SS - Just One Glimpse: Chapter 11 Pg 111

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Salaam All

I am her with a short story called 'Just One Glimpse'

But this is no ordinary story, this is a dedication to my dearest sister, my absolute sweetheart ChocoBerry.

I have found many friends on IF and have found even more sisters.

ChocoBerry, you are very special, and here I am to show you exactly much I love you.

I cannot start this story without mentioning two more very special people, two younger sisters that I also love very much.

Vinita, my little Angel thank you for helping with the concept and title

Divya, my Picasso thank you for putting the banner together for me, it's perfect.

I hope you will all like the story and support it as you have always done with everything else.

Lots of Love and Dua's

Saima
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Index

Chapter 1 - pg 1
Chapter 2 - pg 19
Chapter 3 - pg 30
Chapter 4 - pg 43
Chapter 5 - pg 55
Chapter 6 - pg 66
Chapter 7 & 8 - pg 76
Chapter 9 - pg 87
Chapter 10 - pg 100
Chapter 11 - pg 111


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Banner by Divya

One

Asad got out of his car and stood in front of the school his mother Dilshad Ahmed Khan founded a number of years ago.

The School of Harmony was a small school that taught music to the underprivileged, Dilshad who had a great love for music opened the school in memory of her loving husband, Rashid Ahmed Khan.

Rashid Ahmed Khan was a well-known man; he was the owner and managing director of Khan Group of Industries, one of the top ten richest in all of India.

Rashid passed away leaving his empire to his one and only son Asad and his beloved wife Dilshad. After many years of trying to stay in India and continue life without Rashid, Dilshad started to fall deeper and deeper into depression. Her son who at a young age had to take over his father's business empire almost became non-existent; he worked so hard he almost seemed to forget he had a mother waiting at home for him.

Asad loved his mother more than anything in the world, but his devotion to keeping his father's name alive seemed to overpower him. Asad finally decided to send Dilshad to live with her sister in Italy.

That was almost three years ago. Every year on this day Asad came to the school to present them a cheque so they could continue with their hard work, work that meant the world to his mother.

'Asad, you come every year, give me this piece of paper and leave, and then I don't see you for another whole year...will you not stay today...just for a little while, the children have an assembly where they will be playing...please come and join us'

Asad took off his sunglasses and looked at Mrs Braganza 'maybe just for a few minutes'. Mrs Braganza smiled whole heartedly as she led him to the assembly hall.

Asad was always reserved; he was very serious in his manner. But after his father passed away his seriousness, his reserved personality only heightened, he was a man of principle, at the age of 26 he knew nothing other than how to work and work harder. With no social life and little friends the only people skills Asad had was across a board room table where he was able to strike up deals worth millions of dollars within seconds. Outside his work life what it meant to enjoy life and be care free he didn't know.

Asad stood towards the back of the hall, which was filled with parents, teachers and members from the local community. Asad kept looking at his watch wanting to get out of there; he had seen two performances already, as much as he clapped he didn't really know what he was appreciating. As the third act was about to start Asad turned around to walk out only to be stopped by what he heard.

The notes of the piano played soft music and with it came a voice that could only be described as heavenly. For someone who didn't listen to songs or understood the world of music Asad found himself rooted by what echoed around him.

All he could see was the back of a girl, who he assumed was a teacher sitting at the piano singing a song he had never heard before.

Main hoon gumsum tu bhi khamosh hai
Sach hai samay ka hi sab dosh hai
Dhadkan dhadkan ik gham rehta hai
Jaane kyu phir bhi dil kehta hai
Jee le zara, jee le zaraa
Kehta hai dil jee le zara
Aye humsafar, aye humnawa
Aa paas aa jee le zara

