SS - Just One Glimpse #2: Chapter 21 & 22 Pg 110

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princess101

@princess101

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#621

I liked this update more then the last couple of them for sure

Zoya hasnt forgotten Asad just hope everything will be ok soon

As always beautifully written

I wont leave this story just because u have said it has a happy ending

than 4 the pm

update soon

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#622

Wow Saima...you write the twists and bring it all in so well. I don't read all the comments that others write but have been seeing your apologies a couple of times about the way the story is going and how some are upset!!

As a writer of your own story, you have full rights to take it any which way you want and we, as readers come and eagerly read 'coz we love your style. Be it a happy or sad ending, it is the contents and not the end that draws us to it. We may voice our opinion, albeit, in a polite way for a healthy discussion or criticism but in no way should you feel the need to apologize for what you write or feel bad for it.

It is totally wrong for anyone to make you feel that as they can just quit silently without being rude. As a reader, I just want to say that you go girl!! Write the way you want and you will always have the right followers for your stories!!

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ak020203

@ak020203

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Posted: 11 years ago

#623

Great update..

Loved it..

Thanks for updating

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anopama

@anopama

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#624

Nice update

So asad comes to the airport to meet zack

Zoya feels him but she doesn't meet him

Asad having a few memory fragments

Omg he went all pale seeing her he don't recognize her

But he feels like he knows her

Oh he still have the ring and wonder who it is for

This is so sad can't wait for them to meet

Continue soon

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#625

Sis loved it as usual. The moment she sensed his presence, I felt my heart stop. How I wish they had met already. But I know when they do its going to be just amazing.

Ahh Asad too feeling a connect with her as soon as he saw her on the screen was beautifully written. The whole scene was dramatic and it came across as just that. I loved it.

And the best part, he still has that ring he brought for Zoe. Aww I hope vo din jaldi aai when he puts it on her finger.

Loving it Sis, this story is just too good. 👍🏼

MWAH 🤗

Edited by ChocoBerry - 11 years ago

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: rajsmi
Wow Saima...you write the twists and bring it all in so well. I don't read all the comments that others write but have been seeing your apologies a couple of times about the way the story is going and how some are upset!!
As a writer of your own story, you have full rights to take it any which way you want and we, as readers come and eagerly read 'coz we love your style. Be it a happy or sad ending, it is the contents and not the end that draws us to it. We may voice our opinion, albeit, in a polite way for a healthy discussion or criticism but in no way should you feel the need to apologize for what you write or feel bad for it.

It is totally wrong for anyone to make you feel that as they can just quit silently without being rude. As a reader, I just want to say that you go girl!! Write the way you want and you will always have the right followers for your stories!!

Well said Raj, and I agree to every word you wrote.

Sis sun lo, me say the same thing

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#627

excellent!
this update gave us a little ray of hope...
asad is getting himself back piece by piece !!
i want their meeting...please please please!!!
continue soon

Edited by -Crazy4AsYa- - 11 years ago

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#628

Awesome + Intresting Update...👏

Every Scene From Starting To Ending Is Mind - Blowing...👍🏼

Just Love It...😊

Waiting For Next Part Eagerly So Update Soon...😃