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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--



yeah I hate that Vishaal tooo

let's kill him
Bwahahahaha
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--



I love it soo don't feel bad at all😳

thank god and I thought...
I will continue doing it then 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
a very heart touching n emotional update...
zoya is really a strong n brave girl...
she faced all her problem n overcome all the horrible things in the past n became n self made women n fully independent strong n confidence women who know hw to fight for what is right...
zoya or her mother are not prostitute...
asad know the full truth about zoya nw...
zoya show the idiot jerk of vishaal his real place...
really hope their relationship will not break...
very interesting...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyKSGlover

let's kill him
Bwahahahaha


I love this pic🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: treasure11

Ummm...I just changed my mind coz it is mindblowing update and I can not stop myself😆
First of all HAPPY BIRTHDAY ONCE AGAIN SHREEYA 😳
Oh my am loving zoya more and more!!!What a women she is 👏Left right chapeed marrr di Vishal k muhh parrr !!!but but but...ku Vishal ko villian banaya 😭🥺
I loved that she fought for herself 👏Vo bilkul bhi bechari nahi hai👏
She is Loving Caring Mardani 😉women !!!😆
And when she started telling her story ...Zoya's emotions and her hesitancy was very well written 👏I was soo engrossed in reading ...read it again and again and there u and maha and maliha ankie were shouting at me 🤣...trust me I had not even read maha's comment then 😆
Okiee I got diverted ...ohh so her pics were taken
My poor girl was in such a dilema kaha jayee.kise batayee,a 17 year old girl didnt even have a shoulder to cry on and she was being forced and people called her prostitue 😡😭
She carried on not for her own self but for her sisters 😭What did she get in return ...all money went to that saxena bitch only 😡
And yes she stopped doing it when things were in her control 😳
Plzzz Plzzz make Asad break everyone's 🤬!!!!!!
I loved this part a lot lot lot...I dunno what to say about it but smaz ja .it was full of emotions and I dunno how to express how I feel about it !!😆

"I know you are not a prostitute and neither is your mother. Whatever you did was right at your place but the problem is that this wasn't the right place for you." He tried to assure her with his fingers running in her soft hair while she stopped struggling anymore. "People like Vishaal are just jealous of your success. He is a loser so he wants you to lose too. You know you are right so stay with it instead of letting haters spoil your life." He continued while she listened quietly. It wasn't anything new, she had spent half her life with the same morals but listening it from him was assuring her that she wasn't wrong ever. "Sometimes ignorance is the best slap on the faces of those who don't deserve a proper answer !"

"Let me go !" She said calmly this time just to show him that she was still angry on him. "You can go back to Germany. To your own normal world."

"Relax ! I am not going anywhere. We can talk about everything later. Just stop hurting yourself." He told her as he hugged her tightly, letting go her arms and she didn't know how but her hands moved up on their own accord and got wrapped around his neck. She buried her head in the crook of his neck and allowed herself to cry silently. He didn't mind it at all. He wanted her to let go all her pain if it was possible. She had never shared her feelings with anyone, not even Nisha as she couldn't see her guilty anymore.

Tears never stopped as she was finally having a shoulder to cry over for the first time. She knew she wasn't going to continue this relationship after whatever Vishaal pointed out but if this was their last meeting then she was ready to give in. She hugged him as tight as possible, ignoring her mind for some time. She didn't know how to let go her feelings which were yelling at her, calling this pair a 'mismatch' !


So she will end it and ASAD will punish her 😲😳😆


Aww and ur comment is more mind blowing than my update 🤗
yeah Vishaal ki besti hogyi achi wali 😎
story ki demand thi uska villain banna or else I would have never done this with ur Vishaal 😆
yeah I thought she should fight herself ,, Asad fighting for her is soo common now 😆
u idiot u were totally lost in reading and I had to send PMs --- I was waiting for u to edit all that 😡😆
haha thanks for loving it soo muchh ,,
I am honored that u enjoyed it soo much 😳😆
I am thinking to kill Mrs saxena in jail what do u suggest ?? 😆
Aww okie don't express I got it already 😎😆

is their anyone normal here who is not happy for their breakup ?? 🤔😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82

res

unres...

at last evything is out...

lettiing it out... is a big thing for zoya... for anybody who has such a bad past... but it will bring the relief...

i dont feel bad at all... for what zoya is thinking...


i trust asad... and ofcourse the rules...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

is it something... no backing of from one side... it is suppose to be mutual... if not asad threatned her with marriage...

zoya said something about dying...

waiting for the drama to unfold...

what happened to zoya ammi... she left siddique and went off.. isnt.. is she still alive...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


happy birthday shreya...🥳

yeah she finally shared her feelings and it was kinda big thing for her ,,
haha yeah the rules and the punishment is all the story is going to revolve around 😉
Yup its supposed to be mutual but se is gonna back off !!
yeah she is gonna die for sure and u r the only one I am revealing it 😳
Thanks !
Glad that you liked it 😊
well yes she left siddiqui and Zoya already hates her ,,
she is not gonna come back in the story Zoya is already having enough problem !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurchan7



Hi...bubble.iam a big fan of your writing.coming to this update it is a well written one.and by gusseing fromm the storyline i think rani mukhrjee's movie laaga chunri mai daag was also on same lines i think.and the rule broken was the last rule told by asad that she wont back off from their relationship without mutual agreement and we all know the punishment for it.keep up the good work


That means alot to me ❤️
ohh yeah I have watched that movie little bit because I am not much fan of Rani ,,
but yes its an awesome movie and I totally love the concept and everything about it
but this story is on a totally different world and here she is trapped unlike Rani in LCMD !!
Thanks !!
I am glad that u liked it 😳
haha yeah she is gonna be punished for sure 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SUCHARITA2014

nice but emotaniol updt


Thanks 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA

anazing iqra di !!! 😉😳

i m really really sorry for commenting late and not commenting frequently !
but its my 10 th class...
n exams r just 1 month away !
so i need to prepare !
n my parents hv restricted my net activity !
so sorry but i m reading all stories ...
those i get pmss...
so may be i dont hit like or comment but i m reading it !!
definetly !!!
but i m lovging it !
hope thing ss
sort out !!!!!!!😭


Thanks 😳
I am glad that u liked it !!
ohh its totally ok don't be sorry plzz ,,
best of luck for ur exams 👍🏼
things will sort out for sure between them !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Mrs.Saxsena she was a bitch 🤬...
Finally whole truth is out!!
Asad is nt judging her!!
Now i understand why Zoya did what she did!!!
Vishaal 🤬...
You said no one knows anything abt Zoya's family right??
How does vishaal knows her mother ?
Why did he accuse her mother 😕...
When will Zoasad will come out???
Nisha is a true friend!!!
Happy birthday once again Shreya🥳...
p.s my like button nt working 😔


Yes she is !!
yeah she was trapped badly back then
he doesn't know her mother ,,
he was just guessing and trying to insult her !!
Zosad is gonna come out in chapter 26 ,,
Aww its ok 😳
Thanks !!
I am glad that u liked it 😊

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