SAHIL SS-DIL JALE-COMPLETED-PT1-14+EPILOGUE-*AWARDED*

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#411

Ouh that was the perfect end
Thanks for a great story
Hope to read more

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#412

I loved it and I would love to read an epilogue! Is this story going to be a prequel of sorts to the Sehan story? Can't wait to read the epilogue so update soon!

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Zaina

@CrazyForAshish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#413

Fantastice update enjoying reading it...

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#414

These two are crazy well written again mandy

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ploydome

@ploydome

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#415

well written 😊
Love your style

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: ssafdar
I love that you incorporate scenes from the series into you story.

there were scenes that didn't quite jell for me

1) Sanam pouring out her heart to Rehan even though she knows how he feels...slightly insenstive of her.

2) Sanam almost flirting with Rehan in the kitchen after fighting with Aahil,

3) Aahil being an idiot and treating the haystack episode lightly almost like a joke.

4) Rehan being a f**kwit even though he knows how both of them feel about the other.

what i loved is the passion (not just sexual) between Sahil, there will never be a dull moment in their marriage. Sanam getting ready to kick some Aahil butt for thinking he can give her away...Go Sanam!!!!

I want to respond to the scenes that didnt jell.

1. Yes Sanam told Rehan she loved Aahil. She was distraught in the hospital and she just needed to tell someone. I did mention she was not thinking of the fact that Rehan had feelings for her. Even though she was aware of them. She was just too burdened with her own feelings at that moment to think too much about that. That is why she just said she loves Aahil and that he loves her.

2. Sanam was not flirting, she was being friendly. Yes that "Lucky Me" part was a bit out there I admit it. But I wanted to up the anti a bit so Aahil will really loose it! Lol

3. Sanam brought up the haystack first, and he could not help seeing the humour of the situation. She called that girl "Girl from Haystack" and all he did was clarify her name. Dumb yes, but he was too busy flirting with his wife to care. But of course Sanam got mad at him, coz she was already mad that he didn't beleive she loved him. If not, she may not have reacted so strongly.

4. That Rehan part was deliberate. He was angry with Aahil. He is human too. He lost Sanam to Aahil, and now it is clear there is never going to be a chance for him again. But here is Aahil accusing him of having designs on Sanam. So he left Aahil hanging! He IS Billi's son after all. Kuch Toh evilness banta hain! Lol

Hope that answers your questions! :)

Edited by MrDarcyfan - 11 years ago

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udenigamage

@udenigamage

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#417

Wonderful update and finally everything is cleared. Rehan should get clarification from Sanam to end his day dreaming and creating MU between Sahil. Also Tanveer should go where she belongs (JAIL) and Sahil happily lived ever after.plz write the epilogue pzl

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: udenigamage
Wonderful update and finally everything is cleared. Rehan should get clarification from Sanam to end his day dreaming and creating MU between Sahil. Also Tanveer should go where she belongs (JAIL) and Sahil happily lived ever after.plz write the epilogue pzl

Oh Rehan knows where he stands with Sanam. He knows Sanam loves Aahil, not him. He got mad at Aahil for questioning him. Also, he is feeling a bit bitter. After all, he lost Sanam to Aahil. So he channeled a bit of evil there! Lol.

Billi ka beta, have to have a bit of evil in him! 😉

Edited by MrDarcyfan - 11 years ago

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Tannu

@Tannakstar

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#419

Oh god this was like a crazy roller coaster ride.

At first when they were kissing it was like

And then they argued over the haystack girl, Aahil saw Rehaan, and they were fighting over the whole "does Sanam actually love Rehaan?' And I was just thinking NOOO YAAR DONT DO THIS TO ME 🥺

BUT THEN Sanam confessed, and Aahil was just...Aahil. And then I died. ☺️

Loved it, and I absolutely want an epilogue. Yes. Definitely need an epilogue, pretty please?

~ Tannu

Edited by Tannakstar - 11 years ago