SAHIL SS-DIL JALE-COMPLETED-PT1-14+EPILOGUE-*AWARDED*

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Cutiepie121

@cutiepie121

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Excellent Mandy... Loved the way you have written the confessional scenes..

Please do write epilogue to give this SS and beautiful finish..😃👏👏

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Alya

@shinta.chinta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

U should write the epilogue 😃

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: Tamara27
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The END??? How did that even happen...?

Hmmm...

BUT, omg I loved it!

I mean, I don't really need to tell you how much, right? Because I think my comments speak for themselves?

And best part for me in this update?
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"Aahil..."

"Yes... I will lock the door"! he said, and got up from the bed and reached for the remote on his bedside table. He pointed it to the door, and they both heard the little click.

"Happy"?

"Hmmm... you talk too much. Less talk. More action"!

"Why you little..." said Aahil as he pounced on Sanam. She started to giggle until his lips closed on hers.

Two idiots, supreme - but they're lovable idiots, right 😳

And yes please, I will take an epilogue hun - soon, ok?

And soon after that, another story?

Yeah...Aahil has already started to read his wife's mind! So lock the door it is! Kuch tameez seek gaya apni Tehezeeb wali wife se! Lol. I wanted to keep it a bit light too. That is why I injected that Haystack girl argument. Also, what better way for Aahil to go all hot and romantic on Sanam and tell her he is crazy for her. Men usually have to be pushed to be this vocal about their feelings. He felt backed into a corner, and so he HAD to spill the beans about how much in love he is. Not something he can usually manage!The guy is emotionally challenged! 😳

What I love about Sanam is that she is so practical. She felt angry and jealous for a moment, but she is not one to just keep hanging on to it. She loves Aahil, and she knows she has to accept him the way he is, including whatever he used to be! Unlike Aahil who finds it hard to move past his insecurity about Rehan.

Since this story was DIL JALE, I had to keep to that theme till the end. Therefore one final showdown, before they finally "Get it"! Yes Epilogue will have to be worked on for the rest of the week. I am too busy to write it tomorrow. Also, I do have another SS which I started. "Yeh Dhooriya". It is mostly about Seher, but SAHIL feature prominently in it! Check it out if you have time.

But yes...I will have to think of some "One shots" to write on SAHIL. I always enjoy yours!

Edited by MrDarcyfan - 11 years ago

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Wow it was brilliant! Loved how you ended it...and the confession was awsome. Yes epilouge pls😉😉

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sylvia99

@sylvia99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Beautiful and loved the confession part.

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rakshaanra

@rakshaanra

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Liked the way Sanam manhandles Ahil, holding him by the collar.

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zynia890

@zynia890

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Hey Mandy... are you going to give epilogue to this story...I can't wait...update soon...

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: zynia890
Hey Mandy... are you going to give epilogue to this story...I can't wait...update soon...

Hi,

Yes I want to give an Epilogue. But I have been a bit sick again. This stupid flue is coming and going. So I wont be able to do it for another day at least. But working on some ideas!

Thanks for the support guys!

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zynia890

@zynia890

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

Hi,

Yes I want to give an Epilogue. But I have been a bit sick again. This stupid flue is coming and going. So I wont be able to do it for another day at least. But working on some ideas!

Thanks for the support guys!

OK Get well soon...one more day...not a big deal...update would be worth the update...

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#430

Hi All,

I am working on the epilogue. Hope to have it up by tomorrow. In the meantime I have fixed all the hyperlinks on the Index so as to make accessing all parts of the story easier.

Thanks

Mandy