Th#7 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 21 to 24 - Page 108

cH22

Nice hot romance in the shower...
well she did try to tell him about her past not enough
courage...
well the end is nice... her drunk state...

Awesome update..





23..
Well now she knows asad knows.. listen to his words..
made her happy...
until vishal appear and screw them ..
before asad react..zoya start...


24.
Amazing update... zoya showed different face to vishal and asad...
she did put him at his place...
Asad just in shock... most of the people reaction
for something they never could imagine...
Zoya... she came out to find happiness.. even there is
risk in life... but her cross by evil...
she is young and vulnerable... she did what is right
at that moment.. to save.. it ..but at time goes by
she become stronger...if nisha did not come that day..
maybe zoya ..would have never found freedom in her life..
just like her there others out there... not everyone get 2nd chance
so still pure in her heart... what happen to her
she is victim .. (no mothers too)

Originally posted by: Linsie

Ch 21

Well... so cute after the confess...
both want to be together... typical...
the bar... moment.. she declare he as a BF

and then some piece of her past... he knows how deep
she is hurt... now he only wish for her
happiness...

🤣 love u butt

Originally posted by: Linsie

cH22

Nice hot romance in the shower...
well she did try to tell him about her past not enough
courage...
well the end is nice... her drunk state...

Awesome update..





23..
Well now she knows asad knows.. listen to his words..
made her happy...
until vishal appear and screw them ..
before asad react..zoya start...


24.
Amazing update... zoya showed different face to vishal and asad...
she did put him at his place...
Asad just in shock... most of the people reaction
for something they never could imagine...
Zoya... she came out to find happiness.. even there is
risk in life... but her cross by evil...
she is young and vulnerable... she did what is right
at that moment.. to save.. it ..but at time goes by
she become stronger...if nisha did not come that day..
maybe zoya ..would have never found freedom in her life..
just like her there others out there... not everyone get 2nd chance
so still pure in her heart... what happen to her
she is victim .. (no mothers too)

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

OMG Jas I really don't know what to say but I am really happy that u finally r satisfied with my story !!

its seriously more than enough for me I feel like dancing 😆

see I told u to wait and I can't leak my story but u never got my point 😆

yeah Zoya is a gem ,,

she did all for her pathetic family !!

and like u all I am also proud of this character of mine ❤️

haha she never sits calmly in these kinda situations remember how she broke down after their first kiss ?? She is not gonna think positive for sure

I hope u don't mean the literal meaning of 'sleep' because noo they r not gonna sleep together as she hates him right now and on the other hand he won't take advantage of her emotional state !!

Aww I would hve surely added that scene but the thing is that if I add it then she will think more negative about him as she is hating him right now ..,,

she will think that he never loved her but Zohura only

Yup she is never gonna get it from Asad's family and noo her mother can't come back because just to remind u then Razia told everyone in the society that Zohura is dead soo if her mother is alive somewhere then she thinks Zohura is dead and moreover her mother was least bothered about her 😡

ohh don't explain I know ur POV that note was not for u but some other pathetic silent reader who commented in last update but is not showing up now !!

haha yeah this is longer than that one I guess sooo yup I appreciate it

Thanks for such a lovely comment Jas !!

love you loads 🤗

Nyc update.
Plz continue soon.
I wanted to see asya hug nd romance *pout*

Originally posted by: jas91

So sorry 4 replying super late😳

Chalo u happy toh i m happy 2😆😉

yeah but u could have said its not d whole truth

Well about Zoya's mom i guess u didn't revealed if she was also bad or not but if its about leaving behind Zoya than its also possible that she wanted 2 take her but Guffi didn't allowed & she had enough of Guffi so decided 2 leave but couldn't take Zoya along😉

yeah confusion dur karna meri plz

Aur as i already told u Zoya should go 2 some1 so that should b her Mom cuz Guffi was bad as we already know😊

ur welcome😃

Love u 2

Originally posted by: MagsDhingra

Nyc update.
Plz continue soon.
I wanted to see asya hug nd romance *pout*

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

haha same here 😳😆

I just wanted to keep it all a surprise !!

well I did clear in chapter 3 I guess that she was not a good mother and was least bothered about her thats why she left her !!

haha noo she needs to stay alone only its a dark story 😆 well but Asad is there for her to take away all her sorrows !!

Originally posted by: jas91

Acha cahlo i have 2 manage wid that but i would have been happy if her mother would b nice & gets back wid her😉😆

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

I am gonna show up something like she will get her parents love from that old age home 😳

and sorry I had to cut ur comment it was getting long