, teacher arrived and marked the children who were here. Only one who was left was Zoya, which Humera assured is here itself. The teacher smiled and informed the bus will leave now.

Ayaan tapped at her shoulder and asked where was Zoya ? when suddenly the bus started. A worried Ayaan made his way towards the gate of the bus. Shoving the conductor aside , he looked outside to see a beautiful lady running to catch the bus. She was slim, beautiful, smart but right now worried to catch the bus. Ayaan extended his hand while she placed her hand in his and took a jump and came inside the bus. She was heavily panting, she smiled towards her mates who were now smiling at her. She looked towards Ayaan and narrowed her eyes.

Girl : ab to hath chor de , andar agayi hu mei!

Ayaan quickly left her hand while she walked towards the seat, but Ayaan quickly came infront of her seat and raised her eyebrows. For a moment she placed her hand on her waist and tapped her foot and the next moment her hand flew up and slapped Ayaan's forehead. He balanced himself and looked towards the seat that was now occupied by the girl. He shook his head and took the seat next to her.

Ayaan : kya re? itna late kyu kiya, Mona??

Yes, she was none other than the great Zoya Farooqui. She was not all the one , the Zoya which was 3 years back. She was now even more prettier, innocent but in a naughty way, smarter, no more very innocent one, infact even more smarter and she was completely carefree, bubbly, very naughty and all in all an amazing personality.

She smiled and apologized and hugged Najma and her Rabert. She smiled and asked them to come closer.

Zoya : guys!! Because ab hume ye kuch din mile hai, we have to take care ki we use them properly. Inhi 4 dino m hume age kya karna hai ye decide karna hai!! Kyunki ab humare pas hints hai ki kya hua h to hum age plan kar sakte hai!! But we will discuss it all aram se, abhi ke liye just leave it and enjoy!!

She pulled Najma's cheeks and smiled. They talked, played, enjoyed, danced, clicked pictures and did everything possible. Later in afternoon they stopped to have something. They all got down and removed what they bought for snacks, as they wanted to have homemade things. They chatted while eating, even cried little bit missing all the golden moments but then ignored it. Because there was time, they walked into the beautiful garden of the place. The garden had a swing, a small waterfall with clear water and it was surrounded by small mountains. The weather was also not sunny, infact it was cool and refreshing. She removed her sandals and walked on the soft and cool grass. She removed her clutch, rolled her hairs and clurched her hair in a bun. She walked with all other, jumped and played with all of them. She was standing and laughing when she felt someone unclutch her hair. She immediately placed her hands on her head and turned to find a good looking and smart boy smiling at her. She raised her brow while he just stood their grinning.

Boy : ap khule balo me bahut khoobsurat lagti h!! ese hi khule rakhiye!!

Zoya : ji?? Shukriya!! Par aap achanak mujhse kyu bat kar rahe h??

Boy : oops!! I forgot to introduce myself, I am Rohan, Rohan Singhana...u know me...I guess...well may be I am new but mostly all of them know me...

Zoya : so?? Bhajan gau?

Rohan : no no!! no need! Its just that...you are smart, cute, nice, naughty, and like you see very nice!! I mean...

He kept on complimenting her, while she just rolled her eyes, yawned lazily or tapped her foot looking here and there. Its when their one of the friend who was also a new admission nudged Ayaan, to see if Zoya is okay, because everyone knew Rohan was a playboy but Ayaan and everyone assured her that there is nothing to worry and just watch the show..

Rohan : so you see you look really beautiful, just my ...

Zoya : abe!! Bhigi hui matchis ki tili, age bakega ya sirf meri tarif karta rahega, I know how I am, care to explain tu bolna kya chahta h??

Rohan : why so stressed dear, so I was saying ki you are like a perfect match for me, you see even I am a cute, charming guy...I mean like

Zoya suddenly started laughing : abe chup kar khajur, isse zyada joke mei nahi sun sakti!! Auu!! Mera peth dukh raha h, bas be bus!!

Rohan suppressed the annoyance and placed his hand on her shoulders and suddenly her laughter died, she gazed towards his hands and the next moment her hands grabbed his collars. While everyone hooted and encouraged her, ROhan tried to free himself from her grip.

Zoya : kya keh raha tha, dear, smart, be paidal akal, teri himmat kese hui ha? Tu humare school ki ina mina dika ko phasa sakta h, par meri taraf ankh uthake dekhne ki bhi koshish keena, to by go ki kasam teri vo halat karungi , ki dobara kisi ladki ki taraf dekhne se pehle 100 bar sochega!!

