SAHIL SS-DIL JALE-COMPLETED-PT1-14+EPILOGUE-*AWARDED* - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its fabulous! Love the conversations between them. Waiting for more update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mandy!! I am in awe of you, totally!! Like just wow! The convo was was pure briliiance! <3
I mean, its so intense, yet funny, yet cute, yet childish, yet hot!! How is even that possible?!

Loved how they kept arguing till they have no logical thing to say, Lol 😆 Because at some point, it all comes down to lame arguments. Loved how it started specially how it ended!
"I said..I am not done yet" 😆 Oh you BETTER not! ;) And you just HAD to stop there, right?! I literally said at the end "No!! What the eff?!" 😆 THAT line rings SO many bells, that even I can't comprehend which one to listen! 😆
I can almost imagine the look he would have given at that time, grabbing her in front of him! Hot!!

The convo has just got interesting, indeed! 😆

Sanam baby is jealous! Aww!! Aag doni taraf barabar lagi hai! ;) 😆

Can't wait for how it turns out! And I know even you don't know, its a good sign! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Mandy!! I am in awe of you, totally!! Like just wow! The convo was was pure briliiance! <3

I mean, its so intense, yet funny, yet cute, yet childish, yet hot!! How is even that possible?!

Loved how they kept arguing till they have no logical thing to say, Lol 😆 Because at some point, it all comes down to lame arguments. Loved how it started specially how it ended!
"I said..I am not done yet" 😆 Oh you BETTER not! ;) And you just HAD to stop there, right?! I literally said at the end "No!! What the eff?!" 😆 THAT line rings SO many bells, that even I can't comprehend which one to listen! 😆
I can almost imagine the look he would have given at that time, grabbing her in front of him! Hot!!

The convo has just got interesting, indeed! 😆

Sanam baby is jealous! Aww!! Aag doni taraf barabar lagi hai! ;) 😆

Can't wait for how it turns out! And I know even you don't know, its a good sign! 😆



Thanks Prags. Yes even I am waiting for the next part to shape up. I just knew I had to get Aahil to do something hot, coz lefts face it. He is HOT! KVB has awakened my gutter mind so much by looking so sexy and edible in the last few episodes. I feel like telling Sanam... "Just gobble him whole babe"! Lol. How can you stand being married to such a sexy beast??


I promise I will update as soon as humanely possible. I have a few things on tonight but will try to have one update ready by tomorrow.


I love reading your comments coz they make me laugh out loud, and you always have such good insight!


Edited by MrDarcyfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan



Thanks Prags. Yes even I am waiting for the next part to shape up. I just knew I had to get Aahil to do something hot, coz lefts face it. He is HOT! KVB has awakened my gutter mind so much by looking so sexy and edible in the last few episodes. I feel like telling Sanam... "Just goggle him whole babe"! Lol. How can you stand being married to such a sexy beast??


I promise I will update as soon as humanely possible. I have a few things on tonight but will try to have tone update ready by tomorrow.


I love reading your comments coz they make me laugh out loud, and you always have such good insight!



@bold: You said it girl. You. Said. It. Oh KVB. I wish he knew how hot and worked up he makes me by just the mention of his name! ☺️😆
HE IS...sdvfsvdvfdbfgbrf AND @$%%#^$&$%#$^&^%*&*%&& AND... 😆

Haha thank you Mandy! Its just my stupid rants and I end up writing what comes in my mind. Thanks for loving those anyway! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mandy (can I call u)... It Really DID get interesting fr Aahil & yr readers 😆 . Snm is definitely a one piece like her dad... 😉 Oblivious to the truth thts in her face... but eager to jump to conclusions based on what she thinks she saw.. I want to read how he makes her aware of her growing feelings fr him & the green eyed monster she doesn't want to acknowledge.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice! sanam jealous too...aag dono taraf lagi hai😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my god!!! :D This is pure perfection. I love it! :)) You're sooo good!

I love how you took off from the night where he brought friends over.. I could easily see the emotions and feelings visable before me. The dialouges are perfect and fit very well to the characters..
Yes, Sanam IS jalous!!

I love how Aahil stepped in front of her and goes: " I said, I'm not done yet " - of course you're not, my dear Aahil Raza Ibrahim ;) <3

Please continue this soon. I'm so eager to read the next part <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved this! Please do continue! I like it how you're continuing right off where we left off. I think I will prefer your version to the one we will get to see lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3



She started to side step him. Right then Aahil extended his arm and grabbed Sanam around the waist. He brought her flush against him.


A: I said...I am not done yet.