Hai zindagi mana dard bhari
Phir bhi isme ye raahat bhi hai
Main hoon tera aur tu hai meri
Yunhi rahe hum, ye chahat bhi hai
Phir dil ke dil se, pul kyu toote hain
Kyun hum jeene se itne roothe hain
Aa dil ke darwaaze hum khole
Aa hum dono jee bhar ke ro le
Jee le zara, jee le zaraa
Kehta hai dil jee le zara
Aye humsafar, aye humnawa
Aa paas aa jee le zaraa

Gham ke ye baadal guzar jaane de
Ab zindagi ko nikhar jaane de
Chhod de ab yaadon ke dukh sehnaa
Sun bhi le jo dil ka hai kehnaa
Jee le zaraa, jee le zaraa
Kehta hai dil jee le zaraa
Aye humsafar, aye humnawa
Aa paas aa jee le Zar

He almost felt that the song was giving him a message telling him to live, saying that no matter what 'jee le zara'. The more he stood there the more he seemed to lose himself in the melody and before he knew it the whole hall had erupted in a loud applause, coming back to the present Asad put on his glasses and started to walk out.

'Asad...Asad, wait' Asad turned around to see Mrs Braganza run towards him 'thank you for staying...could I ask for a few more minutes of your time? I would love to introduce you to everyone, the people here know of Dilshad and her work, it would be a great honour for them to meet you' Asad showed reluctance and was about to politely decline when she grabbed his hand and started to lead him to the front.

Asad stood in front a hall full of smiling faces as Mrs Braganza introduced him. Trying hard to reciprocate their smiles Asad looked back at Mrs Braganza 'I really do have to go now' of course...but wait just one minute, I would like you to meet out teachers' Mrs Braganza called up her members of staff.

'Asad please meet Ruby, Annie, Jai and Zoya, Zoya is our new recruit she has only been here for a few months...an Angel with a voice that comes straight from heaven, don't you think?'

Asad looked at the girl who stood at the end smiling, he figured it was her who sang the last song 'its nice meeting you all, Mrs Braganza I will ask Ammi to call you, am sure she would like to catch up...I will take your leave now' before Mrs Braganza could stop him further or say anything more he walked away.

'Not is he only the youngest and richest guy in all of India but also the most handsome of them all' Ruby said still swaying from side to side in admiration. 'Ruby, you think everyone is good looking...come one we need to get the afternoon lessons prepared' Zoya said.

'Always have kill my moment...fine, come on lets go...but before then I need you to lead out the younger kids, their coach is already here'. Ruby said walking of in a huff 'wait...I'll go, you stay here' Zoya offered.

Zoya gathered the group of children who were heading out on a visit to the Royal Opera House. 'What is all that noise?' she complained as all that could be heard was the blaring horns of cars around her.

'Api, there is a traffic jam...I think the signals have stopped working again' on of the children said 'ok...not to worry, you guys are heading in the opposite direction...come on let's do a head count'. All the pupils stood in line as Zoya counted them ...14, 15...ok who is missing, there should be 16 of you?' the kids stated looking around at one another 'Anju...Anju is missing' Zoya let out a sigh 'I tell you that girl can never be anywhere on time'

Zoya was just about to step away to go and look for her when she was stopped 'Api...she is there by the sweet shop...shall I go and get her?' Zoya narrowed her eyes 'Anju...you are in so much trouble missy' she said making the other children laugh 'it's ok you guys sit in the coach I will get her'

Zoya stepped out into the street and walked towards the sweet shop 'Ya Allah, what is going on' she said as the noise pollution started to annoy her. Where she was getting annoyed a few yards away Asad sat in his car slowly losing his patience 'Arif, turn the car around and take the back route, at this rate we will be here forever' 'yes Sir'.

Arif turned his car around as soon as he did Zoya stepped in front of him 'Arif, watch out' Asad shouted, Arif managed to press on the breaks just in time. Asad jumped out of the car and ran to her, he held her by the elbow and turned her around 'are you blind, don't you know how to cross a road without looking properly' he chided her in a harsh tone. Zoya who lost her balance fell against his chest, she closed her eyes as her breathing started to spiral out of control, Asad who looked even more annoyed lifted his hands up to move her back.

