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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


I hope Dillu will b nice MIL now😉
its ok maine bahot praise joh ki this iss bar😆


yeah she will be nice one for sure 😳
haha yeah 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

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amazing amazing amazing update bubble,..😳
i just loved it,..
the early morning scene,.. zoya gone bonkers,.. i mean who call a sleeping Man on a weekend to ask for a date,.. the Early Bird,..
Buh on th other side this shows her honesty n eagerness to tell th truth to the one to whom she has started trusting,..
she is in ireeversible bond with her,..
though he trust her,.. buh still she wanna tell em each n everything..
you Go Mae Woman! you are on right track,..

ZOya is late and i wonder Why??

and Vishal Nanda?? Is he still alive on the planet??😲
i mean he was lost and he was supposed to be lost fah ever,.. The Troube Maker... and Male Home wrecker,..😡

He told Asad that Zoya's name is fake,..
buh couldnt he tell Asad that she was Zohurraa,..

ANd here comes th bitter reality in front of Asad,.. he was aware that Zoya had a painful past,.. buh i guess he never imagined it to be that worst,..
Feeling sorry fah both,..

ANd Zoya was late buh never too late,..
she heard whole convo,.. and i feel she would misunderstand Asad,..😒
Rule was broken unintentionally; undoubtedly !
here i guess you are talking about the trust wala Rule??
Amazingly written,.. 👏
Loved it,..❤️


Thank You Maliha 🤗
I am glad that you liked it !!
yeah poor guy when in a relationship can't even sleep on sundays
yup she wanted to tell him everything !!
she told him to go to sleep and she will be there ,, maybe she took time in getting ready for him 😳😆
he was always alive but u guys just forgot him 😡 thats why he came up to take revenge 😎
how would Vishaal know her name is Zohura ?? she never told him
yup even though u know already by now but still it was that rule for sure 😳
means alot to me !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

Why did you updat3 at 3rd place on page?? 😲

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update was just BANG ON,..👏👏
Amazingly written,..⭐️

So zoya heard everything,..
and Rule was broken unintentionally; undoubtedly! she thought this cox she was misunderstanding Asad's silence,..
she though that Asad aint trusting her,.. and has planned to go back to Berlin,..leaving Zoe behind,..
Aww mae silly grl,..

frstly she threw back all vishal's shit back on his face,..
Fab,.. sucha confident woman she is,..
though she is weak inside,.. fear of loosing her closed ones,.. make her weak,.
buh th shell outside her makes her stand... ALL strong,..

And now her reason of living in th drt is out,.. the pics thing,..
Stupid Mrs.Saxena,..😡
And Asad Mae Man,.. he never doubt her,.. he still trusts her,..
he was silent not cox he was doubting zoe,.. buh cox he was feeling more pain n love fah Zoe,..
i love this equation,..

Buh silly Zoya,..😡
what is this Last Time,,.Last Time,..
she must atleast give em a chance to justify,..

She is thinking that Asad broke th promise,.. buh i guess she is th one who is breaking promise,.. thinking of leaving em,..
i just wish asad punishes her...

WOW Update,..loved it,... Amazing!! ⭐️


I never wanted to update on 3rd place but they both posted with me at the same time
Thank You !!
I am glad that you liked it 😳
yeah even though he trusts her but still she doubts him and makes up things in her mind
yup she knows how to fight back 😎
and I intentionally didn't show Asad fighting for her to show that she isn't Zohura anymore 😆
Yup she was trapped badly !!
u r happy that she is leaving him just because he will punish her ?? 😲😆
means alot to me Maliha ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--


Thank You Maliha 🤗
I am glad that you liked it !!
yeah poor guy when in a relationship can't even sleep on sundays
yup she wanted to tell him everything !!
she told him to go to sleep and she will be there ,, maybe she took time in getting ready for him 😳😆
he was always alive but u guys just forgot him 😡 thats why he came up to take revenge 😎
how would Vishaal know her name is Zohura ?? she never told him
yup even though u know already by now but still it was that rule for sure 😳
means alot to me !!

🤗
sorry cox am hell late fah unresing,..
buh thanxGod that i did,.. cox i still have like 8-10 chaps of OEL resed,..🥱
Vishal isa failed actor,... i thought he committed suicide,..😆😆
didnt he know full past of ZOe?? like Mrs.Saxena thing?? and still was accusing her??
Stupid Soul,..😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--


I never wanted to update on 3rd place but they both posted with me at the same time
Thank You !!
I am glad that you liked it 😳
yeah even though he trusts her but still she doubts him and makes up things in her mind
yup she knows how to fight back 😎
and I intentionally didn't show Asad fighting for her to show that she isn't Zohura anymore 😆
Yup she was trapped badly !!
u r happy that she is leaving him just because he will punish her ?? 😲😆
means alot to me Maliha ❤️

i guess you should start competing fah yours' update place too,..
cox daily PMs wouldnt work afta few time,..😆
yes,..i was happy cox otherwise they must had waited fah years to agree fah th wedding,..🤓
when th punishments are sweet then there is no issue in doing sins,..😎
love yah Bubba,.. fah writing this FF,..❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

i guess you should start competing fah yours' update place too,..
cox daily PMs wouldnt work afta few time,..😆
yes,..i was happy cox otherwise they must had waited fah years to agree fah th wedding,..🤓
when th punishments are sweet then there is no issue in doing sins,..😎
love yah Bubba,.. fah writing this FF,..❤️


yeah I will do that from my next story
haha u r right 😆
aww love you tooo ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

🤗
sorry cox am hell late fah unresing,..
buh thanxGod that i did,.. cox i still have like 8-10 chaps of OEL resed,..🥱
Vishal isa failed actor,... i thought he committed suicide,..😆😆
didnt he know full past of ZOe?? like Mrs.Saxena thing?? and still was accusing her??
Stupid Soul,..😡


D'ohh don't be sorry 😳
haha yeah I remember that 🤓😆
well he was just jealous of Asad so was speaking out only negative things about Zoya's past !!

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