Sanam started to struggle against him. Aahil held Sanam firmly in place. She continued to wriggle and Aahil drew in a sharp breath. All that wriggling was not helping him stay in his senses. Her delicious body was pressed up against him and all that moving about was making its proximity to him even more pronounced. If she didn't stop wiggling soon he was going to find it hard to stay in control. Damn he was getting hard just from being close to her. She smelled amazing too. He was starting to feel light headed.


S: Let me go.


A: No.


She moved a bit more...


S: Just let me go you brute.


A: Sanam... Stop moving.


S: Why?


Aahil groaned.


A: Does everything have to be spelled out for you? Can't you figure it out?


S: Figure what out? If you want me to stop struggling then let me go. If not I wont stop.


This girl was so frustrating. If her brain worked as fast as her tongue did, she would have figured out what he was saying a lot earlier. For an intelligent women she was pretty slow on the uptake when it comes to her dealings with the opposite sex. Didn't she grow up in an all female household? That was the problem. Looks like he was going to have to complete her education. It was a pleasure he was looking forward to! Thinking about that was enough to get him going again. Control Aahil.


A: Sanam...I am serious. Stop struggling.


S: Why? Can't you believe that there is a women out there who is struggling to get out of your arms?? Is it hurting your ego that not every women wants to be held in your arms?? As it is, your ego is over-sizedand swollen..all you need is..."


A: My ego is not what's swollen right now!


Sanam was confused. She frowned.


S: Then what is?


Was this girl for real? She really didn't know that her wiggling was turning him on?? He was right? She WAS a cut piece. No wonder she had no idea he was crazy about her, or that Rehan had a thing for her. She was totally clueless and obtuse. (Aahil has not met her parents!).


A: You want to know? Let me show you.


He pulled Sanam even closer to him. He ran his hands down her sides and moved one hand down her perfectly shaped derriere. Then he pulled her between his legs and pushed her close against his body. It would be impossible for her not to realise that he was aroused now. He had not intended to move this fast, but hell she asked for it with her 50 questions. The easiest thing was to show her!


A: Now do you know why I asked you to stop moving? Or do you want a further demo?


Sanam blushed crimson. She didn't know where to look. She went completely still in his arms. She was too afraid to move.


S: Stop it Aahil. What are you doing? She hissed.


A: I am not doing anything my Jaan...on the contrary it is you that has done this. This is why I told you to stop wiggling. But you didn't get my drift. You know what they say? Actions speak louder than words?? So I thought I would show you some action.


S: We are in the hall Aahil. This is hardly the place.


A: So you want to move this to the bedroom then?


S: Yes. What??... I mean no...I mean..


A: What DO you mean Sanam?


Aahil was almost laughing now.


S: You think this is funny Jallad Jin?


Aahil was actually laughing out loud now.


S: Stop it Aahil. Let go of me.


At that Aahil bent down and swooped her up into his arms.


S: What are you doing? Put me down.


A: No can do. Since you need everything spelled out for you, let me inform you. I can't walk to the room where anyone can see me in my current state. I can't walk holding you in front of me either. So I am going to carry you to the room. That way I get my cover and you don't have to walk. It's a win win.


S: I can walk.

A: Really?? Even if you wont admit it, I know your knees have turned to jelly because of my demo! So let me carry you.


S: Why you arrogant...


A: I am stating a fact my sweet. So that does not make me arrogant. Just honest.


S: You really think you are god's gift to women right?


A: And now this gift is yours! Can you imagine your luck?


S: As if!


A: Deny all you want baby. But you are loving this.

Sanam had her hands around his neck to keep her anchored. At that statement, she put one of her fists into the hair at the bottom of his neck and pulled.


S: Did you love that...BABY?? Sanam said sarcastically.


A: Playing rough ha?? Gimme more baby.


Sanam gritted her teeth at that. There was no teaching this man.


S: Urgh...I could kill you...


A: Baby...I love it when you talk dirty to me.


Aahil still laughing carried Sanam into their bedroom. He placed Sanam on her feet and went and got the remote to their door. As the door closed behind them someone else had witnessed this scene. It was Rehan.


To be continued...



So this is what I worked on today. Will try and post the next part very soon. Let's see what happens next and what construction Rehan put on what he saw?? The right one let's hope! Lol


Please leave your comments. I know it's late for you guys who are in India. So as Sanam would say "Shabba kher". (Hope I pronounced that right). :)


Mandy!


Previous part - Part 2 Next Part - Part 4


Edited by MrDarcyfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ha ha ha this was absolutely AWESOME! I was Rofling thruout.. Their banter is super cute... I'm surprised Sanam evn understood when she was pushed against him... 😆 ... yup this journey is going to be Amazing... fr Aahil & us.

Loved it!

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