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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

I love it ! This chapter was quite intense ;D but I want more actions tan talking now lol 😳[/QUOTE

Sabar Karo yaar. Action will come. Lol

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Wow this is so awesome! Loved the last few lines!!! Plz update soon!

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Raingoddess
Wow this is so awesome! Loved the last few lines!!! Plz update soon!

Thanks. I will try and update it soon. SAHIL less weekend is boring! :)

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mayuri099

@mayuri099

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Oh no! Why did you stop? 😒 Eagerly waiting for the next part...

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: mayuri099
Oh no! Why did you stop? 😒 Eagerly waiting for the next part...

I am working on the next part. I will have to work on this one really hard, coz everyone will want a great update I am sure! :)

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964749

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Okay I read all 4 parts at once. And the last part at least 3 times.

That's how ADDICTING your SS is. 😆

You are supremely talented, MrDarcyfan! Waiting with bated breath for the next part. 😳

My favourite parts were how Sanam mentioned about Aahil on haystack 😆, and of course that gutter part about him pulling her real close against his body.😳 GOSH THEIR SEXUAL FRUSTRATION UGHHH. Just DO IT already. 😆

Glad Rehaan saw everything too. 😛 Sanam is such a baby. So innocent. And. Inexperienced. 😆

Is it weird how I was reminded of that rangoli scene from IPK in the wriggling part (where ASR fell from stool and Khushi saved him 😆) ? Gosh, I am a crazy IPK fan. 😆

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Mehreeeen

@SurbhikiPankhi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Their conversations are so perfect and realistic omg! 😳 That's the thing I like about them they actually converse and talk about things!

Ahh it's like weekend wala dose, lovely update! :3 <333

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

I tense chapter loved that they are talking and letting the feeling out about the situation between them loved when she explained that she was not waiting for him to tell her about her place instead she sorting it before him awesome update .

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: SurbhikiPankhi
Their conversations are so perfect and realistic omg! 😳 That's the thing I like about them they actually converse and talk about things!
Ahh it's like weekend wala dose, lovely update! :3 <333

Yeah I wanted them to talk, coz the situation is very loaded. They cant just fall into bed to solve their problems. Even though Aahil would love that, and Sanam is not far behind. They are very attracted to each other. But what Aahil wants from Sanam is not sex, it is love. So the game is very different for him this time. He wants her to need him, not just want him coz he is hot! :)The same goes for Sanam too.

They both need to feel secure in the relationship to show each other what they truly feel. I want to steer this in the right direction. But it is a tough job, coz now I really have to use my creativity to see what is next for them!! :)

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964749

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: .Serendipity.
Okay I read all 4 parts at once. And the last part at least 3 times.
That's how ADDICTING your SS is. 😆

You are supremely talented, MrDarcyfan! Waiting with bated breath for the next part. 😳

My favourite parts were how Sanam mentioned about Aahil on haystack 😆, and of course that gutter part about him pulling her real close against his body.😳 GOSH THEIR SEXUAL FRUSTRATION UGHHH. Just DO IT already. 😆

Glad Rehaan saw everything too. 😛 Sanam is such a baby. So innocent. And. Inexperienced. 😆

Is it weird how I was reminded of that rangoli scene from IPK in the wriggling part (where ASR fell from stool and Khushi saved him 😆) ? Gosh, I am a crazy IPK fan. 😆

Please read my comment. 😆