She angrily kicked him in his stomach while he winced and held his stomach. She moved towards him while he moved back. The previous girls with whom he played handed Zoya a stick which she lightly beat him with. He finally gained the courage and was about to retort when he felt the land slip beneath him and next moment he was in the pond in the cool freezing water while everyone fell on the ground laughing including Zoya. Finally after few moments she kneeled beside the pond.

Zoya : dekhiye Rohan Bhai, ap sabke bhai hi thik h, aur ma baap ne pese padne ke liye bhare hai, ladkiyo ko ghumane ke liye nahi!! Samjhe? To padhai par dhayn do aur sirf dosti hi tak simit rakho! Hmm? Chalo jaldi jake change karlo!!

Rohan came out and apologized to Zoya while she smiled and let go. She rubbed her hands, she was about to turn when she heard a voice from behind.

" good work Zoya!!"

Zoya clasped her hands on her mouth and turned around. She shook his head and jumped happily. But suddenly the happiness and shock turned into rage. She started hitting the person's arm angrily, while Najma, Ayaan and Humera joined in. the person apologized but they all ran behind him in the whole garden. Finally after few good moments, they all sat down laughing. Ayaan hugged the person while everyone greeted him.

Zoya : kaha the rehaan? Seriously? The great Mr. Punctual Qureshi missed the bus, How come?

He was none other than Rehan Qureshi, who joined them an year back. He was good looking, simple and sober boy, who adored the friendship of these four. Because of his simple and innocent nature he used to be bullied but later Ayaan included them in his group and since then they really enjoyed a lot. He mingled with them easily.

Rehan : guys please!! Its just that wo kal late tak jaga tha to pir uthne m der hogayi!! But see I am finally here what else do you people want?

Ayaan : acha h tu agaya...varna mei in 3 ladkiyon ke bich akela ladka!! Uff!! Oye chal teacher bula rahi h!!

They all boarded the bus, and tired they slept for a few minutes but later got up and started playing games in the bus with everyone. Trip was fun filled and they really enjoyed it. Tired, they hit the bed as soon as they entered, after freshing up.

Next morning they rose early and got ready as per the schedule. After getting ready and talking to their parents they convinced them about their well being. As Zoya was passing by Ayaans room she poked in and saw him talking to Asad. She smiled and moved in. Ayaan saw her and smiled widely.

Ayaan : here bhai!! Talk to Zoya!! Zoya le!!

Zoya looked him in shock and started shaking her head. She glared him while he just ignored it. They both were fighting pushing the phone to each other. It was when they stoped, when Asad spoke.

Asad : guys!! I know tum dono lad rahe ho!! Please stop it!! And Zoya you can speak to me, I haven't heard your voice since three years, c'mon!!

Ayaan : thanks bhai!! Now Mona you can talk to him, c'mon Zoya please!!

Asad : its okay!! Don't force her Ayaan!! I hope you are taking care of yourself and everyone. Enjoy guys!! Will talk to you people later. Bye!!

He was about to cut the call when he finally heard something. Humera came in to call both of them along with Rehan and Najma.

Humera : ayaan!! Baji!! Chalo na!!

Najma : baji baji !! chalo bahar!! Vo sir bahut strict hai, chalo na!!

Zoya thought that Asad had ended the call so she spoke : rehaan!! Yarr please indono ke lekar jao!! Me and rabert are coming na!! rehan please yaar!! Varna ye dono jangli billi , meko noch karhi chodengi!! Ey paidal akalo, jao!! Go!! Mei Ayaan ke sath ayi!!

Asad was so happy, her voice has certainly changed and it was beautiful. The only thing changed was the tone and wordings. He smiled but he was confused who was Rehan. He shook his head.

Asad : finally you spoke Zoya!! Hmm changed so much!! Hello everyone!! Nice to hear you all!!

As soon as they heard him everyone stood still. No one dared to move. Everyone was shocked. Ayaan and Zoya looked at each other shocked. After an awkward silence , Asad ended the call, when everyone was sure, they proceeded towards the ground. Where eyeryone was waiting. The instructor guided them about the 3 days schedule. Groups were asked to made of five and these 5 teamed up together.

To start the day they were to visit nearby waterfall and woud do river crossing in ther nearyby. Later the days, they would do trekking, would play games, camp fire and many more thing awaited for them.

No sooner they reached, they all ran towards the waterfall. All of them were very excited and rushed towards the waterfall. Only Zoya took small steps towards the waterfall...

Edited by riddhi1206 - 10 years ago

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