Asad he reached for her shoulders a gentle breeze that brushed past them blew her hair back, it was then he realised who it was. Asad felt as if his heart had skipped a beat, her fair complexion, her watery eyes and trembling lips, everything about her seemed to stand out, as if everything else around became blurry and distant. Z...Zoya right?' Zoya stood up straight, by this time Mrs Braganza, Johnathan and Ruby came running up to her 'Oh Lord Jesus, are you ok Zoya...' Asad looked at her waiting for her to respond 'I am fine Mrs Braganza, just made me jump that's all...I came looking for Anju' Mrs Braganza looked ahead of her and saw Anju standing a few yards away crying 'Jai please go and get her, and sit her on the coach...Asad, thank you for helping'.

'Helping...Mrs Braganza my driver nearly ran her over...you should really watch where you are going' he said to her, Zoya was taken aback by his continued harshness 'I...I'm sorry' she said in a low whisper before she turned around 'Ruby, let's go we are getting late' Ruby linked her arm with hers and started to walk back towards the school.

'Asad, my child that girl you see there walking away, the one you just scolded...you asked her watch where she was going...she can't, she is blind'.

Asad looked at her with his eyes wide open in shock, he felt a cold air brush past him that made him suck in a breath that seemed to prick every part of his airway and ended with a dull pain in the pit of his stomach.

'She...She is blind?' he asked, as if he needed confirmation 'yes Asad, Mr Neil and I met her almost 3 months ago, she works and lives in an orphanage that she grew up in, when we heard her sing...well there was no way I was going to take no for an answer, she works here 3 days a week and the rest of the time she stays at the orphanage'

If finding out she was blind wasn't bad enough but she was an orphan too. 'I...I'm sor...I mean if I had known I...' 'It's ok Asad...like you said you didn't know, you take care...I guess I will see you next year'.


Edited by Saima-Syed - 11 years ago
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Sis, I am speechless. I am overwhelmed with what you have done. I mean I have had dedications earlier which I felt honored about, but a full SS... That is a first and I know only you could do something like this. A simple Thank you definitely doesn't do justice to what you have done for me, but thats all that i can say right now

And i want to add

I am so happy that we have connected over this Forum and can't thank you enough to have taken that first step which has helped us build this beautiful bond we now share. I Love You so so much.

And it is only because of you I have found three more sisters who are just as beautiful people as you are. Divya, Rarepearl and Vini, I love you guys too, bahut saara.

Divya thankyou for the beautiful banner. Its perfect and I love it

Vini, thanks for helping in the concept. I really want to read this one.

And Rarepearl I love you too cause you love KSG and are as crazy about him as I am 😉 😆 Kidding, I love you cause the little that I know you, you come across as a warm and beautiful human. I want to know you more.

I love you all. Mwah.

Now the update, Sis I am so intrigued by this concept.

She is a blind teacher at the school his mum had made in his fathers name. He visits it just once a year. How these two meet again and how they get together is definitely going to be a rollercoaster ride for the two of them and I am so ready to take it with them.

The way he stops just listening to her voice and the song as if telling him to let go and live life... WOW.

The shock he gets that she IS blind was another treat to read. I could almost imagine what his expressions would be like.

Loved it Sis. Thank you for this beautiful gift. I love you so much. And this one is for Team Angel


Edited by ChocoBerry - 11 years ago
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Wow!! Sami di.. Concept is beautiful..

