SS - Just One Glimpse: Chapter 11 Pg 111 - Page 45

Originally posted by: _Tanaz_

Loved it.

Originally posted by: mona12345

Saima di,

Loved every bit if this chapter. Good to know Zoya is enjoying her stay at Shimla.

I hope that the black shadow doesn't affect Zoya in anyway .

Also, Asad better have a black mark below his nose ! 😳😆
Asad- Zoya scene was 😳 He's all mesmerized by how beautiful she is, both inside out .

Looking forward to the next chapter ! 😊

Originally posted by: jas91

amazing updt Saima di

I m happy & scared both about prediction

so Zoya will b able 2 see & than some trouble

Zoya sang d song

Asad was rooted on d spot poor fellow is smitten so bad😆

Zoya very confidently recognized him

loved there scene

continue soon

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Awesome update Badi Aapu!!
It was superb!!!
Prediction!!!
Happy but scared too bcoz of it!!!
Loved it!!
Zoya recognized Asad!!!
Bechara He is smitten bad!!!
Ruby 's would be prediction 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

I'm loving this six sense thing!

It is amazin' how zoya can sense his presence...

And wow! I hope the story ends with zoya regaining her eyesight!

She no doubt has a beautiful voice...! 😃

Lovely update dee 😊

waiting for the sixth one! 😉

Originally posted by: sasir

aww

amazing

awesome

loved it

asya are destined to be with each other

hope everything goes well

plz update soon

Originally posted by: p_s05

"...Zoya turned around as if she was looking for something 'did you drop something?' 'Huh...no its...I recognise that...umm its nothing...come lets go'.

Zoya had stopped because she felt his presence; she could smell his scent, a scent that she would never forget. Even though she hardly denied her sixth sense she knew on this occasion she was wrong, there was no way that Asad could be here and that too so close. As much as she thought she was Zoya wasn't wrong; Asad was standing a few feet away from her with some colleagues who just happened to be staying at the same lodge."

Zoya's sixth sense is astoundingly amazing. What you did with the entire "scent" concept throughout the chapter was overwhelming.

"Zoya placed her hand in his 'you are blind?' he asked 'yes...since birth' 'no beta...you were born with sight as the rest of us' Zoya looked on with a confused expression 'no baba, I have always been blind' 'maybe from the time you understood what it meant to be blind but you were not born blind' Ruby looked at Annie and then back at the old man 'baba...does that mean that...' 'yes it does, it means that she will be able to see again'."

@Red: This is fantastic, my thoughts did lead me to think of this during the previous chapters and I thought as the story progresses you would justify this and with Asad added to the equation, this is bound to be dealt with.

"Zoya smiled, she had always met people that would say that to her, that would make dua for giving her hope that one day she would regain her sight In Sha Allah...baba...what else can you see?' 'You will find love that will give you a new life, a new direction...but' 'but what baba?' 'There is a dark shadow that clouds over you...beta this cloud will be the biggest test you will face in life...all I will say is that if He above has gifted you with a sixth sense, the ability to recognise even without seeing, believe in that power, the day you deny it, the day you turn away from it you will lose everything'."

@Red:

@Purple: What could this possibly be? 😒

@Lime:This is a mind stimulating thought - Intriguing! 🤪

"...she stopped, she placed her hand over her chest and closed her eyes. He was here and this time there was no denying it or trying to fight it, she turned towards him and took one step closer.

Asad kept his gaze fixated he tried to speak but words kept defying him 'please tell me its you...that you are here, for the last two days I have been sensing you...and as much as I convince myself otherwise I know I am not wrong'.

Asad gulped as his eyes widened further in bewilderment, still not saying anything he watched her take that last step which brought her to stand just a few inches away. Zoya lifted her hand and he silently followed it, the minute it came into contact with his face he held his breath. Zoya grazed her fingers over his face, it was like she was constructing a vision of him, what he looked like 'Asad...I know it's you' she whispered as her fingers continued to create a whirlwind of emotions within him.

As her fingers brushed past his lips, he parted them and then managed to whisper out her name. Zoya smiled 'I knew it was you, what are you doing here' Asad took hold of her hand and lowered it 'Zoya...how did you know...and what are you doing here?'

'I just did, I know it may seem strange to you but it was as if something inside me sensed you...I am here with my colleagues for a few days...I take it you are here for the conference next door'

'Yes...and I am staying in the same lodge...as you' 'isn't it funny...how we keep meeting' Asad looked at her intently as she kept smiling; her eyes looked directly at him as if she could see him."

This was just

Breathtaking and;

Overwhelmingly beautiful.

The walk back together was endearing.

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

awesome update...
i am enjoying this story so much!!!

continue soon

Originally posted by: smj7

Grt part
omg the baba's words were so intense and scary
zoya could get back her sight
loved how zoya recognized asad 😳
continue soon

Originally posted by: cutie15

Awsum..!!! It was such simple nd pure update..!! Lovd it..:)
Thank u soo much.:*