Loved how Dilshad built a school in loving memory of her husband ❤️
Uff someone explain to Asad that work is not everything in life..
Poor Dilshad always waited for son but couldn't take it anymore..
He still didn't change when she left to Paris.. 😡
Loved Zoya's entry.. 😳
Hahaha... I love Mrs. Braganza 😆
Asad you don't shout at everyone especially without knowing about them.. 😡.. Poor Zoya..
Zoya's bond with kids was cute... 😳
Thankfully Asad came to know the truth about her through Mrs. Braganza.. 😃
Feel guilty Asad.. You deserve it.. 😒

p.s.Thank you for the dedication... 😳🤗

Update soon di.. 🤗
Edited by Divya.S.R - 11 years ago
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Hey Sis,

Just got over with reading the part. I don't know about Asad, but my heart dipped on knowing Zoe can't see. right now its a bit complicated for me to write anything. Seriously, your way with emotions is exceptional. Always strike me straight at heart.
Will get back to you in the post below.
Just know this was:
Edited by Rarepearl - 11 years ago
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Hey,

Am back again. I thought taking time off would give me the proper words to describe this part but nopes, I still am speechless about it.
Okay I'll begin with the title. Its so beautiful.. says a lot in just three words. Vini, its fantastic. The banner, which is absolutely fabulous. Divs you've done an amazing work at it. Seeing it I had an idea that it was connected with music & it is.
The first part itself has done a great job at explaining Asad's personality & the reasons to it. He most definitely is a wonderful & loving son, that is why he put all his efforts in just keeping up the name his father had built with his hard work after his demise. Asad was very young at that age but he didn't turn away from the responsibilities falling on his shoulders.
I felt sad for Dilshad, losing the love of your life isn't really a good thing. It did cause her trauma. But her thought of continuing something her husband loved is really nice. The music institution is providing not only an out for feelings through music for those who are alone or under privileged to enjoy the pleasures of it. Its giving them a chance to build a future on it too.
Well I can understand that Asad doesn't fancy music much or maybe he never allowed himself the luxury of enjoying it. But I guess the song sung by Zoe has moved him. He did feel as if the words were for him, asking him to let lose & live.
You know it didn't occur to me yesterday, but right now that I'm thinking about it, I am amazed by the choice of song too. I've not heard the song before but the lyrics were really soulful. Coming from Zoya, unbelievable. Someone who's living life without the most important sense, all alone from the very beginning, is inspiring others to forget their sadness & give a chance to life. Sis, you're too good. ⭐️. Seriously.
Okay to be honest it never crossed my mind once that Zoe couldn't see until you mentioned it. I am amazed by her spirit, energy & willingness to help others around her. An Angel.
You know my heart broke on hearing this. I could understand how it would have struck Asad too. He didn't say that on purpose, even he was fooled by her appearance.
I guess Asad's not going to forget her heavenly voice nor her innocent face, anytime soon. Please update soon.
Choco... I'm touched by your gesture. It's so very sweet of you to do it.
I've got Sis to thank for this. Sis, I honestly can't thank you enough for including me in your circle & giving me three more sisters. Its been few days only but it doesn't seem so to me. It feels we've been together for ages. Earlier I was only thankful to God for letting me have you but now I have three more reasons to thank Him. I hope you know, I love you loads. I really do!
Vini, I've known you for a while through your heart touching stories & know you're a sweetheart. I'm more than glad to know you personally too. I hope you know how much I admire you & love you.
Divs, what I've known of you was from your replies on Sis & Vini's threads but its a pleasure knowing you as a friend. I'm thankful to you for taking me in so easily. Love ya!
Choco.. I want to tell you that Vini is on our side at being a crazy KSGian. So the three of us can rock n go on a roll soon. Divs & Sis, r you willing to join us?😆 Okay this apart, I'm humbled by your gesture & looking forward to knowing more of you too. How much ever I've seen is enough to tell me you're lovely. Love you too.
Team Angel; I just hope we all stay together forever.
Edited by Rarepearl - 11 years ago
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ek aur.. forgot I needed another😆
Unres.. 😆


For Starting a New Story



Edited by Divya.S.R - 11 years ago
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wow...nice start saima...
wat 😲 my baby is blind...
the story is interesting...
they met 😉
continue soon..
like button isn't working...vl try tomorrow
Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago
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Another story.. ,I am sure this will be as beautiful as others..
Can't wait for the updates..

Lovely update today.. Thanks!

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